The house on Hemlock Lane had always been drafty, but that night the cold seemed to seep through the walls, clinging to my skin as I tidied the living room. I was alone, my partner Alex away on a research trip in the northern wetlands, and I relished the quiet—until a soft, rhythmic thud came from the staircase. I froze, the spine of a book still in my hand. The sound was like someone dropping a heavy object on each step, but unhurried, deliberate. I held my breath, counting the seconds. Nothing followed. Maybe it was the old pipes or the wind rattling the loose window frame. I set the book down and climbed the stairs, my footsteps creaking in protest. In the hallway, I paused, listening. The silence was thick, oppressive. I shook it off and retrieved a glass from the bathroom, filling it from the tap. The water was cold and tasted of iron. I drained it and placed the glass on the counter, but as I turned, a violent bang echoed from below—like a door being torn off its hinges and slammed shut. My heart hammered. I pressed my back against the wall, every nerve screaming. I wanted to run, but my legs were rooted. After a long moment, I forced myself to creep toward the top of the stairs. The house was dark below, but a sliver of moonlight from the living room window cut across the foyer. And there, at the foot of the stairs, stood a figure. A man, tall and gaunt, his face shadowed but his eyes glistening with dark rivulets that streamed down his cheeks. His wrists hung at his sides, and I could see deep gashes, wounds so severe that the flesh seemed to fold inward, revealing hollows beyond. He didn’t move. He just stood there, staring up at me. I screamed and stumbled back, my mind obliterated. I bolted into the bedroom, locking the door, and dialed Alex. The phone rang, and when he answered, I sobbed, begging him to come home. He was confused, but the terror in my voice convinced him. He said he’d catch the first flight out. I hung up and sat trembling on the edge of the bed, listening. No sound. After an eternity, I crept back to the doorway and peered down the hall. The figure was gone. I descended the stairs slowly, each step a war between instinct and curiosity. The foyer was empty. The front door was still locked. I sank onto the bottom step, clutching my knees, trying to rationalize what I’d seen. Exhaustion overtook me, and I fell into a restless sleep right there. When I woke, the house was bright with morning. I felt foolish. A nightmare, perhaps. I made coffee and tried to forget. But as I knelt to pick up a fallen cushion, I noticed a dark stain on the floorboards near the coat rack. I touched it, and my fingers came away with a viscous, coppery liquid. My heart stopped. I looked up, and the man was there again—this time standing in the doorway to the den, his head tilted at an unnatural angle. His mouth opened, and a sound like wet paper tearing escaped. I didn’t run. I couldn’t. He raised his hand, and I saw the gaping wound on his wrist, a dark hole that seemed to go straight through. He pointed at me, then slowly, deliberately, he began to walk toward me. The air grew cold. The light dimmed. And I realized that he had been patient, waiting for me to acknowledge him. He had been waiting all along. I closed my eyes, and when I opened them, he was gone. But the stain remained, and I knew, with a certainty that chilled me to the bone, that he would be back. Alex’s flight landed that evening, but I no longer felt safe. I told him everything, and he held me, but there was something in his eyes—a flicker of doubt, or perhaps something worse. That night, I woke to find him standing at the foot of the bed, his silhouette familiar yet wrong. He turned his head, and in the moonlight, I saw the same dark rivulets tracing down his cheeks. My blood ran cold as he whispered, “He told me to come home.” I pressed my back against the headboard, my breath shallow. The man in the hall hadn’t been a stranger. He had been a herald. And now, Alex had brought him with him.
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