The Watermark Visitor

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"The house at 13 Merrow Lane had always been a little too quiet. It was a pre-war cottage, with thick stone walls and a narrow staircase that creaked even when no one was on it. I grew up there, in the back bedroom that faced the garden. It was a small room, with a sloped […]"

The house at 13 Merrow Lane had always been a little too quiet. It was a pre-war cottage, with thick stone walls and a narrow staircase that creaked even when no one was on it. I grew up there, in the back bedroom that faced the garden. It was a small room, with a sloped ceiling and a single window that rattled when the wind blew from the east. I never thought much about the house’s age or its history. It was just home.

But when I was nine, I started waking up at exactly six in the morning. Not slowly, not groggily, but all at once, as if someone had snapped their fingers in my ear. The first time, I lay still, listening to the sounds of the house settling. The floorboards in the hallway creaked, but that was normal. Then I turned my head toward the door, and there it was. A tall figure, black against the grey light of dawn, standing just inside the threshold. It had no features, no face, no hands, just a tall, dark presence that seemed to absorb the light around it. I blinked, and it was gone. I thought I had imagined it.

It happened again a week later, and then again a month later. Same time, same place. I never told anyone. I figured it was a trick of the light, or my eyes playing tricks on me. The figure never moved, never spoke, just stood there, as if watching me. After the third time, I started to set my alarm for 5:58, just to see if I could catch it. But I always fell asleep before the alarm went off, and I always woke at six, to see the figure, and then it vanished.

A few months later, I had a sleepover. My best friend, Sam, and two others, Maya and Leo, were sprawled in sleeping bags on my floor. We had stayed up late watching movies and telling ghost stories, but by the time the clock struck five, we were all exhausted. I drifted off, but at six o’clock, I snapped awake, as usual. I didn’t look at the door. I didn’t want to see it again. But from across the room, I heard Maya’s voice, shaky and tight. ‘What is that?’ she whispered. I turned to look. The figure was there, tall and dark, just as I had always seen it. Maya was staring at it, her face pale. I grabbed her hand and squeezed. ‘You see it too?’ I asked. She nodded, trembling. ‘It’s just a shadow,’ I lied, but my heart was pounding. Then the figure dissolved, and the sun was up, and the room was ordinary again.

After that, I couldn’t stop thinking about it. Why did Maya see it too? I hadn’t told anyone. I started to research the history of the house. I found old maps, property records, and a newspaper article from 1944. During the war, the house had been used as a temporary shelter for workers who were constructing underground bunkers. A man named Joseph Hartley had lived here, a quiet man who kept to himself. He worked as a surveyor, and he always wore a hard hat, even indoors, because of a head injury he had sustained during a raid. One day, he didn’t show up to work. They found him in his room, at the back of the house, lying on the floor. He had been inspecting the water tank in the attic, and he had slipped and hit his head on the cast-iron bathtub. He died instantly. The room he stayed in was the same one I now occupied.

A few weeks later, a pipe in the attic burst. Water seeped through the ceiling of my room, right above the door. The stains spread, blotchy and brown, and as they dried, they formed a pattern. I stared at it from my bed, and my blood ran cold. It was a silhouette, a man’s shape, with a hard hat on his head and his head tilted as if he were looking down at me. The watermark was exactly where the figure had always stood.

I never saw the dark figure again, but sometimes, at six in the morning, I would wake up and feel a presence in the room. The watermark would seem darker, more defined. And I would hear a faint dripping sound, as if water was still leaking from the attic, even though the pipe had long been fixed. I left that room for the front bedroom, but the house never felt empty. Sometimes I’d catch a glimpse of a tall shape in the hallway, just at the edge of my vision. And I knew that Joseph Hartley was still there, not to scare me, but to remind me that some stains never fade.

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