The Pounding at 12:31

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"It was a Thursday in late October 2007, and I was a senior in high school. My name is Alex, and I lived in a two-story house on the outskirts of a small town called Millbrook. The house was old, with creaky floorboards and a musty smell that clung to everything. My bedroom was on […]"

It was a Thursday in late October 2007, and I was a senior in high school. My name is Alex, and I lived in a two-story house on the outskirts of a small town called Millbrook. The house was old, with creaky floorboards and a musty smell that clung to everything. My bedroom was on the second floor, at the end of a narrow hallway. I had a bunk bed, and I loved sleeping on the top bunk because it felt like a fortress, high above the floor.

The night started like any other. I had been studying for a history exam, but my mind kept wandering to a Ouija board I had found in my grandmother’s attic the week before. She had passed away in the summer, and my parents were cleaning out her house. I snuck the board into my bag, feeling a mix of curiosity and guilt. That Saturday, I had gathered with two friends, Jake and Sarah, in my basement. We lit candles and placed our fingers on the planchette. It moved, spelling out ‘M’ and ‘E’ and then ‘L’ before we got scared and stopped. I didn’t think much of it after.

That Thursday night, I went to bed around midnight. My alarm was set for 6:30 AM, and I had a test in first period. I lay in the dark, staring at the ceiling, replaying the day’s events: the test I might have failed, the argument with my mom about college applications. The clock on my nightstand glowed 12:31 AM when I finally closed my eyes. I was just on the edge of sleep when a sound jolted me awake.

It was a pounding, heavy and rhythmic, coming from my bedroom door. The door was locked, but the knob rattled violently, as if someone on the other side was trying to wrench it open. I froze, my heart hammering in my chest. My parents were away for the weekend, visiting my aunt in another state. I was alone in the house, and the only other person who had a key was my younger brother, but he was at a sleepover. The pounding grew louder, more insistent, and then a voice—low, guttural, and definitely male—snarled through the wood: ‘Let me in.’

I didn’t move. I couldn’t. The voice wasn’t familiar. It wasn’t my father’s or my brother’s. It had a thick, wet quality, like it was coming from a throat full of mud. I reached for my phone on the nightstand, but my fingers were shaking so hard I knocked it to the floor. The pounding continued, now accompanied by scratching, like fingernails dragging down the door.

I shouted, ‘Who’s there?’ but the only response was a sickening laugh. It started as a low chuckle and rose into a cackle that made the hairs on my arms stand up. Then the pounding stopped.

I held my breath, listening. The house fell silent, but the air grew cold. I could see my breath misting in the moonlight that filtered through my blinds. I slowly crawled to the edge of the bunk and peered down at the door. The lock was engaged, and the door was intact, but I saw something that made my blood run cold: the shadow of feet under the door, as if someone was standing right outside, facing the wood.

The feet didn’t move. They just stood there, perfectly still. I watched them for what felt like an eternity. Then, the closet door at the far end of my room creaked open. I snapped my head around, and for a split second, I saw a figure—tall, gaunt, with hollow eyes—standing inside the closet, half-hidden among my coats. It tilted its head, and its mouth stretched into a grin that was too wide.

I screamed and scrambled to the bottom bunk, hitting the floor hard. The figure was gone. The feet under the door were gone too. I grabbed my phone and ran. I didn’t stop running until I reached the living room, where I huddled on the couch, turning on every light in the house.

I called Jake, but he didn’t answer. I called Sarah, and she picked up, her voice groggy. I told her what happened, and she went silent for a long moment. Then she said, ‘Alex, we never finished the board. We didn’t say goodbye.’

I knew then. I had opened something, and it had followed me home. For the rest of the night, I stayed in the living room, the lights blazing. I didn’t sleep. At dawn, I carefully climbed the stairs, my heart in my throat. My bedroom door was still locked, but when I opened it, everything looked normal. The closet door was shut. The clock read 6:12 AM.

But on the top bunk, pressed into the pillow, was a handprint. Not mine. It was too large, with long, thin fingers, and it was wet, like it had been dipped in slime. I never slept in that room again. I moved to the guest bedroom and threw the Ouija board in the river. But some nights, when I lie in that new room, I still hear the pounding at my door, at 12:31 AM, and a voice that says, ‘Let me in, Alex. I know you’re there.’ I never answer. But I know it’s still waiting.

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