The Hollow Between

8 min read

Story Premise 8 min read (1,513 words)

"For three weeks, my nephew Leo had been fighting sleep like it was a war he was losing. At first, my sister Mira thought it was just teenage angst, the usual nonsense of a seventeen-year-old whose world was shrinking to the size of his phone screen. But then the night terrors started. Leo would stumble […]"

For three weeks, my nephew Leo had been fighting sleep like it was a war he was losing. At first, my sister Mira thought it was just teenage angst, the usual nonsense of a seventeen-year-old whose world was shrinking to the size of his phone screen. But then the night terrors started. Leo would stumble into the kitchen at 2 AM, hollow-eyed, muttering about a figure in his room—a black thing that would perch on his chest, pinning him down, stealing his breath. He said it would rattle his bedframe, then scramble up the wall like a spider, fixing him with a blazing red gaze that burned into his skull. Every night. Always the same. Mira had bought a nightlight, the kind shaped like a star, and placed it in the hallway outside his room, as if light alone could keep the dark at bay. But the light did nothing. Leo still refused to go to bed until dawn, when the first pale gray of morning bled through the curtains. Sunday, I drove over to Mira’s place while the men were out on their annual deer hunt, the cabin quiet without their boots and grumbling. We sat at the kitchen table, sipping burnt coffee, and she finally spoke about the room.

‘I feel it, Sera,’ she said, her voice thin. ‘When I go in to change the sheets or grab a charger, there’s this… weight. Like someone’s standing behind me, but when I turn, nothing.’ She rubbed her arms, as if the chill was still there. ‘I thought I was going crazy, but Leo’s been seeing it, so it’s got to be real.’ I nodded. I’d always had the knack—a family trait, Gran used to call it. I could sense presences, the remnants of things that shouldn’t be. I’d never seen them, not like Leo, but I could feel them like a cold spot in a warm room. ‘Let me take a look,’ I said, pushing back from the table. Mira’s house was a renovated farmhouse on the edge of a pine forest, the kind of place that had stood for a hundred years, collecting creaks and whispers. Leo’s room was at the end of the upstairs hall, the door painted a chipped navy blue. The moment I turned the knob, a wave of cold washed over me, so sharp it made my teeth ache. I stepped inside. The room was ordinary enough—clothes on the floor, a gaming chair, posters of bands I didn’t recognize. But the air felt wrong, thick, as if the space itself was holding its breath. My skin prickled. Goosebumps raced up my arms. I walked to the center of the room, where the bed sat beneath a window. The cold intensified, settling at the foot of the mattress. I closed my eyes, reaching out with my senses, the way Gran had taught me. I felt a pressure, a hunger, a malevolence that had latched onto this spot. It was waiting. And it knew I was there. I opened my eyes and scanned the room, looking for anything out of place. Then I saw it—in the corner, near the ceiling, a darker patch, like a film of oil on the wall. It shimmered, barely visible. ‘Mira,’ I called, keeping my voice steady. ‘Get me a flashlight, and a box of salt.’ Mira brought them, looking pale. I sprinkled a line of salt across the threshold, a barrier, then shone the flashlight into the corner. The dark patch rippled, and I swear I saw two red dots flash for a fraction of a second. I felt a surge of rage, of malice, and then it was gone. The cold lifted. But I knew it wasn’t over. It had only retreated. I spent the rest of the day researching, searching old county records, and calling Gran’s old contacts, the ones who dealt with this sort of thing. I learned that the land the farmhouse sat on had been a crossroads of sorts, a place where a failed farmer had hung himself in the barn back in the 1880s, leaving behind a note that cursed the soil. The hollow between the living and the dead was thin here. And something had slipped through.

That night, I stayed. I told Mira to take Leo to her room, to keep him close. I would sleep in Leo’s bed, to draw the thing out. I didn’t tell her I was terrified. At midnight, I lay in the dark, the nightlight from the hall casting a faint blue glow through the crack under the door. The salt line gleamed like a silver snake. I waited. The house settled, pipes ticking, wind moaning. And then I heard it: a scratching, soft, like nails on plaster. It came from the ceiling. I looked up, and the entire ceiling seemed to bulge, a black mass pressing down, bloating, and then it dropped. It landed on the bed with a weight that made the springs groan, and I felt it—a pressure on my chest, cold as January, crushing the breath from my lungs. I couldn’t move. I couldn’t scream, only managed a strangled gasp. Its face was inches from mine, a void with two burning embers for eyes. The smell of rot filled my nostrils. It started to squeeze, my ribs creaking, my vision tunneling. I panicked, clawing at it, but my hands passed through nothing. I thought I was going to die, but then I remembered Gran’s lessons. I forced my mind to still, whispering inside my head, ‘You are not welcome here. This house is protected.’ The thing’s grip faltered. Its eyes flared brighter, as if in rage, and it opened a mouth that was a pit of blackness, emitting a soundless scream. I focused on the salt line, on the light. I repeated my chant, and with each word, the pressure lightened. The creature scrambled off me, hissing like steam, and scurried up the wall to the corner. It stared at me, those red eyes boring into my soul. And then it spoke, not in words, but in images—a flash of Leo as a child, his mother, his future. A promise. ‘I will take him,’ it seemed to say. And then it vanished.

I lay there, gasping, drenched in sweat. I didn’t sleep the rest of the night. At dawn, I went downstairs, where Mira was curled on the couch, Leo beside her, miraculously asleep. She looked up, her face tight with worry. ‘It happened, didn’t it?’ I nodded. ‘But it’s gone for now. I need to do something permanent.’ I spent the next two days preparing: I gathered iron nails, a silver cross, and herbs—sage, rosemary, and juniper. I waited for the third night, when the moon was a sliver. I had a plan. That night, I entered Leo’s room alone. The air was cold again, but I welcomed it. I placed the cross above the door, hammered iron nails into each corner of the floor, and lit a bundle of sage, letting the smoke fill every corner. I chanted, not in Latin, but in the old tongue Gran had taught me, a warding prayer. The room grew darker, the smoke swirling, and from the corner, the black mass reemerged, screaming with rage. I stood my ground. ‘You have no hold here,’ I shouted. ‘This bloodline is under my protection. Leave now, or be bound to this earth forever, a prisoner of your own hunger.’ The creature lunged at me, a wave of pure malice. I thrust the cross forward, and it recoiled, shrieking. Its form began to dissipate, crumbling like ash, and with a final, keening wail that seemed to vibrate in my bones, it was gone.

The room went silent. The cold lifted. The nightlight in the hall flickered, then steadied. I stood there, trembling, the sage still smoldering. I realized I was crying. Later, I told Mira what had happened. She hugged me, and Leo, who had watched from the doorway, looked at me with awe. ‘Did you kill it?’ he asked. I shook my head. ‘I banished it. But it may return. This place is thin. It’s always been that way.’ I looked at the hollow between the world and the next, where the veil could tear. ‘But I’ll teach you how to protect yourself, Leo. You have the gift, just like me. You’ll learn to feel it, and you’ll learn to stand strong.’ We performed a final cleansing, burning the sage, ringing a bell, and sprinkling salt in every corner. As we left the room, I felt a last whisper of cold brush past me, like a memory, but it faded. I knew we had won this battle. But the war? I could feel it, like an echo in the bloodline—the hollow between, always waiting, always hungry. And I knew, someday, Leo would need to face it again. But that day was not today. Today, we had the light.

Related Horror Movies to Watch

To top
⚡ WILLOW LIVE
Listening for whispers in the dark...
Real-Time Whispers Stream
REAL-TIME

Listening to the woods...