The Unseen Visitor

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"I’ve always been acutely aware of the unseen, a trait I inherited from my mother. But last night, that awareness turned into something far more primal, a fear that lodged itself in my throat and refused to leave. My husband, Daniel, and I live in an old Victorian house in the quiet outskirts of Salem, […]"

I’ve always been acutely aware of the unseen, a trait I inherited from my mother. But last night, that awareness turned into something far more primal, a fear that lodged itself in my throat and refused to leave. My husband, Daniel, and I live in an old Victorian house in the quiet outskirts of Salem, Oregon, a place that feels like it has secrets of its own. The house is over a century old, with creaking floorboards and walls that seem to breathe, but we’ve grown used to its quirks. Or so I thought.

Last night, I was curled up in bed with a novel, trying to unwind from a stressful week. Daniel was already asleep beside me, his breathing a steady rhythm. The words on the page began to blur, and I felt that familiar heaviness in my eyelids, the prelude to a deep sleep. I closed the book, set it on the nightstand, and switched off the dim lamp. The room fell into a soft darkness, the only light coming from the moon filtering through the lace curtains. I closed my eyes, letting the world drift away, hovering in that liminal space between wakefulness and slumber.

And then I heard it. A voice, so low and raspy it seemed to scrape against my bones, whispered directly into my ear, ‘Well, hello there.’ My eyes snapped open, my heart pounding so hard I could feel it in my temples. I bolted upright, my gaze darting around the room. The moonlight cast long shadows, but I saw nothing. No figure, no movement, just the familiar shapes of furniture. My dog, Luna, a golden retriever with an unusually perceptive nature, was sitting upright on her bed across the room, her ears perked, her eyes fixed on a spot next to me on the mattress. On that empty space, the comforter seemed to sag, as if someone were sitting there.

Fear gripped me, but I remembered my mother’s advice. She always told me not to show fear, because it gives spirits energy. Instead, she said to address them firmly, to tell them they are unwelcome. I took a shaky breath, my voice trembling as I spoke into the darkness, ‘You are scaring me. I need you to leave. This is not your place.’ My words hung in the air, and for a moment, the pressure in the room seemed to ease. Luna cocked her head, as if listening, then let out a soft whine and settled back down, but her eyes never left that spot.

Something shifted. The hair on the back of my neck stood up, and I felt a cold draft though the windows were closed. The air thickened, and I could swear I heard a faint, wheezing laugh, not loud, but present. It was then I noticed the old mirror on the vanity across the room. In its dim reflection, I caught a shape, a tall, gaunt figure with its head tilted, watching me. My breath hitched, and I squeezed my eyes shut, whispering a prayer under my breath. When I opened my eyes, the figure was gone, but the suffocating presence remained.

I reached for my phone on the nightstand, wanting to wake Daniel, but my hand brushed against something icy. I pulled back, my skin crawling. The room felt increasingly cold, and the air grew heavy, like a weight pressing down on my chest. Luna barked once, a sharp, startled sound, and bolted off her bed, hiding under the dresser. The presence seemed to intensify, as if it were angry that I didn’t welcome it. I closed my eyes and focused on my breathing, repeating my mother’s mantra, ‘You are not welcome here. Leave now.’

After what felt like an eternity, the cold seeped away, the weight lifted, and the room returned to a normal silence. I stayed awake, the light back on, holding Luna, who crept out from hiding. When morning came, I told Daniel about the voice and the figure. He dismissed it as a vivid dream, but I know what I felt. And as I write this, sitting in the bright light of day, I can’t shake the feeling that it’s still here, waiting, watching, and I fear that the next time it speaks, I might not be so brave.

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