The Staring Chimney

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"I was seven when the blanket first slid off my legs. It wasn’t a draft; it was a deliberate pull, like someone yanked the corner and let go. I yanked it back, but it happened again, and again, until I was sitting up, shivering, staring at the dark shape by the door. It was tall, […]"

I was seven when the blanket first slid off my legs. It wasn’t a draft; it was a deliberate pull, like someone yanked the corner and let go. I yanked it back, but it happened again, and again, until I was sitting up, shivering, staring at the dark shape by the door. It was tall, wearing a wide-brimmed hat that hid its face, and a long coat that brushed the floor. I screamed for Mom, and she came running, flicking on the light. The shape was gone, but she saw the fear in my eyes. She knelt by my bed and said, ‘If it comes back, you tell it to leave you alone. Say it loud and firm.’ I nodded, not understanding, but I remembered.

The next night, it came again. The blanket slid, and I saw it standing at the foot of my bed. I took a breath and shouted, ‘LEAVE ME ALONE!’ My voice cracked, but the figure tilted its head, then stepped back into the shadows. Mom, hearing the shout, rushed in. She nodded, satisfied. The next day, she called a priest? No, she called an old woman from the church who said the house needed to be ‘cedared.’ She burned cedar branches in every room, filling the air with a sharp, smoky smell. For three months, the house felt lighter. The Thing didn’t come.

But it came back, as things like that always do. I was ten, playing with my little brother, Leo, who was four. We were in the living room, building a tower of blocks, when Leo pointed behind me. I turned. It was there, walking out of my bedroom, down the hall, and into Mom’s room. I froze. Leo started to cry. I told him to be quiet, that it was okay. Then it walked out of Mom’s room, down the hall, and stopped in front of the fireplace. It stood there, staring at the chimney, for what felt like two minutes. Then it vanished. I looked at Leo. He was pale, but he didn’t scream again. He just whispered, ‘He’s looking for something.’

That was the pattern. It came, it walked, it stared at the chimney, it left. For seven years, it continued. My mom started to believe it was a protector. She said it was watching over us, keeping bad things away. I wasn’t so sure. It felt more like a sentinel, waiting for something to come down that chimney.

Four years after we first saw it, my grandpa died. He was in the hospital, quiet, and then gone. A few weeks later, Mom and I were in the kitchen, and I heard it: a low, raspy voice calling her name. ‘Martha.’ It came from the hallway. Mom froze, her eyes wide. She looked at me, and I saw fear in her eyes. She said, ‘That’s your grandpa.’ She went to the hallway, but no one was there. It happened again, a few times a year, always that same voice, calling her name like he was trying to get her attention. Four years after that, my grandma died. Now, we sometimes hear two voices, calling to each other, as if they’re searching.

The cowboy, we called it, though it never wore a cowboy hat, just a wide brim that made it seem old-fashioned. It still comes. Last week, I watched it from the doorway as it did its usual walk. It stopped at the fireplace, and for the first time, it turned its head. Its face was a void, but I felt it look at me. Then it pointed at the chimney. I looked up. There was nothing there. But the next day, I found soot on the hearth, even though we hadn’t lit a fire. And I heard a voice, not my grandfather’s, but a stranger’s, whisper, ‘He’s coming.’

Mom is convinced it’s all a blessing. She says the cowboy and the voices are our ancestors, protecting us. But I lie in bed at night, watching the blanket at the foot of my bed. It hasn’t moved in months. That’s what scares me. Because if the protector is gone, then what is it guarding against? And why did it stare at the chimney for so long? I think it was waiting. And now, I think I know what it was waiting for, because last night, I heard the brick of the chimney shift. And the voice said, ‘Leave me alone.’ But it wasn’t my voice. It was the cowboy’s. And he wasn’t saying it to me. He was saying it to whatever is coming down.

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