The Man in the Mirror

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"The morning of October 23rd, 2008, started like any other. I drove my daughter, Emily, to her bus stop, watching her wave as she climbed aboard, her backpack bouncing. At 34, I prided myself on being pragmatic, a skeptic who scoffed at ghost stories and urban legends. My life was ordinary: a wife, a daughter, […]"

The morning of October 23rd, 2008, started like any other. I drove my daughter, Emily, to her bus stop, watching her wave as she climbed aboard, her backpack bouncing. At 34, I prided myself on being pragmatic, a skeptic who scoffed at ghost stories and urban legends. My life was ordinary: a wife, a daughter, a mortgage, a routine. But the events of the previous day had planted a seed of unease in my mind, something I couldn’t shake.

Yesterday, I had felt a strange presence in our house, a fleeting glimpse of a figure in the hallway mirror, but I dismissed it as a trick of light, my own reflection catching my eye. Today, however, I would be proven wrong in the most terrifying way.

After dropping Emily off, I returned home. The house was quiet, save for the hum of the refrigerator. I decided to open the double doors of our master suite to let in some fresh air, the cool autumn breeze a welcome relief. As I pulled the doors open, I saw him out of the corner of my eye: a man standing in the hallway, his silhouette stark against the pale sunlight filtering through the windows. He was tall, with dark hair slicked back, and he wore a crisp gray suit, completely out of place in my suburban home.

My heart slammed against my ribs. ‘Who the hell are you?’ I shouted, my voice cracking. I instinctively took a step toward the bedroom where I kept my pistol, but the man moved with an impossible speed, crossing the distance to the top of the stairs in a blur. I froze, my muscles tensed for a fight.

He didn’t attack. Instead, he walked toward the full-length mirror at the top of the landing. I watched, dumbfounded, as he paused in front of it, casually adjusting his tie and running a hand through his hair, as if he were late for a meeting. He caught my gaze in the reflection, and a slow, sinister smile spread across his face. Then, without a word, he vanished.

I stood there, my breath caught in my throat. The mirror showed only my own pale reflection, trembling. I rushed to the mirror, my fingers tracing the glass, searching for any trick, any hidden mechanism. But there was nothing. It was just a mirror.

For the next few days, I tried to rationalize it. A stress-induced hallucination? A prank? But I couldn’t shake the image of that smile. And then I started seeing him again, not in my house, but in reflections everywhere: shop windows, car mirrors, even the surface of a puddle. He was always there, watching, always fixing his hair, as if he couldn’t resist the urge to check his appearance.

I became obsessed, researching local history, old news articles, anything that might explain who he was. I discovered that our house was built on land that once belonged to a man named Henry Vane, who had vanished without a trace in 1932. He was a vain, arrogant businessman, known for his impeccable style. The police found his abandoned car near a lake, but his body was never recovered. Locals whispered that he had fallen into the water and drowned, but there was no evidence.

A chill ran down my spine. Could this be Henry Vane? Was he trapped in some kind of purgatory, caught between worlds, forever drawn to mirrors? I delved deeper, finding a journal in the attic, hidden behind a loose board. It was Henry’s, and it described a ritual he had performed on the night he disappeared, using a mirror to try to cross into ‘the other side.’ He wrote of a ‘door’ in the glass, but also of a price: ‘The reflection must have a soul, or it will take yours.’

I realized with horror that I had unknowingly provided the soul he needed. The moment I saw him, I had acknowledged his existence, giving him a foothold in my world. Now, he was feeding on my life force, growing stronger with each stolen glance.

Desperate, I tried to break the mirror, but every shard reflected him back at me, his smile growing wider. He began to appear more often, not just in reflections but standing beside me, his presence cold and oppressive. I could feel him draining me, my energy waning, my thoughts becoming foggy.

One night, I woke to find him standing at the foot of my bed, his gray suit immaculate, his dark eyes fixed on me. ‘You have been a generous host,’ he said, his voice smooth as silk. ‘But I must return home. Your reflection will do nicely.’

I tried to scream, but no sound came out. He reached for my face, his fingers icy against my skin, and I felt myself being pulled toward the mirror on the wall. The glass rippled like water, and I saw myself reflected, but my reflection was smiling, and it was reaching back with a hand that wasn’t mine.

Just as I was about to be pulled through, I heard Emily’s voice from downstairs, calling for me. The sound broke his hold, and I stumbled backward, gasping. Henry snarled in frustration, his form flickering.

‘She will come to me eventually,’ he hissed. ‘They all do.’

He disappeared, but I knew he would be back. I grabbed Emily, packed a few essentials, and fled to a motel, avoiding any reflective surfaces. I didn’t know how to stop him, but I couldn’t risk staying in that house.

As weeks passed, I tried to live a normal life, but the fear never left. And then, one day, I caught a glimpse of myself in a store window, and I saw him in the reflection, standing behind me, his hand raised, smoothing his hair. I turned sharply, but he was gone. But in the glass, my own reflection winked at me, and I knew that Henry had found a way to follow me.

Now, I am writing this from a dark room, the curtains drawn, every mirror covered. I can feel him lurking, waiting for a moment of weakness. I don’t know if I can hold him off forever. But I know one thing: never trust your reflection, because sometimes, it might be looking back at you.

Emily hasn’t smiled since we left. She says she sees him too, in the corner of her eye, always fixing his hair. And I shudder to think what he wants with her.

I am just a man, a skeptic turned believer, and I have opened a door I cannot close. If you find yourself in a house with a mirror, be careful. And if you see a man in gray, do not look at him. Run. And never, ever let him see your reflection.

But it’s already too late for me.

He’s here.

He’s always here.

And he is fixing his hair, ready to step through.

This is my final entry. I hope no one ever finds it.

Goodbye.

[The end.]

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