The Copper Toll

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Story Premise 3 min read (520 words)

"In the autumn of 2014, I moved into a rundown duplex on the edge of a deserted industrial district, where the streetlights flickered like dying fireflies and the air always smelled of rust and rain. My roommate, Dara, was a self-proclaimed spiritualist who devoured books on the paranormal but grew pale at the mention of […]"

In the autumn of 2014, I moved into a rundown duplex on the edge of a deserted industrial district, where the streetlights flickered like dying fireflies and the air always smelled of rust and rain. My roommate, Dara, was a self-proclaimed spiritualist who devoured books on the paranormal but grew pale at the mention of anything ‘dark.’ She watched my nine-month-old daughter, Lily, while I worked the night shift at a diner. Her boyfriend, Marcus, often stayed over, and he’d had his own share of unsettling encounters in his childhood home—a place where doors opened on their own and a woman in white wept in the hallway. We shared our stories one night after Lily had fallen asleep, her tiny breaths whispering through the baby monitor. Dara refused to speak of her own beliefs, insisting that talking about such things only ‘stirs the pot.’ I told them about the presence that had dogged me for years—a shadow that lingered at the edge of my vision, a cold spot in the corner of every room, and the way Lily would sometimes stare at nothing and giggle, or point at an empty chair and say, ‘Man.’ I said, ‘If it’s not my grandmother watching over her, then it’s something else, and I’m afraid it’s not kind.’ Dara shuddered and said, ‘That’s not something I want to invite in.’ Marcus gave a nervous laugh and changed the subject. That night, I woke to a strange tingling in my palm. Three pennies lay on my nightstand, cold and wet, as if dipped in the river outside. They weren’t there when I went to sleep. I knew it. And in the morning, when I told Dara, she turned ashen and whispered, ‘Copper is for the dead. It’s a toll.’ From then on, we began to notice things: a child’s handprint on the steamed bathroom mirror, though no child had been in there; the smell of decay in the hallway that came and went; and Lily, more often than not, would refuse to sleep alone, crying and pointing at the corner of her crib. One evening, I came home to find Dara trembling in the living room, clutching a penny she’d found in Lily’s crib. ‘It was warm,’ she said. ‘And it had a face on it—not a president, but a face that moved.’ Marcus, who had been skeptical, admitted he’d heard footsteps in the attic, and a voice that whispered his name. We decided to move, but as we packed, we discovered a hidden door in the closet, leading to a crawlspace. Inside, we found a child’s rusted tricycle, a tarnished locket with a lock of black hair, and a collection of pennies—hundreds of them, all dated the same year, 1978, the year the previous owner’s daughter had gone missing. On the wall, scratched in the drywall, was a message: ‘PAY THE TOLL.’ I realized then that the pennies weren’t a warning; they were a demand. And every night since, I hear a child’s voice counting coins, and Lily’s fingers are always cold.

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