The Hollow Wall

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Story Premise 5 min read (964 words)

"I haven’t slept in my own room for three weeks now. Ever since that thing in the closet tried to pull the breath out of me, I’ve been crashing on the pull-out couch in my sister’s den. My parents think I’ve lost it. My brother calls me a coward. I’m starting to wonder if they’re […]"

I haven’t slept in my own room for three weeks now. Ever since that thing in the closet tried to pull the breath out of me, I’ve been crashing on the pull-out couch in my sister’s den. My parents think I’ve lost it. My brother calls me a coward. I’m starting to wonder if they’re right.

It was a Saturday, the 12th of April, when everything went to hell again. I woke up at 3:47 AM to a sound that made my blood run cold: a low, guttural growl from the hallway. That was Bella, our golden retriever, and she only growled like that when something was wrong. Then came the barking—frantic, explosive, like she was facing down an intruder.

I kicked off the blanket and stumbled to the door, my heart hammering. I cracked it open, and Bella stood rigid, fur bristling along her spine, teeth bared at the empty hallway. I flicked on every light I could reach, flooding the corridor with harsh yellow light. The hallway was empty. Quiet. But Bella didn’t relax. She just stood there, eyes fixed on a spot near the top of the stairs, growling low in her chest.

I walked downstairs, checking every room—kitchen, dining room, living room. Everyone was asleep, doors closed, snoring softly. Nothing was out of place. But even as I came back up, Bella hadn’t moved. She was still staring at that same spot on the wall. I called her, and she finally turned, but she didn’t follow. She just whined, then trotted into the den and collapsed on the floor, but her eyes never left the wall.

I tried to calm her, scratching behind her ears, but she kept flicking her gaze to a particular patch of paint near the ceiling. It was a subtle move, like she was tracking something that crawled along the plaster. There was nothing there—no bug, no shadow, just old paint. But the way her eyes moved, quick and precise, made my skin crawl.

I sat on the edge of the couch, watching her, and that’s when I noticed the wall itself. It was an interior wall, shared with the bathroom. But there was a faint, almost imperceptible crack running from the ceiling down to the baseboard, and the paint seemed slightly discolored along it, like water damage. I’d never noticed it before.

I couldn’t shake the feeling that something was wrong with that wall. Not just the crack, but the whole thing. It seemed too thick, too solid. I pressed my ear against it, and I could hear a faint, rhythmic hum, like a distant motor, but the power was off in this part of the house—we had a separate breaker for the den.

Bella whimpered, and I looked up just in time to see her eyes dart upward, tracking something that wasn’t there. Then she suddenly jumped up, ran to the door, and barked once, sharp and urgent. I opened the door, and she bolted out, down the hallway, and stopped at the linen closet at the end. She sat there, staring at the door, her tail wagging nervously.

I walked over and opened the closet. It was full of towels and old sheets, nothing else. Bella stuck her head inside and sniffed, then backed out, whining. She looked at me with those big, worried eyes, and I swear she was trying to tell me something.

That’s when I remembered the dream I had the night before. I was in some kind of underground tunnel, my hands pressed against a rough, wet wall, and I could hear someone breathing on the other side. The breathing matched the rhythm of a heartbeat—slow, steady, too calm to be human. And in the dream, I knew that if I found the right place in the wall, I could open it.

Now, standing in front of the linen closet, I felt a pull, like an invisible string tugging me toward the back panel. I moved the towels aside and pressed on the wood. It gave way with a soft click, and a section of the paneling swung inward, revealing a dark gap.

I stood there, my breath caught in my throat. Behind that panel was a narrow, hollow space, about a foot wide, running up and down between the studs. It was completely dark, and there was a smell like old dust and something metallic. I grabbed my phone, switched on the flashlight, and shone it inside.

The beam illuminated vertical walls of raw wood, coated in grime. And there, at the bottom, was something that made my heart stop: a small, child-sized handprint, pressed into the dust. It was fresh, the lines of the palm and fingers clearly defined.

I heard Bella growl again, low and deep, and I spun around. She was staring at the handprint, her eyes wide, her body taut. Then she started barking, barking at that handprint as if it were alive.

I slammed the panel shut and backed away, my hands shaking. I didn’t sleep the rest of the night. I sat in the corner of the den, holding Bella, and I watched that wall. And in the gray light of dawn, I saw the panel move. Just a fraction. A tiny, almost imperceptible shift. Like something was pushing from the other side.

My parents think I’m imagining things. My brother says I need therapy. But Bella sees it too. She won’t go near that wall now. She whines and hides under the bed whenever I mention it.

But I know what I saw. And I know that there’s a space in the wall, a hollow space, and it’s not empty. It’s waiting. And I think I know what it wants.

It wants me to open it again.

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