The Ragman’s Bargain

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"It was near midnight in the sticky July heat when my roommate, Bess, and I stumbled back to our apartment on the third floor of an old brick building. We’d been at a block party two streets over, and the air was thick as soup, clinging to our skin like a second layer. Bess flopped […]"

It was near midnight in the sticky July heat when my roommate, Bess, and I stumbled back to our apartment on the third floor of an old brick building. We’d been at a block party two streets over, and the air was thick as soup, clinging to our skin like a second layer. Bess flopped onto the couch, kicking off her sandals, while I headed straight for the shower, my tank top already soaked through.

Our bathroom was a narrow room with a high, small window above the toilet that overlooked the cracked asphalt of the back parking lot. I cracked it open to let out some steam before stepping under the cold spray, which was a relief at first, then turned to a clammy chill. I was scrubbing the grime from my arms when a flicker of movement from the window caught my eye. I pressed my face to the cool glass and saw a dark shape, like a wisp of smoke, drifting downward from the sky. It landed in the pool of light cast by the single lamppost in the lot, and hung there, about three feet off the ground, pulsing gently like a slow heartbeat.

I blinked, thinking it was my imagination, but it stayed. It had no solid form, just a mass of shifting darkness, and it seemed to be pointing something—a hand, maybe—toward our building. I yanked the curtain shut and stood there, dripping, my heart thudding. When I finally peeked again, it was gone.

The next morning, I told Bess about it, and she laughed it off as a heat-induced hallucination. But I couldn’t shake it. Every night that week, I found myself checking the window before bed, and every night, the lot was empty. Then, on Saturday, my mother came over with an old DVD of a ghost-hunting show she’d recorded. She was obsessed with that kind of stuff. As we watched, a woman who claimed to be a medium described a phenomenon she called ‘the Ragman’s Bargain.’ A spirit that appears not as a person, but as a dark, tattered cloth, drawn to places where someone has made a secret promise they never intended to keep. She said it lingers, waiting for the debt to be paid.

I felt a chill run down my spine. I’d made a promise. Months ago, at a yard sale, an old man had given me a strange, heavy coat—beautifully stitched with black beads, but with a faint smell of rot. He’d insisted I take it, and I’d said, ‘I’ll wear it, I swear,’ just to get rid of him. I’d shoved it in the back of my closet and forgotten it. That night, I retrieved it. As I held it, the beads seemed to shift, and for a moment, I saw a face in the fabric—a gaunt, grey face with hollow eyes. I dropped it, and the face vanished.

The next evening, as dusk settled, I heard a faint rustling from the bathroom. I went in and saw the window was open—I hadn’t touched it. And there, floating in the parking lot, was the dark shape again. But now it was bigger, and it was holding something—a tattered, black coat, just like the one in my closet. It motioned with a shadowy finger, beckoning me to come down.

I didn’t go. I told myself it was a trick of the light. But the next morning, Bess was gone. Her bed was neatly made, but there was a strange, ashy outline of a handprint on the bathroom mirror, right above the window. Her phone was still on the charger, her keys on the table. The coat was gone from my closet.

I called the police, but they found nothing. For days, I searched, and every night, the shadow appeared in the lot, a little closer to my window. On the fourth night, I woke to a sound like fabric tearing. The shadow was pressing against the glass, its form now resembling a hunched figure draped in rags. It spoke, in a voice like dry leaves, ‘The bargain is unfulfilled. You must exchange what you value most, or be taken.’

I had nothing. No family left, no friends who mattered. I’d moved to this city to escape a past I’d never spoken of. The only thing I valued was my own skin, my own life. As the shadow seeped through the cracks in the window frame, I realized the coat’s original owner must have made a deal with this thing, and given it as a lure. And now it wanted me.

I grabbed the nearest thing—a heavy iron skillet—and smashed the window, shattering the glass. The shadow recoiled, letting out a high-pitched wail that hurt my ears. But then it reformed, larger, angrier. It surged toward me, and I felt a cold that bit to the bone. I ran. I ran out of the apartment, down the stairs, into the parking lot, and I didn’t stop until I was miles away, standing in the middle of a gas station, shivering in a thin nightgown.

I never went back. I live in a new town now, under a new name. But sometimes, at night, when I catch my reflection in a dark window, I see a flicker of black at the edge of my vision. And I know the bargain is still there, waiting. There is no ending to this story—only the promise I broke, and the price that follows.

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