The Third Pupil

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"It started in late July, not long after I moved into the old farmhouse on Redemption Road. The house itself was a skeleton of its former self, its bones creaking with every shift of the wind. I’d bought it cheap, a fixer-upper, and in the daytime, with the sun streaming through the grimy windows, I […]"

It started in late July, not long after I moved into the old farmhouse on Redemption Road. The house itself was a skeleton of its former self, its bones creaking with every shift of the wind. I’d bought it cheap, a fixer-upper, and in the daytime, with the sun streaming through the grimy windows, I could imagine it whole again. But at night, the imagination turned sour.

The first sign was the breathing. Not my own – I’d lie in bed, the clock ticking on the nightstand, and I’d hear a second rhythm, slow and wet, like something was inhaling the darkness beside me. I’d hold my breath, counting the seconds, and the sound would pause, as if waiting for me to continue. Then it would resume, synchronized with my own exhale, a perfect echo in reverse. I told my neighbor, a grizzled man named Cyrus, who’d lived here his whole life. He spat on the ground and said I was hearing the house settle. ‘It’s old,’ he said, ‘and it’s got its own moans.’ But I knew better.

The second sign was the shadow in the corner of my eye. Always there, just at the periphery, a dark shape that seemed to lean against the wall, watching me with an intensity that felt almost physical. When I turned to look, it would vanish, but the feeling of being observed remained, a cold finger tracing my spine. I started sleeping with the lights on, but even then, the presence persisted, lurking in the margins of my vision.

It came to a head on a sweltering night in August. My ex-boyfriend, Miles, and his friend, Diego, had come over late, after a show in the city. They’d been drinking, and when I told them about my sleepless nights, Diego’s face went pale. He eyed the beaded bracelets on my wrist – gifts from my aunt, a mix of colorful glass and cheap metal, each one featuring a small, painted eye. ‘Santeria bracelets,’ he whispered, pointing. ‘They can be used for protection, but they can also be used for harm.’ He asked to see them, and I slipped them off, holding them out.

Diego held one up to the lamp, his fingers tracing the eye on the largest bead. ‘Look,’ he said, his voice low. ‘This one has two black dots in the eye, not one. That’s the evil eye. Someone’s put a curse on you.’ I felt a chill despite the heat. Miles scoffed, calling it superstition, but Diego was serious. He took the bracelet to the kitchen, placed it in the sink, and set it ablaze. The plastic beads melted, releasing a smell of burnt chemicals, and the eye seemed to stare at me through the flame until it blackened and crumbled. Diego checked the other bracelet, found nothing, and handed it back to me. ‘You should be safe now,’ he said, but his eyes betrayed his doubt.

That night, for the first time in weeks, I slept without interruption. No breathing, no presence. I dreamed I was walking through the fields behind the house, the tall grass swaying in a silent breeze, and the bracelet was still on my wrist, intact. I looked down at it, and the single eye on the bead had turned into two – two black dots, staring up at me. In the dream, I tried to pull it off, but it tightened, and the dots widened, and then they weren’t dots at all but gaping holes, and something was looking out from them, something that recognized me. I woke with a gasp, my heart pounding, and I swear I saw a dark shape retreat from the foot of my bed, dissolving into the shadows.

I got up to splash water on my face, but when I looked in the mirror, I saw it – a faint mark on my wrist, like a bruise, in the exact spot where the bracelet had been. And in the center of that mark, a tiny black dot. I blinked, and it was gone. I told myself it was a trick of the light, but I started to feel a weight on my ankle, a cold pressure, as if something had latched onto me that night and wasn’t letting go. Since then, the presence has been stronger, not just watching me but breathing with me, and I’ve seen its silhouette in every corner, waiting for the moment I close my eyes. I know now that burning the bracelet didn’t destroy it – it only transferred it to me.

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