The Rain in the Attic

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"We moved in, and the house breathed. That’s the only way to describe it. It exhaled damp, wood-rot air through the floorboards, and every step we took seemed to make the walls settle a little deeper into the mud. It was an old farmhouse, miles from the nearest town, surrounded by fields of dead grass […]"

We moved in, and the house breathed. That’s the only way to describe it. It exhaled damp, wood-rot air through the floorboards, and every step we took seemed to make the walls settle a little deeper into the mud. It was an old farmhouse, miles from the nearest town, surrounded by fields of dead grass that crackled like bones underfoot. My son, Milo, was eight, and he never complained, not even when the roof leaked into his mattress. My partner, Vance, was a different story. He was a good man when sober, but sobriety was a stranger to him by the time we unpacked.

We spent the first month fixing the place up that was the deal with the landlord. The rent was cheap, almost nothing, in exchange for our labor. We patched holes, painted walls, and scrubbed away the grime of a decade of neglect. The house felt old, but not evil. Just tired. I thought it might be good for us, a project to keep Vance busy, to keep him off the bottle. But the nearest bar was only twenty minutes away, and Vance found friends who liked to drink as much as he did.

It was on a Thursday that I first heard the scratching. Not in the walls, but above us. The attic. I assumed it was squirrels, or maybe a raccoon that had found its way in through the broken vent. I mentioned it to Vance, who was already two beers in. He shrugged, his voice slurred. ‘I’ll take a look tomorrow.’ But the next day, he was at the bar with his buddies, and the scratching got louder. It sounded like fingernails dragging across the ceiling, a slow, rhythmic pace, as if something was walking back and forth up there.

Milo heard it too. He would lie in bed, his eyes wide, whispering, ‘Mom, what’s up there?’ I would pull him close and say, ‘Just an animal. We’ll get rid of it soon.’ But I didn’t believe my own words. There was something in the attic that felt ancient, patient, and hungry.

One night, after Vance had passed out on the couch, the scratching turned into a thumping. A heavy, insistent thump that shook the light fixture in the living room. I grabbed a flashlight and a broom, determined to at least see what we were dealing with. The attic door was in the hallway ceiling, a square of plywood on a fold-down ladder. I pulled it open, and a wave of dust and something else hit me. It smelled like wet soil and iron. I climbed the rungs, my heart hammering.

The attic was dark, and I couldn’t see much, but I could hear the thumping now clearly. It was coming from the far corner, behind a heap of old furniture and boxes. I swept the flashlight beam across it, and for a split second, I saw a shape. It was large, squatting, and it had too many limbs. Then it moved, too fast for something that size, and vanished into the shadows. I dropped the flashlight, stumbled down the ladder, and slammed the door shut. I didn’t sleep that night.

The next morning, I told Vance about it, but he laughed. ‘You’re imagining things, babe. Probably just a possum.’ He was drunk already, and his eyes were bloodshot. I knew I couldn’t rely on him. So I went to the landlord, an old man named Mr. Pruitt, who lived on the other side of the county. I asked about the attic, about any history of the house. He hesitated, then told me that a family used to live there, and the father had gone mad. He’d killed his wife and children with an ax, then hung himself up there. The landlord said the house had been empty for years after that.

I didn’t know if I believed in ghosts, but that night, I insisted we all sleep in the living room, with the lights on. Vance grumbled, but passed out early. Milo and I huddled on the bed rolls, whispering stories to keep our minds off the sounds. And then the sounds started again. But this time, they weren’t in the attic. They were in the walls. And they were moving, sliding down toward the floorboards, as if something was descending.

I held Milo tighter. Vance snored. The scratching got closer, and I thought I heard a voice, a child’s voice, singing a lullaby. But it was wrong, off-key, discordant. I covered Milo’s ears, but he pulled my hand away, and his eyes were locked on something behind me. I turned, and there, in the corner of the room, stood a small figure. It was the ghost of a boy, his face pale like chalk, his eyes black and empty. He wore old-fashioned clothes, torn and soiled. He pointed at me, and his mouth moved, but no sound came out.

I screamed. Vance woke up, saw me staring, and shouted, ‘What the hell?’ The ghost vanished, but the temperature in the room dropped, and the air felt thick. I tried to explain, but Vance just shook his head. ‘You need to lay off the caffeine, babe. There ain’t nothing here.’ He turned over and went back to sleep. But Milo was trembling, and he whispered, ‘Mom, he wants us to leave. He says it wants to hurt us.’

I didn’t need more convincing. The next morning, I packed our bags. Vance was hungover and angry, but I told him I didn’t care. We were leaving. He could stay if he wanted, but me and Milo were done. He called me crazy, but he followed us out to the car. I started the engine, and as we pulled away, I looked back at the house. In the upstairs window, I saw the ghost boy again. But this time, he was smiling. And behind him, a tall, shadowy figure with an ax was looking down at us.

I drove fast, not looking back. We stayed at a motel for a week, and then we found a small apartment in a nearby town. It was clean and bright, and there was no scratching, no whispers. But sometimes, at night, I would hear that lullaby in my head, and I would check on Milo. He would be sleeping peacefully, but once, I saw him smile in his sleep, and whisper, ‘He’s gone, Mom. He won’t come back.’ I never knew if ‘he’ was Vance, or something else. But we were free. And that was a good ending.

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