The Pale Woman by the Cot

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"My great-aunt Marta was the one who told me this, years after the family had buried the memory of it. She was a practical woman, a farmer’s wife, not given to fancies. But there are things she saw with her own eyes that she carried to her grave. This is the tale as she gave […]"

My great-aunt Marta was the one who told me this, years after the family had buried the memory of it. She was a practical woman, a farmer’s wife, not given to fancies. But there are things she saw with her own eyes that she carried to her grave. This is the tale as she gave it to me, and I give it to you as best I can.

Marta and her husband Tomas lived on a secluded homestead at the edge of a vast, whispering marsh. Their home was a sturdy stone cottage, but the marsh crept up to their fence line, a shifting expanse of reeds and black water that bred a constant low drone of insects. Marta had always possessed a ‘sight’, as she called it. Not a gift, she insisted, but a burden. She saw things that slipped between the seams of the world, usually harmless, often sad. After her fifth child, a boy named Stefan, was born, she began to see the woman. She would appear in the periphery of Marta’s vision: a pale figure in a threadbare grey dress, standing motionless at the edge of the marsh or in the doorway of the barn. Marta never felt threatened, only a deep, unsettling wrongness. The woman’s face was a smudge, as if the artist had smeared the paint before it dried, but her form was painfully sharp.

The trouble began when Stefan started to stir in his cot. Every night, at the same hour, he would wake with a breathless, piercing cry that cut through the still air. Marta would rise, her heart pounding, and lift him into her own bed, where he would quiet against her warmth, his small fists clutching her nightgown. She told herself it was colic, or nightmares, but a cold knot of unease tightened in her stomach each time she saw the woman in the corner of her eye. The woman was always closer to the house now, her posture one of desperate attention.

One night, the cries were worse, a frantic, choked sound that brought Marta from her bed with a sudden certainty that she was going to see something. The oil lamp on the nightstand was low, casting long shadows. She crossed the room, the floorboards cold under her bare feet. As she approached the cot, she saw the woman. She was standing at the head of the cot, leaning over the rail, her face almost touching the bars. Her hand, impossibly long and pale, was reaching through the slats, hovering over Stefan’s head. Marta froze. For the first time, she saw the eyes: two soulless white pits. And the mouth, a black slash, was open, as if about to speak.

The woman turned her head toward Marta, and the movement was wrong, like a puppet on tangled strings. Her mouth stretched wider, impossibly wide, and a sound came out, not a voice, but a low, wet gargle, like mud swallowing. Marta felt a primal terror unlike anything she had ever known. She lunged for the cot, snatching Stefan into her arms. The woman recoiled, her form flickering, and for a moment, her face became clear. It was a face of grief so profound, so ancient, that Marta felt a wave of pity cut through her fear. Then the woman faded, like mist dissolving in the morning sun, leaving only the smell of damp earth and rotting reeds.

Stefan was fine. He was sleeping in Marta’s arms, his breaths even and soft. But Marta knew in that instant that the woman had come for her son. Not to harm him, but to take him, to claim him as her own. From that night, Marta’s life was a war of vigilance. She slept with Stefan beside her, her hand always on his chest. She burned salt and sage, hung iron above the door, but the woman returned, always at the edge of sight, always silent, her head tilted in that grotesque way, her hand outstretched. The marsh seemed to press closer, its drone a constant, mournful hum.

When Stefan began to walk, the occurrences grew more frequent. He would be found in corners, talking to the empty air, laughing at things Marta could not see. His drawings were a child’s scribbles, but sometimes, in the corners, there were impressions of a tall, grey figure. Marta sent him to her sister, Anna, in the city, for two weeks during the worst of it, hoping distance would break the connection. But even there, he woke at night screaming, pointing at the window. Anna returned him to Marta, pale and shaken, saying the boy talked of a ‘lady in the reeds’.

Desperate, Marta consulted an old woman, a healer who lived deep in the marsh, a crone known for dealing with the unsettled dead. The crone listened, her rheumy eyes fixed on a corner of her hut, and then spoke in a low, rough voice. ‘The woman is a mother, one who lost a child in this very water, long ago. A fever took her babe, and she drowned herself here. Her soul never left. She sees in your boy what she lost. She does not mean harm, but her need is a cold, hungry thing. It will not be reasoned with. It will only feed.’

The crone gave Marta a talisman, a small pouch of herbs and a piece of bone. ‘Wear this on the boy,’ she said. ‘It will make him invisible to her. But be warned: the more she looks, the more she wants. One day, the cord will be cut, but not by her hand.’

Stefan wore the pouch, and the visions stopped. The night cries ceased. The woman’s presence faded, like a memory losing its shape. The family breathed a sigh of relief, believing the trial was over. Marta, however, remained vigilant. She would often stand at the window, staring into the marsh, and sometimes she saw a ripple on the water where no wind blew.

Years passed. Stefan grew into a strong, quiet young man, who had a peculiar stillness about him, a tendency to stare at nothing. He worked the land, married a local girl, and had a child of his own. The woman was a half-remembered nightmare, a story told at harvest gatherings. The talisman remained hidden in a drawer, dusty and forgotten. Marta, old and tired, thought the battle was won. She was wrong.

One evening, when the mist rolled in thick from the marsh, Marta’s granddaughter, Klara, who was about Stefan’s age when the troubles began, came running to the house, her face ashen. ‘Stefan’s little boy, Olek,’ she gasped. ‘He’s at the marsh’s edge. He won’t come away. He says someone is calling his name, a lady in a grey dress.’

Marta’s blood turned to ice. She ran, her old legs threatening to give way, to the place where the reeds grew tall and the water was deep. She saw the boy, three years old, standing alone, staring into the dense fog. She called his name, but he did not move. And then, through the mist, she saw her. The pale woman, clearer than ever, her face a mask of longing, her arms outstretched. She was speaking, soft and low, a lullaby that seemed to come from the marsh itself. And in that moment, Marta knew the truth. The battle had never been for Stefan; it had been a holding action. The woman had only been waiting, patient and eternal, for the next one.

Marta reached Olek, scooping him into her arms, but the woman did not recede this time. She fixed Marta with those white eyes, and this time, the mouth spoke. A clear, human voice, filled with an infinite sadness: ‘You have taken from me,’ she said. ‘Now I take from you.’

Marta clutched Olek and ran. She stumbled into the house, slammed the door, and lit every candle she could find. But when she turned, Olek was limp in her arms. He was breathing, but his eyes were open, staring at nothing, and his lips were moving, silently, as if singing a lullaby she could not hear. The talisman, she realized, was still in that drawer, and it was her granddaughter, not Olek, who should have worn it. The boy had never been protected.

They called the doctor, but he found nothing wrong. They called the priest, but no words could reach the boy. He lived, but he was not there. He would sit for hours by the window, gazing toward the marsh, and sometimes he would smile and wave at the empty air. As he grew, he spoke of the lady as a friend, a comforting presence. But Marta saw what others did not. She saw the grey dress in every shadow, the pale face in every reflection. The woman had finally claimed her child.

Marta died a few years later, a sad, quiet death. On her tombstone, she had carved a single line: ‘The marsh keeps its own.’ And the woman? She is still there, standing by the edge of the water, watching the house, waiting for the next family to forget the old warning, waiting for another child who is not hers.

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