The old cranberry bog had been in our family for three generations, a sprawling, muddy expanse that turned crimson every autumn. My father, a taciturn man with calloused hands, oversaw the harvest with a quiet intensity that bordered on obsession. I was twelve that year, old enough to help but too young to understand why the bog felt different at night.
Our house, a weathered farmhouse, sat at the edge of the property, its windows facing the dark water. My room, tucked under the eaves, had a single window that looked out over the floating cranberries. It was in that room, in the thick of a moonless night, that I first heard it: a soft, rhythmic sucking sound, like something drawing moisture from the earth. I dismissed it as the wind, but it grew louder, more deliberate.
I lay in bed, listening, when a pale, almost translucent hand pressed against the glass from outside. It was long-fingered, with webbing between the digits, and it left a glistening trail as it slid down. I froze, my breath caught in my throat. The hand was followed by a face—a gaunt, featureless visage with two dark pits where eyes should be. It stared at me, or through me, and then the vision vanished, leaving only the wet smear on the window.
I told my father the next morning, but he waved it off, muttering about ‘bog fever’ and my overactive imagination. Yet I noticed he avoided the bog after dark, and he started keeping a shotgun by the door. The harvest continued, and the workers, mostly seasonal migrants, began to whisper in their own tongues, casting nervous glances at the water. One of them, an old man with a weather-beaten face, approached me as I was hauling a crate of berries. ‘You see the hollow ones, boy?’ he asked. ‘They come when the harvest is good, when the water is ripe. They take what’s theirs.’
That night, I couldn’t sleep. I watched the bog from my window, the moonlight turning the floating berries into dark, oily spots. The sucking sound returned, now accompanied by a faint, high-pitched keening. I saw them then: dozens of figures emerging from the water, their skin glistening, their limbs elongating as they crawled onto the shore. They moved with an unnatural fluidity, bowing and swaying as if performing a ritual.
I crept downstairs, my heart hammering. My father was in the kitchen, cleaning his gun. He looked up, and for the first time, I saw fear in his eyes. ‘Stay inside,’ he said, but his voice was shaky. ‘Don’t go near the water.’ But the water was already coming to us. A thin film of cranberry-colored mud seeped under the door, and the keening grew louder, a chorus of hungry voices.
Suddenly, the door burst open, and a creature stood there, taller than any man, dripping wet, its head tilted at an unnatural angle. It reached for my father, and I screamed. My father fired the shotgun, but the pellets passed through the creature as if it were made of mist. It didn’t stop. It seized my father and dragged him toward the bog. I ran, grabbing a flare from the emergency kit, and lit it. The bright red light made the creature recoil, hissing, and for a moment, it released my father. I pulled him inside and slammed the door, but even as the flame died, I knew it wasn’t over.
We abandoned the farm that night, driving away with nothing but the clothes on our backs. As the house disappeared in the rearview, I saw them in the headlights: hundreds of shapes standing in the cranberry field, their heads lowered as if in mourning. My father never spoke of it again, but he aged decades in a year, and we moved constantly, never staying in one place for long.
Years later, as a young man, I found myself in a coastal town in the Pacific Northwest, working as a fisheries inspector. It was a rainy, desolate place, and the ocean was a churning gray. One evening, I was inspecting a processing plant when I saw a shipment of strange, dark fish—elongated, with hollow, empty eyes. The plant manager, a nervous man, said they were a new species from the deep. But I recognized them. They were the same creatures, in a different form. That night, I had a dream of the bog, of the figures rising, and I knew I hadn’t escaped. They had just found a new place to wait.
I quit the next day, but it was too late. The water in the plant’s holding tanks rippled, and I saw a familiar face looking back at me—my father’s, pale and twisted, his eyes gone. The creatures had taken him, and now they had a link to me. I ran, but every body of water reflected them, and every sound of dripping water echoed with their keening.
Now, I live inland, in a dry desert town, far from any water. But last night, as the rain began to fall for the first time in months, I heard the sucking sound outside my window. I looked out, and there they were, standing in the parking lot, their forms shimmering with rain. They had found me again. This time, I knew there was nowhere to run. I am writing this as a warning, but I fear it is already too late. The hollow ones are patient, and they always come for their own.