The Third Night Guest

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"The Hemlock Lodge sat on a rocky bluff above the icy waters of Lake Superior, a relic of a bygone era with its dark wood paneling and faded portraits of long-dead lumber barons. I was there with my college friends, Maya, Diego, and Pat, for a late autumn getaway. We’d chosen the lodge because it […]"

The Hemlock Lodge sat on a rocky bluff above the icy waters of Lake Superior, a relic of a bygone era with its dark wood paneling and faded portraits of long-dead lumber barons. I was there with my college friends, Maya, Diego, and Pat, for a late autumn getaway. We’d chosen the lodge because it was cheap and supposedly haunted, but we were all too pragmatic to believe in ghosts. The first night was uneventful, filled with board games and cheap wine, until we retired to our room—a sprawling suite with a sitting area and two queen beds. The lights flickered once, then died, plunging us into near-total darkness. We fumbled for flashlights, but the emergency exit signs in the hallway glowed red, and we saw that the corridor lights were still on. ‘Maybe a fuse?’ Diego said, and we laughed it off, agreeing it was just old wiring. We decided to call it a night. I’m a light sleeper, and at 2:48 AM, I woke to a pressing need to use the bathroom. I shuffled past the lumpy forms of my friends and did my business, then paused for a glass of water from the pitcher on the dresser. As I turned back, something in the corner where the bathroom door met the wall caught my eye. It was a shape—taller than a man, darker than the shadows—and it was standing perfectly still. I blinked, and it was gone. I convinced myself it was just sleep inertia, and I crawled back into bed, my heart hammering all the same.

The next morning, I mentioned it to the manager, a grizzled man named Mr. Thorne who smelled of pipe smoke and mothballs. I expected him to dismiss it, but his eyes narrowed. ‘No one could have gotten into that room without a security key,’ he said, his voice low. ‘Not even maintenance. You folks are the only ones with that key, and we changed the locks last week.’ His words sent a chill down my spine, and I couldn’t shake the feeling that he was hiding something. My friends made jokes about sleep paralysis, but Pat, who was quieter than the rest, looked at me with a knowing unease. The rest of that day, we explored the lodge’s grounds, but my mind kept drifting to that corner.

That evening, I was exhausted. I told my friends I was turning in early, and they promised to keep the noise down. As I lay in the dark, the room felt different—heavier, as if the air itself was pressing down. I remember staring at the ceiling, afraid to close my eyes. But sleep must have claimed me because suddenly I was awake, my eyes snapping open, and the clock on the nightstand glowed 2:48. The same time as last night. My blood ran cold. I held my breath and turned my head slowly. There, at the foot of the bed, stood the figure. This time it was closer. It was featureless, like a column of black smoke, but I could see the faint outline of shoulders and a head. It didn’t move, just stood there, watching. Or perhaps waiting. I squeezed my eyes shut, my mind screaming, and when I opened them again, it was gone. The room was still, and my friends’ breathing was steady.

I didn’t sleep again that night. I stayed up, my back against the headboard, staring at the corner until dawn. In the morning, I told Maya, Diego, and Pat what I’d seen. This time, they didn’t laugh. Pat said, ‘Something happened here. Something bad.’ We went to Mr. Thorne again, but he refused to say more, muttering about ‘curiosity killing the cat.’ Frustrated, we decided to leave, but we couldn’t get a rental car until the following day. That third night, we all agreed to stay awake together. We locked the door, put chairs under the handles, and laid out a cross and a Bible on the coffee table—just in case. We huddled in the sitting area, drinking coffee, talking in hushed tones.

As midnight passed, we grew drowsy. At 2:47, I felt a sudden wave of dread. I looked at my friends, and they were all pale, their eyes wide. ‘It’s almost time,’ Diego whispered. At 2:48, the lights in our room went out again, but this time, they didn’t come back on. The hallway lights remained bright, casting a rectangle of light under the door. I heard a faint humming, like a low electrical buzz, coming from the corner. I aimed a flashlight at it, and there it was—the figure, now distinct, its form rippling like heat haze. It wasn’t just standing; it was swaying slightly, as if it were breathing.

Slowly, it began to move. Not toward us, but toward the bathroom. I felt an irresistible pull to follow, as if it wanted me to see something. I stood up, my legs trembling. My friends grabbed my arms, but I shook them off. ‘I have to see,’ I heard myself say, my voice not my own. I walked to the bathroom, my bare feet cold on the tile. The figure was gone, but the mirror fogged over, and the word ‘LEAVE’ appeared written in the condensation. I gasped and stepped back, and the mirror cleared. I turned to flee, but the figure was right behind me, its face now visible—not a face, but a hollow void filled with a swirling grey mist. It raised an armress, and I felt its icy hand on my shoulder. I screamed, and then everything went black.

I woke up on the bathroom floor, my friends crouched over me, their faces ashen. It was 3:02 AM. They told me I’d collapsed, and the figure had vanished. But I noticed something on my shoulder: five dark bruises, shaped like fingers, pressing into my skin. The next morning, we packed our bags in silence. As we left the lodge, Mr. Thorne gave me a long, knowing look, and I swear I saw fear in his eyes. On the drive back to the city, I couldn’t shake the feeling that the figure wasn’t done with me. That night, as I sat in my apartment, the clock on my nightstand flickered. The digits spun, and then stopped: 2:48. I felt the temperature drop, and I knew, with a sick certainty, that the figure had followed me home.

I haven’t slept properly since. Every night, at 2:48, I hear a faint humming, and the corner of my room darkens. I’ve tried to move, but I can’t afford it. My friends have stopped calling. They’re afraid, too, I think. But I know I can’t run from this. The figure is patient. It appeared on the third night, and it seemed to be waiting for me to acknowledge it. Maybe it was never bound to the lodge. Maybe it was always attached to me. All I know is that at 2:48, I will look at the foot of my bed, and it will be there, closer than before. And eventually, I fear, it will take me somewhere I can’t return from.

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