The Pillar in the Hall

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"I was ten that summer, the year my great-aunt Selma came to stay with us while her hip healed. My parents gave her my room, and I was moved to the little attic room at the top of the stairs. It was a cramped space, with a slanted ceiling that forced me to duck when […]"

I was ten that summer, the year my great-aunt Selma came to stay with us while her hip healed. My parents gave her my room, and I was moved to the little attic room at the top of the stairs. It was a cramped space, with a slanted ceiling that forced me to duck when I got out of bed. The only light came from a single bare bulb on a pull chain, and the window looked out onto the dark tangle of the pine forest behind our house. I didn’t mind the crampedness, but I hated the dark. Every night, the forest seemed to press against the glass, its shadows reaching out like fingers.

That night, the heat was unbearable. The attic had no fan, and the air was thick and still. I lay on my thin mattress, sweating, listening to the creaks and groans of the old house settling. I must have dozed off, because the next thing I knew, I was awake, my bladder full. The house was silent, not even the crickets. I fumbled for the flashlight I kept by my bed, clicked it on, and shuffled to the door.

I opened the door and stepped into the hallway, my bare feet on the cold wood. The beam of my flashlight cut through the darkness, revealing the long corridor that led to the bathroom. But as I aimed the light forward, it hit something that shouldn’t have been there. At the far end of the hall, standing right in front of the bathroom door, was a black shape. It was so tall that its head brushed the ceiling, which was eight feet high. Its width spanned the entire hallway, from wall to wall, blocking any passage. It had no discernible features—just an impenetrable black mass, like a pillar of darkness. It didn’t move. It just stood there, waiting.

My breath caught in my throat. I froze, my hand trembling on the flashlight. I thought of the stories my grandma used to tell about the things that lived in the forest, the things that came for children who wandered too far. But this was inside. My heart pounded. I took a step back, and the flashlight beam wavered. The dark shape seemed to lean forward, as if it were aware of me. I didn’t wait to see more. I slammed the door shut, my hand fumbling for the lock, but there was none. I pressed my back against the door, my chest heaving, too terrified to scream.

I spent the rest of the night huddled in the corner of my attic room, the flashlight burning in my sweaty hand, my eyes fixed on the door knob. I didn’t sleep. I heard no sounds, but I felt a presence on the other side of the door, waiting. The next morning, when light crept in through the window, I finally opened the door. The hallway was empty. I told my parents, but they dismissed it as a nightmare. Great-Aunt Selma just looked at me with strange, knowing eyes.

A week later, she was gone. She left in the middle of the night without a word, and the next day my parents received a letter from her saying she had to return home. I never saw her again. Years later, I learned that when she was a girl, she had a sister who went missing in the forest. They found the girl’s body weeks later, drained of blood. And on the night she disappeared, a neighbor reported seeing a tall, black figure in the woods. I never told anyone what I saw that night, not even now, but I know it was real. It was waiting for something, and I still don’t know why it didn’t take me.

Now, when I walk down the hallway of any old house, I feel a cold draft, and I remember that pillar of darkness that nearly touched the ceiling, too wide to pass, its presence so solid that it seemed to cast a shadow of its own. And I wonder if it’s still there, waiting for someone else to open a door at night.

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