The Weight of the Open Door

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"I was twelve, the summer before eighth grade, and my family had just moved into a sprawling, century-old farmhouse on the edge of a dying town. The house had a history, but I was too young and too distracted by the novelty of having my own room to care. My mother, however, had heard the […]"

I was twelve, the summer before eighth grade, and my family had just moved into a sprawling, century-old farmhouse on the edge of a dying town. The house had a history, but I was too young and too distracted by the novelty of having my own room to care. My mother, however, had heard the rumors from the neighbors and warned me to keep my door shut at night. She said the previous owner’s daughter had died in that room, and that her spirit was restless. I laughed it off, thinking it was just small-town gossip.

That night, I couldn’t sleep. The clock on my nightstand glowed 2:47 AM. The house creaked and groaned like an old ship, and the wind outside rattled the windows. I had my dog, a golden retriever named Biscuit, curled at the foot of my bed. His ears perked up suddenly, and he let out a low whimper. Before I could react, he jumped off the bed and bolted for the closet, which was slightly ajar. He squeezed under the gap and disappeared into the darkness, leaving me alone in the cold sheets.

I called his name, my voice trembling. ‘Biscuit, come here, boy.’ No response. I called again, louder, and after a long minute, he crept out, tail tucked, eyes wide. I scooped him onto the bed and held him close. To keep him from running off again, I got up and slammed the closet door shut. The click of the latch echoed through the room, and for a moment, everything was silent.

I settled back under the covers, my heart thumping. Biscuit was shaking, his nose pressed tight against my arm. I tried to calm him, stroking his fur, but he wouldn’t relax. An hour passed, and I began to drift. Just as my eyes closed, a sound came from the closet: a soft, deliberate click. The door swung open, inch by inch, as if pushed by a gentle hand. A cold draft swept across the room, carrying the faint smell of dust and something like rotting flowers.

Biscuit whimpered again and buried his face in my side. I couldn’t move. The closet door now stood wide open, and inside, the darkness seemed deeper than it should be, a black hole that swallowed the faint moonlight from my window. I whispered, ‘Who’s there?’ My own voice sounded foreign, thin. The silence that followed was heavy, pressing down on me. Then, from the closet, came a sound that didn’t belong: a low, guttural breathing, like something large and ancient exhaling.

I wanted to scream, but my throat closed. Biscuit began to growl, a deep rumble that vibrated against my ribs. The breathing stopped. A footstep, soft and deliberate, emerged from the closet. I couldn’t see it, but I could feel a weight pressing on the floorboards, each step closer. The temperature dropped, and my breath misted in the air. Biscuit shot up, bared his teeth, and barked a sharp, frantic warning.

The footsteps stopped. The door to my room, which I had left ajar, slammed shut with a bang that shook the walls. The closet door remained open, a silent mouth. I clutched Biscuit, my heart thundering. I didn’t dare move. I recited every prayer I knew, over and over, while the minutes stretched into an eternity.

At some point, I must have dozed off, because when I opened my eyes, pale gray light filtered through the curtains. The closet door was closed, and Biscuit was asleep at my feet. I thought I had dreamed it, but then I saw the scratches on the inside of the closet door, deep gouges in the wood, as if something had clawed from within. I never slept in that room again, and I never let Biscuit out of my sight. But every night, just before 3 AM, I hear that door creak open, and I know the weight of that open door is waiting for me to look inside.

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