The Coffin Maker’s Map

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"It was the summer of 1997, and I had just turned thirteen. My family had moved to the small town of Greywood, nestled in a valley that seemed to swallow the sun by mid-afternoon. Our house was an old Victorian relic, perched on a hill, with a gable that crooked like a finger. I was […]"

It was the summer of 1997, and I had just turned thirteen. My family had moved to the small town of Greywood, nestled in a valley that seemed to swallow the sun by mid-afternoon. Our house was an old Victorian relic, perched on a hill, with a gable that crooked like a finger. I was a solitary kid, more comfortable with books than people, and the town’s one library became my refuge. That’s where I found the map.

It was tucked inside a leather-bound book on local history, a map of the town from the 1800s, hand-drawn with astonishing detail. But it was different from any map I’d ever seen. Besides the usual streets and landmarks, it had a web of faint, red lines connecting certain houses and buildings, each line labeled with a date. At the center of this web, marked with a black cross, was a place called ‘Barrow’s Undertaking’. The text under the title said: ‘The routes of the silent mourners.’ The librarian, old Mrs. Kettering, saw me staring at it. She shushed me before I could even ask, her eyes darting to the windows. She whispered, ‘That’s not for the living, dear.’ and snatched the book away.

My curiosity was piqued. Over the next days, I snuck back and copied the map onto tracing paper. I noticed that the red lines ended at Barrow’s Undertaking, but they didn’t just end there. They stopped at a small, unmarked structure at the back of the property, which I later learned was an old storage shed. The dates on the lines ranged from 1875 to 1991, each one recent. I decided to investigate.

The undertaker’s place was at the edge of town, a squat brick building with a black sign. The storage shed was behind it, overgrown with ivy and locked with a rusty padlock. I waited until dusk, when the town seemed to hold its breath, and then I picked the lock with a hairpin. Inside, it was not a shed but a narrow staircase descending into darkness. The air was cold and smelled of damp earth and something else, like decayed flowers. I descended, heart pounding.

At the bottom, a single gas lamp flickered to life, revealing a small room. Coffins lined the walls, but they were not ordinary coffins. They were trapezoidal, too narrow at the shoulders, and each one had a small brass plaque with a name and date. The dates matched those on the map. On a central table lay an open leather ledger. The entries were bizarre: instructions for preparing the dead for ‘the procession’, and diagrams showing how to fit the body into the odd shape. But the last entry was different. It read: ‘For the girl who comes: she must sign the ledger, or be taken.’ And it was dated for that very day. I felt a chill, as if the room itself was watching me.

Suddenly, I heard a sound from deep within the building, a scraping, like a coffin lid sliding open. I turned to see a figure emerging from the shadows, a tall, gaunt man in a black suit. He had no face, just smooth, pale skin. He spoke in a raspy voice: ‘You found my map. Now you must take your place in the procession. The mourners are waiting.’ He gestured to the coffins, and I saw that each one had a shadowy figure standing beside it, faceless like him, all turned toward me. I stumbled backward, grasping the ledger. On an impulse, I flipped to the last page and scribbled my name in large letters: ‘MARA HALE’. As the ink dried, the figures seemed to freeze. The faceless man let out a hollow sigh. ‘You have signed,’ he said, ‘but that only postpones. The next eclipse, you will be taken, unless you find a replacement.’ And he gestured to the map, which I still clutched. ‘The map is yours now. Find your successor.’

I fled, not stopping until I was back in my room, clutching the map. I told no one. But as the days passed, I felt a pull, an urge to go back. I resisted. Then, one night, I saw the red lines on the map glow, and I knew the mourning procession was coming for me. I ran to the library, desperate for answers. Old Mrs. Kettering was there, waiting. She looked older, more tired. She took my hand and said, ‘You signed, child. That binds you. But there is a way to break it. You must perform the ritual of the Silent Faire, where the dead are given false names, and you must do it before the next eclipse.’ She gave me a small velvet pouch. ‘Inside is a lock of hair and a name. It is the name of a woman who escaped her bond. They will accept it as a tribute, but you must burn it at the crossroads where the lines meet.’

I followed her instructions. At midnight, I stood at the crossroads marked on the map, the same spot where the red lines converged. I lit a match, and as the hair and paper burned, a cold wind swept through, carrying whispers of gratitude and woe. The map in my hands turned to ash. I felt a release, as if a chain had been lifted. But from the neighboring trees, I saw the faceless mourners, now with faint, smiling mouths, and they bowed to me. The next day, the town paper reported that the old undertaker had disappeared, and his building had burned down in the night. But I knew the truth. I had escaped, but I had also seen. And I carry that map in my mind always, its red lines mapping the secrets of Greywood, and the knowledge that some currents cannot be escaped, only redirected.

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