The Unseen Viewer

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"I remember the summer I stayed with my grandmother in her old farmhouse in the Scottish Highlands. The house was a sprawling, creaking structure that had been in our family for generations, surrounded by fields of heather and a forest that seemed to close in at dusk. I was seventeen, and my grandmother, a stoic […]"

I remember the summer I stayed with my grandmother in her old farmhouse in the Scottish Highlands. The house was a sprawling, creaking structure that had been in our family for generations, surrounded by fields of heather and a forest that seemed to close in at dusk. I was seventeen, and my grandmother, a stoic woman with a sharp eye and a softer heart than she let on, had invited me to spend the season there, away from the city and my parents’ constant bickering.

One evening, I walked back from a neighbor’s cottage where I’d been helping with repairs. The sun had dipped low, casting long shadows across the moor. I hadn’t meant to stay so long, but the neighbor’s wife had insisted I try her rhubarb pie, and one slice turned into three. By the time I trudged through the back door, the kitchen smelled of boiled potatoes and salted fish—Grandmother’s usual fare.

She was at the sink, her hands deep in a basin of cold water, cleaning the fish she’d caught earlier from the stream. Her back was to me, and she was humming a tune I didn’t recognize. I called out, ‘Grandmother, I’m home. Going to lie down for a bit,’ and she turned, nodding, her eyes scanning me briefly. I felt a chill as I headed to my room, but I was tired and dismissed it.

I collapsed onto my bed, the old springs groaning under me, and fell into a dreamless sleep. The next thing I knew, the bedroom door was banging open, and Grandmother stood in the doorway, her face pale and her hand trembling as she clutched the doorframe. ‘What is it?’ I mumbled, but she just stared at me, her lips quivering. She had seen me—or something that looked like me—pass by the kitchen doorway and head to the living room. She had called my name, twice, and received no answer, so she went to the living room to find the television on, flickering static, and no one there.

My blood turned to ice. I looked at her, and she looked at me, and we both knew something was wrong. She led me to the living room, and the television was still on, a pale blue glow casting weird shapes on the worn carpet. The remote lay on the coffee table where she always kept it, untouched. The static seemed to pulse, and for a moment, I thought I saw a shape coalesce in the grey fuzz—a silhouette that, for a heartbeat, wore my face.

I quickly switched the TV off, and the silence that followed was oppressive. Grandmother whispered, ‘That’s not the first time. A fortnight ago, I saw you walk to the pantry, but you were in your room reading. And last Thursday, I heard you giggling in the hall, though you were out fishing with old Mr. McCree.’ She clutched her cardigan tighter, her knuckles white. I felt a sinking in my stomach, a primal fear that we were not alone in the house.

That night, I couldn’t sleep. Every creak and groan of the old house sent my heart racing. I heard a faint rustle from the hallway, the soft pad of bare feet on wood, and then the television clicked on again. I crept to my door and peeked out. The living room was dark, save for the flickering blue glow. And there, sitting in my Grandmother’s armchair, was a figure that looked exactly like me—my same hair, my same clothes, my same hunched posture. It was watching the static, its head tilted slightly, as if caught in a trance.

I wanted to yell, to charge in, but I was frozen. Panic pulsed through me, and I slammed my door shut, locking it. I huddled under my covers, trembling, until dawn. When morning came, I found Grandmother in the kitchen, her face drawn and weary. She admitted, in a low voice, that she had always sensed a presence in the house—a previous occupant, perhaps, who had died alone and whose spirit lingered. But she’d never seen it take a form so clearly before. It wore my likeness because it had latched onto me, the newest and most vulnerable soul in the house.

We searched the house that day, looking for anything unusual. In the attic, beneath a loose floorboard, I found an old daguerreotype of a young man from the late 1800s, standing in front of this very house, with a face that seemed strangely familiar. As I stared at it, I realized with a jolt that his features mirrored mine—the same sharp cheekbones, the same lopsided smile. My Grandmother gasped, recognizing the man as her great-uncle James, who had gone mad and killed himself in this very house. The doppelganger was his restless soul, imitating those it deemed its kin.

We burned the photograph, but that evening, as the sun set over the moors, I felt a cold presence behind me. I turned slowly, and there it was again, my own reflection in the window, but it smiled at me with a malicious grin, one I had never made. It raised its hand and pressed its palm against the glass, and on the other side, my own hand mirrored the gesture, but I felt nothing. The glass frosted where it touched, and in the condensation, it wrote a single word: ‘Stay.’

That summer, I didn’t leave. I couldn’t. Every time I packed my bags, something would go wrong—my keys would vanish, my car would refuse to start, or I would feel a cold hand on my shoulder and turn to see no one. Grandmother grew sickly, bedridden, and I had to care for her, trapped by an invisible leash. It wasn’t until harvest season, when the first frost came, that the doppelganger appeared to me one last time, wearing my face and Grandmother’s dressing gown. It pointed to the grandfather clock, and suddenly I understood: it wanted a new host. It wanted to be the one to walk out of this house at summer’s end.

I looked at the clock, its pendulum swinging like a scythe, and I made a choice. I grabbed the old axe from the shed, the one with the rusty blade, and I swung at the mirror that hung in the hallway. It shattered into a thousand pieces, and with it, I felt a release. The doppelganger screamed in a voice that wasn’t mine, and the temperature in the house plummeted. Grandmother passed away that night, peaceful in her sleep, and in the morning, the house was still. The TV never turned on by itself again.

I left the Highlands soon after, but I have never shaken the feeling that something watched me from the windows as I drove away. And sometimes, late at night, when I see my own reflection in a blank screen, I wonder if it’s still out there, waiting to come back, wearing my face.

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