The first time I heard it, I thought it was a radio left on in the crawlspace. But our house in the Oklahoma flatlands had no crawlspace, just a concrete slab. It was a new modular home, placed in 2019, and the only station that came in clear was the college NPR affiliate out of Stillwater. The voice wasn’t from there.
I’d be in the kitchen, pouring coffee at 5:47 AM, the sun a razor line on the horizon, and I’d hear it: a woman’s voice, calm but insistent, counting down from ten. It always started at ten, never went higher, and it never finished. It stopped at seven, sometimes six, as if she’d been cut off mid-word. At first, I put it down to the pipes, the wind in the gutters, the hum of the refrigerator. But my wife, Dana, heard it too, and she was more honest about it. She started sleeping on the couch.
The house was new. That was the thing. No history, no deaths, no tragedy. We’d had it built to our specs—open floor plan, vaulted ceiling, a fireplace we never used. But the voice didn’t care about newness. It found its way in. I tried to trace it. I walked the perimeter with a digital recorder, I checked the electrical panel, I even pulled the insulation from the walls where the sound seemed to gather. Nothing. Just that voice, counting. And then, one evening, it changed.
It was the first cold snap of October. I was in the garage, looking for a wrench, when I heard footsteps overhead. But the garage had no floor above it—just a flat roof. The sound was heavy, deliberate, like someone walking in work boots across the ceiling. I stood still, listening. The footsteps stopped at the center, right above where I was standing. Then the counting started, so close it felt like she was breathing down my neck. ‘Ten, nine, eight.’ I whispered, ‘Who are you?’ The counting stopped. I didn’t expect a reply, but I got one: a low, humming sound, like a tuning fork, and then a child’s voice, clear and small, said, ‘You’re standing on the door.’
I didn’t sleep that night. I kept thinking about the door—how absurd. Our house had two doors: the front and the back. But the voice meant a different kind of door, one I’d unknowingly placed myself over. The next day, I took a sledgehammer to the garage floor. Dana screamed at me, said I was losing my mind, but I had to know. I broke through the concrete and found it: a steel trapdoor, rusted, bolted shut, covered in a layer of soil that couldn’t have been there when the slab was poured. It was as if the ground had swallowed it and given birth to our house on top of it.
I pried it open. Inside was a stairwell leading down into absolute blackness, and the smell of old iron and damp clay. I called down, ‘Hello?’ The echo came back wrong—not my voice, but the woman’s counting, starting at ten again, and this time she went lower. I didn’t wait to hear nine. I slammed the door shut, but the sound didn’t stop. It came through the concrete, through the slab, through the soles of my feet. Dana left that night, took the kids to her mother’s in Tulsa. She said she felt a draft, but I knew it was the counting that drove her away.
I stayed. I had to understand. I read everything about the land—the farmhouse that stood here in the 1800s, the well that was capped after a family disappeared, the later history of a county road that got rerouted because of a ‘gas leak.’ But the land was flat, empty, and I found nothing. So I did the thing I swore I never would: I went down the stairs. With a flashlight and a rope tied around my waist to the garage door handle, I descended.
It was a room, not as large as our living room, but deep. The walls were lined with shelves, but there were no jars or boxes—just hundreds of small, clear glass vessels, each with a label in a cursive script I couldn’t read. At the center was a metal chair, bolted to the floor, with leather straps. The chair faced a low table on which sat an old-fashioned battery-powered radio, its dial tuned between stations. The static hissed, and amid it, I heard the woman’s voice, faint but clear: ‘Ten, nine, eight…’
I knelt, my heart pounding. ‘What is this place?’ The static interrupted, and the child’s voice came again: ‘You’re standing on the door. You’re always standing on the door.’ I looked down at the dirt floor. There, beneath a thin layer of soil, was a trapdoor identical to the one above. I knew I shouldn’t open it. But the counting was so close, so desperate, that I found my fingers curling under the iron ring. I pulled.
What I saw made me scream. Not because it was monstrous, but because it was ordinary. A pair of hands, pale and delicate, rose from the blackness, pushing up along with them a face—a woman’s face, young, with mud-streaked hair. She blinked at me, eyes wide, and said, ‘You took your time.’ I tried to back away, but the hands were already gripping my ankles, pulling me down into the dark. My last thought was of the radio, left on, its dial still between stations, and of how the counting had been a beacon, luring me to open that door. Now, from somewhere deep below, I can hear Dana’s voice calling my name, and I know I’ll be the one to answer. I start counting from ten, and I don’t stop.