The Unpainted Floor

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"I was eleven when my lungs decided to betray me. The doctors called it a severe case of pneumonia, but to me, it was just a long, boring stretch of white walls and the faint antiseptic smell that clung to everything. The hospital was called St. Dymphna’s, a sprawling maze of corridors and wings that […]"

I was eleven when my lungs decided to betray me. The doctors called it a severe case of pneumonia, but to me, it was just a long, boring stretch of white walls and the faint antiseptic smell that clung to everything. The hospital was called St. Dymphna’s, a sprawling maze of corridors and wings that seemed to go on forever. I hated it. I hated the beeping monitors and the nurses who spoke to me like I was a child, and the way the sun never seemed to reach the lower floors. But then I met Elara.

Elara was twelve, with hair the color of autumn leaves and a laugh that made the sterile hallways feel alive. We met on my second day, in the dingy playroom where the TV only got static. She had a broken leg from a car accident, but that didn’t slow her down. She dragged me in a wheelchair, despite my protests, to explore every nook and cranny of that hospital. We counted the floors, visited the cafeteria, even snuck a peek at the maternity ward, where I saw a row of pink bundles and wondered if they dreamed. It was fun, the most fun I’d had in months. But there was one place we never went, and the nurses were very clear about that.

‘Don’t go to the eighth floor,’ a stern nurse named Ms. Albright told us, her eyes narrowing. ‘It’s restricted. Off-limits. Understood?’

We nodded, but as soon as she was gone, Elara whispered, ‘What’s up there?’

‘I don’t know,’ I said. ‘Maybe it’s just storage.’

‘Storage doesn’t need a locked door,’ she pointed out. Because we’d noticed the elevator button for floor eight was dimmed, and the stairwell door had a chain and a padlock. That was enough to kindle our curiosity. We spent the rest of the day scheming, but we were too tired to try anything. That night, I couldn’t sleep. My lungs hurt, my head ached. I kept thinking about that forbidden floor. At 3 a.m., I decided to go to Elara’s room, which was two doors down. I crept out of my bed, barefoot, in my flimsy hospital gown. The corridor was dimly lit, the night shift quiet. I pushed open her door, and she was wide awake, sitting up in bed.

‘Couldn’t sleep either?’ she asked, and I shook my head. ‘Let’s do it,’ she said, her eyes gleaming. ‘Let’s see what’s on floor eight.’

I hesitated. But the thrill of adventure won. We snuck out, moving as quietly as we could. The elevator was just across the hall. We pressed the button, and the doors slid open with a soft chime. We stepped inside, and I pressed the button for floor eight. It didn’t light up. I pressed it again, and nothing. The elevator just sat there, humming. Then Elara noticed something: a small, almost invisible keyhole beneath the button panel. ‘Maybe the maintenance key?’ she mused, but we didn’t have one. Frustrated, I did the only thing I could think of: I pressed the button for the seventh floor, planning to take the stairs. The elevator began to move.

The ride was slow, the floor numbers ticking by. Six… seven. The doors opened, and we stepped out. The seventh floor looked the same as the others: long hallway, white walls, doors. But at the end, there was a door marked ‘STAIRS’. We pushed it open, and inside, it was pitch black. Elara had a small flashlight from her emergency kit. She clicked it on, and we saw a cramped stairwell leading up and down. ‘Eighth floor is just one floor up,’ she said. We started climbing, our footsteps echoing in the concrete. The door at the top was unlocked.

We pushed it open, and stepped into a darkness so thick it felt like a blanket. Elara’s flashlight beam cut a narrow path, revealing a hallway that looked older than the rest of the hospital. The walls were bare, unpainted concrete, and the air was cold, with a smell like wet earth and mold. There were no doors along the walls, just a long corridor that seemed to stretch on forever. At the end, there was a single door, closed. ‘Maybe it’s a laboratory,’ I whispered.

Elara took a step forward, and the flashlight flickered. She shook it, and it steadied, but I felt a sudden chill that had nothing to do with the temperature. As we walked, I noticed the floor was scratched, as if something heavy had been dragged along it. And on the walls, there were faint stains, dark and rusty. I tried not to look. We reached the door. It was made of heavy metal, with a small window covered in grime. Elara pushed it open, and we stepped into a large room.

The room was a hospital ward, but unlike any I’d seen. The beds were old, with iron frames, and in each bed lay a figure. At first, I thought they were patients, but as Elara’s light swept across them, I saw they were mummified. Their skin was dark and leathery, their eyes sunken, their mouths open in silent screams. Their limbs were twisted, as if they had died in agony. And the walls… the walls were covered in writing, in a language I didn’t recognize, but I could feel the fear in it, a primal terror that made my stomach drop.

We stumbled back, and that’s when I heard it: a low, guttural whisper from behind us. We spun around, but there was nothing. The whisper grew louder, coming from all directions. ‘Get out,’ it seemed to say. ‘Get out.’

We ran. We didn’t look back. We burst through the stairwell door, slammed it shut, and didn’t stop until we were back in the elevator, pressing the button for my floor. We collapsed against the walls, panting, shaking. ‘What was that?’ I asked, my voice trembling.

Elara was pale. ‘I don’t know. But we can’t tell anyone.’

The elevator doors opened on my floor. We went back to our rooms, and neither of us slept the rest of the night. The next day, we avoided the eighth floor entirely. We never spoke of it, but I couldn’t shake the image of those bodies, the whispers that echoed in my mind. I spent the next few days in a daze, my recovery slowing. The doctors thought it was a complication, but I knew better.

A week later, I was discharged, and I never saw Elara again. I went home, and life went back to normal. But sometimes, in the dead of night, I wake up feeling cold, and I smell that scent of wet earth and mold. And I hear the whispers, faint and far away, calling from somewhere deep within the hospital. I’ve done my research. St. Dymphna’s was built on the site of an old asylum, and the eighth floor was originally the chronic ward, where they sent the incurables. Patients disappeared there, and death was a constant. But I think something worse than death happened there. I don’t know what they did in that room, but I know that the hospital buried it, locked it away, and forgot it. But the dead don’t forget.

And somewhere, in that forgotten floor, the whispers continue. They wait for the curious, the brave, the foolish. They wait for someone like Elara and me. And when they find them, they whisper a promise: ‘You can never truly leave.’ I’ve been out of that hospital for years, but I still feel its pull. I still dream of that day. And I know that one day, I’ll have to go back. Because the eighth floor isn’t just a place. It’s a door. And I opened it.

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