The Mannequin in the Corner

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"It was the fall of my fourteenth year, and the old house on Hemlock Road had always felt like it was holding its breath. The walls were thick with peeling floral wallpaper, and the radiators clanked like ancient bones. My room, at the end of the upstairs hallway, was a cramped space with a slanted […]"

It was the fall of my fourteenth year, and the old house on Hemlock Road had always felt like it was holding its breath. The walls were thick with peeling floral wallpaper, and the radiators clanked like ancient bones. My room, at the end of the upstairs hallway, was a cramped space with a slanted ceiling and a single window that looked out onto the overgrown backyard. I’d never liked that room, but it was mine.

October came with a chill that seeped through the drafty panes. Halloween night, I lay in bed, the glow of a jack-o’-lantern from the neighbor’s porch casting a flickering orange dance on my ceiling. Sleep wouldn’t come. My mind churned with the day’s sugar rush and the vague unease that had clung to me since dusk. I turned on my side, then my back, staring at the dark shapes of my furniture. The old dresser, the stack of books on my nightstand, the full-length mirror in the corner that always seemed to catch my eye at the worst moments.

Then, without any sound, a figure materialized beside that mirror. It stood so still, so suddenly, that my breath caught. It took the form of a young man – perhaps seventeen – with a face pale as bone and eyes that were dark, fathomless pits. He wore a tattered denim jacket over a grey hoodie, and his hands hung limp at his sides, fingers slightly curled. He didn’t blink. He just stared at me from across the room, his expression unreadable, almost bored. I could see every detail – the frayed threads on his sleeve, the scuff on his sneakers – but there was a wrongness to him, a translucence that made my heart hammer. After about twenty seconds, he was gone, as if he’d never been there. I didn’t move for a long time, staring at the empty space, trying to convince myself I’d imagined it.

But I hadn’t. November brought more visits. Always at night, always in that same spot by the mirror. The first time he reappeared, I was reading, and I felt a sudden drop in temperature. I looked up, and there he was, closer this time. His head was tilted, as if studying me. I tried to speak, but my voice was a dry rasp. He took a step forward, and my muscles locked. He was close enough now that I could see a faint, web-like pattern of cracks on his skin, like porcelain. He opened his mouth, but no sound came. Instead, a single word appeared in my mind, like a whisper I couldn’t hear: ‘Stay.’ Then he vanished.

After that, I began to see him outside my room. In the hallway at night, a shadow that lingered at the edge of my vision. Once, I caught him standing at the foot of the stairs, his head turned up toward my door. I started sleeping with the lights on, but that didn’t stop him from appearing in the glow of my lamp, his presence a cold weight in the room. I told my parents, but they attributed it to nightmares, to an overactive imagination. I began to doubt myself, to wonder if I was losing my mind.

December arrived, and the visits grew more frequent. He started to speak, but not in words I could hear. He would mouth things, and I would feel their meaning in my chest – a deep, resonating hum that vibrated through my bones. One night, he pointed to the mirror, then to me, and then back to himself. I knew he wanted me to look into the mirror, but I was terrified. I refused. He frowned, and for the first time, his expression changed – a flicker of frustration, then something darker. He raised his hand and gestured again, more insistently.

I couldn’t resist. Slowly, I got out of bed and walked to the mirror. My reflection stared back, pale and scared. But behind my reflection, I saw him. And in the mirror, he looked solid – fully real. He was smiling, but it was a terrible smile, too wide, full of sharp little teeth. He reached out and touched the glass, and I felt a cold finger trace down my spine. Then he spoke, and this time I heard his voice – thin and wispy, like wind through dead leaves: ‘You see me now. You can’t unsee me.’ I stumbled backward, away from the mirror, but he was already gone.

On the last night of December, I woke to find him sitting on the edge of my bed. His weight didn’t depress the mattress, but I felt his presence like a physical pressure. He leaned close, and his breath was the smell of old dust and something rotting. He said, ‘We’re going to be together now. Forever.’ I tried to scream, but my throat was closed. He placed a hand on my chest, and an icy cold spread through me. I felt my heart slow, then stop – but only for a moment. Then it restarted with a jolt, and I gasped.

He was gone, but I knew it wasn’t over. The next morning, I looked in the mirror, and for a split second, I saw his face over my shoulder, grinning. It’s been months, and he still hasn’t left. I don’t know what he wants, but I know he’s waiting. Every night, I feel his cold breath, and I see his reflection in every dark window. He’s part of me now, the mannequin in the corner, always watching, always waiting. And I know that sooner or later, he’ll take me to the other side of the glass.

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