The Last Compartment

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"It happened two winters ago, when I was returning home with my parents from a family wedding in the hills. We had booked a sleeper compartment on the night train to the plains. The station was nearly empty, and the train pulled in with a hiss of steam, its windows glowing faintly in the pre-dawn […]"

It happened two winters ago, when I was returning home with my parents from a family wedding in the hills. We had booked a sleeper compartment on the night train to the plains. The station was nearly empty, and the train pulled in with a hiss of steam, its windows glowing faintly in the pre-dawn gloom.

We found our compartment at the end of the last coach. It was a relic from another era, with worn leather seats and a brass fan that creaked overhead. There were four berths: two on one side, two on the other. I took the lower berth near the window, my father took the upper on the same side, and my mother took the upper across from me. The lower berth across from me remained empty.

As the train groaned into motion, I pulled the heavy green curtain across the window, shutting out the silent, snow-dusted platform. The compartment fell into a dull amber darkness, lit only by a weak bulb near the door. My parents settled quickly, their breathing deepening into sleep. I, too, lay down, pulling a thick blanket over my head, hiding from the chill that seeped through the wooden walls.

I must have drifted off, but it was not restful sleep. I dreamt of a long corridor filled with locked doors, each one creaking open as I passed, revealing nothing but blackness. Then I was standing in a field of tall, dry grass, and a great shadow fell over me, blocking the sun. I woke with a start, my heart pounding.

I was still under the blanket, cocooned in warmth and darkness. I wanted to peek out, but something made me stay still. Then I heard a sound—a slow, rhythmic breathing, not my own. It was close, too close, as if someone were sitting on my berth, right beside my feet.

Fear clamped my throat. I could feel the slight dip of the mattress under an extra weight. A chill crawled up my spine. I gathered my courage and moved the blanket just a fraction, enough to see through the gap at the bottom.

In the dim light from the corridor, I saw a shape—a massive, squat silhouette, like a boulder with arms. It was sitting facing me, but I could not see its face, for it was cloaked in deeper darkness. My mind raced. Could it be my father? But his berth was above, and he was not that heavy. My mother was asleep across on the upper. The fourth berth was empty.

I stared at that shadow for what felt like an eternity, my breath shallow, my eyes wide. It did not move. It was just there, solid, real. The train jolted over a switch, and the silhouette dipped slightly, as if adjusting its weight. It was definitely there.

Then, from above, my father’s phone rang. It was a harsh, jarring sound. I heard my father stir and answer, his voice groggy. The silhouette did not move. My father spoke a few sleepy words, then the call ended. The silence returned.

I could not bear it anymore. With trembling fingers, I tore the blanket from my face and sat up, ready to confront the intruder. But the berth was empty. No shadow. No weight. The other lower berth was still vacant. My father was on his upper, phone in hand, just putting it away. My mother was still asleep.

I rubbed my eyes, convinced it had been a nightmare. I lay back down, but I could not shake the feeling that something was wrong. As the train rounded a bend, the window curtain fluttered, and I caught a glimpse of the outside—a dark, blurry landscape rushing past. And in the reflection, for just a second, I saw a fat, dark figure sitting on the empty berth across from me, its head tilted, as if watching me.

I spun around, but the berth was empty. My skin crawled. I did not sleep again that night. I kept the blanket at my chin, watching the empty berth until dawn broke.

When the light finally seeped through the curtain, I saw that, on the empty berth, there was a small, dark stain. It looked like old, dried blood. My father, seeing my face, asked what was wrong. I told him I had seen a shadow. He laughed it off, saying it was a dream.

But as we descended at our station, I looked back at our compartment. The train was already pulling away, and I saw a face pressed against the window of that same compartment—a round, pale face with hollow eyes. It was there for only a moment, then the train disappeared around a curve.

I never spoke of it again to my parents. But sometimes, late at night, I feel a weight on the edge of my bed, and I hear that rhythmic breathing, and I know that the last compartment is never truly empty.

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