The Marble Foyer

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"I had never felt pain like that before. It was a hot July afternoon in the town of Millbrook, and I was fifteen, sprawled on the pavement outside the old municipal building, my skull feeling like it was being split by a white-hot crowbar. My friends, Leo and Maya, were laughing, trying to get me […]"

I had never felt pain like that before. It was a hot July afternoon in the town of Millbrook, and I was fifteen, sprawled on the pavement outside the old municipal building, my skull feeling like it was being split by a white-hot crowbar. My friends, Leo and Maya, were laughing, trying to get me to join their game of parkour across the concrete planters. But every heartbeat sent a spike through my temples, and I could only groan, pressing my palms against my eyes.

‘The heat’s getting to you,’ Leo said, not unkindly. ‘Maybe you should sit in the shade for a bit.’ Maya pointed to the wide, cool-looking lobby of the building. ‘Go inside, get some water from the fountain. We’ll wait here.’ I nodded, grateful for an excuse to escape the sun, and stumbled up the steps, pushing through the heavy glass doors.

Inside, the air was artificially cold, smelling of floor polish and stale air. My footsteps echoed on the polished marble floor. A security guard at a distant desk glanced up but said nothing. I made my way toward the water fountain, but as I bent down, the pain flared so intensely that I had to lean against the wall. When I straightened, a woman in a crisp Red Cross uniform was standing right beside me, so close I could smell faint lavender soap.

I flinched, expecting a scolding for loitering. But her eyes were kind, almost sorry. ‘You need to call your mother,’ she said softly. ‘Tell her to come here.’ My heart raced. ‘Did I do something wrong?’ I asked, my voice cracking. She shook her head. ‘No, but you will be in trouble soon if you don’t come with me.’ She gestured toward a small office off the main corridor.

I followed, too dazed to argue. The office was cluttered with filing cabinets and a single oak desk. She motioned for me to sit, then picked up a phone and handed it to me. ‘Call your mother,’ she repeated. ‘Tell her you’re suffering from a brain aneurysm. Tell her it’s an emergency.’ I stared at her, not comprehending. But the pain was so bad I would have agreed to anything. I dialed my mom’s number with shaking fingers.

Mom answered on the second ring, her voice bright. ‘Hey, sweetie, what’s up?’ I tried to speak, but the words came out wrong, slurred. ‘Mom, I… I have a brain aneurysm. They said you need to come to the municipal building.’ There was a pause, then a sharp intake of breath. ‘I’m on my way,’ she said, and the line went dead.

When I hung up, the woman in the Red Cross uniform was gone. In her place stood an elderly janitor, his mop dripping onto the floor. ‘You alright, kid?’ he asked, frowning. I nodded, but the pain was worse, and my vision was starting to blur. ‘Just a headache,’ I managed. He looked at me strangely but said nothing.

I stumbled back into the lobby, but the Red Cross woman was nowhere to be seen. My friends were still outside, peering through the glass, their expressions turning to alarm. I pushed the door open and collapsed onto the steps. The last thing I remember was Maya screaming my name, and then everything went black.

I woke up in a hospital bed, my mother’s face hovering over me, streaked with tears. ‘You’re okay,’ she whispered. ‘You had a ruptured aneurysm. They operated just in time.’ I blinked, confused. ‘The Red Cross lady…’ I started, but my mother shook her head. ‘There was no Red Cross lady, honey. The janitor found you collapsed in the lobby. He called 911.’

I never saw that woman again. But sometimes, when I walk past the municipal building, I catch a glimpse of a figure in a Red Cross uniform standing just inside the glass doors, watching me. And I wonder if she was a guardian angel, or something else—something that knew exactly what was about to happen to me, and why. I never got an answer, and I’ve been afraid of marble floors ever since.

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