Two summers ago, my mother and I drove north to visit my aunt in the highlands. We left on a damp Monday morning, the car heavy with the scent of rain and old coffee. My mother, a woman of stubborn habits, refused to fly, so we took the long route, skirting the coast and climbing into the hills. The landscape turned wild, with stone walls and sheep grazing on slopes that seemed to lean toward the grey sky. We had planned to stop at her old friend, Marta’s place, for the night before the final leg home.
Marta’s house was a sprawling Victorian farmhouse, tucked into a fold of the hills, a mile from the nearest neighbor. The gravel driveway crunched under our tires as we arrived, just as the sky split open. The storm hit with a fury I had never seen—rain like a curtain, lightning cracking the heavens, and thunder that shook the car windows. We made a dash for the porch, soaked in seconds, and Marta welcomed us with a warm hug and the smell of baking bread.
The house was a labyrinth of renovations. Dust sheets covered furniture, ladders leaned against walls, and the air smelled of plaster and fresh paint. Marta apologized profusely, explaining the spare rooms were unusable, but we were more than welcome to crash in the living room, which was the only finished space. We set up camp on the sofa and an inflatable mattress, the storm howling outside like a hungry thing.
That night, after a hearty stew and too much wine, we turned in early. The storm had worn us out. I lay on the sofa, listening to the wind whistle through the ancient window frames, and the occasional groan of the house settling. My mother snored softly on the mattress beside me, and Marta had retired to her bedroom upstairs. I must have dozed off, because I woke to an odd silence. The storm had passed, and the only sound was a faint, rhythmic scratching, like a branch against glass. But outside the window, the sky was clear, and the moon cast a pale light over the garden. The scratching came from the walls.
I sat up, heart thumping. The sound was not that of a branch but of something inside the walls—a slow, deliberate scrape, as if a creature were dragging its claws along the plaster. I thought of rats, but this was too heavy, too insistent. I pulled on my jacket and stepped into the hallway, which was lit by a single bare bulb. The dust sheets hung like ghosts, and the air was cold, carrying a faint, sweet odor, like old perfume. The scratching grew louder as I approached the staircase, and I noticed that the tarp on the floor seemed to move slightly, as if something was beneath it, shifting.
I should have woken my mother, but curiosity got the better of me. I lifted a corner of the tarp. Underneath was bare floorboards, and there, in the center of the hall, a section of the floor had been cut open, revealing a dark gap. The scratching was coming from below, from the crawlspace under the house. I knelt, peering into the darkness. The smell was stronger now, cloying and familiar, and I realized it was the scent of my grandmother’s attic, where she kept old trunks and mothballs. And then, a voice, soft and thin, like a child’s whisper, called my name.
I jolted back, my head hitting the wall. The voice was unmistakable. It was my mother’s voice, but younger, and it came from the hole in the floor. It said, ‘Don’t leave me down here.’ I scrambled to my feet and ran back to the living room, shaking my mother awake. She was groggy, annoyed, but I insisted she come see. When we returned to the hall, the cut floorboard was closed, the tarp smooth and undisturbed. She thought I’d had a nightmare, but I knew what I’d heard.
The next morning, we were set to leave, but the storm had flooded the roads, and we were stranded for another night. Marta, apologetic, offered to show us around the house, since we were stuck. She led us through the renovated rooms, all bright and new, but in one of the upstairs bedrooms, there was a locked door. She hesitated, then told us it was the old nursery, closed off during the renovation because of water damage. But I saw her key turn, and the door swung open to reveal a room frozen in time—dusty crib, faded wallpaper with faded animals, and a rocking chair that creaked on its own, though the windows were shut.
On the wall, someone had scratched our surnames into the plaster, right above the crib. My mother went pale, and I felt a chill. Marta said the previous owner had a daughter who drowned in the well decades ago, and that the house had a ‘presence’. We laughed it off, but that night, I couldn’t sleep. I heard the scratching again, and this time, it was accompanied by the sound of a child crying. I crept to the door of the living room and looked out. The hallway was dark, but I saw a small figure at the end, wearing a white nightgown, its hair dripping wet. It turned, and I saw its face—not a child’s face, but my own, gaunt and hollow, my eyes like black pits. It pointed to the floor, and then it vanished.
I screamed, and my mother and Marta rushed out. When they reached me, I was pointing at the spot on the floor where I’d seen the cut boards. Marta paled. She grabbed a crowbar and pried up the boards, revealing a small crawlspace. Inside, we found an old, rusted well, covered with a rotted wooden lid. Marta lifted it, and the smell of decay washed over us. At the bottom, glinting in the flashlight, were the bones of a child, and a small, tarnished locket. My mother recognized it—it was my grandmother’s, given to her daughter who died young. But my mother never had a sister.
We left that day, driving through the flooded roads, not speaking. I never told my mother what I saw in the nursery mirror, or that the child in the hall had my face. But sometimes, late at night, I still hear the scratching in my walls, and a voice that whispers my name, begging not to be left behind. And I wonder if the child that drowned was ever a child at all, or something that wears the faces of the living to find its way out.