The Hollow Between Pines

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"I was eight when we bought the Airstream, a rusted tin can that smelled of mildew and old cigarettes. My father, a man who believed a bargain was a moral victory, had gotten it for a song from a widow in Tuscaloosa. My mother, ever the optimist, saw it as a grand adventure for our […]"

I was eight when we bought the Airstream, a rusted tin can that smelled of mildew and old cigarettes. My father, a man who believed a bargain was a moral victory, had gotten it for a song from a widow in Tuscaloosa. My mother, ever the optimist, saw it as a grand adventure for our family of four. My sister, Ruth, who was fourteen and already too cool for all of us, rolled her eyes so hard I thought they’d stick. And me, Milo, I was just excited to be missing a week of school.

Our destination was a place called Blackthorn Hollow, a state park nestled in the foothills of the Blue Ridge Mountains. The brochure promised ‘secluded campsites’ and ‘unspoiled wilderness.’ It delivered on both, perhaps too well. The road to our site was a winding gravel track that seemed to go on for miles, the trees closing in overhead until the afternoon light was a dappled memory. When we finally arrived, the clearing felt less like a welcome and more like a held breath.

The Airstream was parked on a patch of packed dirt, surrounded by a ring of towering pines. The air was thick with the smell of damp earth and pine needles, and a silence that was almost oppressive. My father, a man who could charm his way through any sales pitch, tried to make a joke about the ‘rustic charm.’ My mother’s smile was tight. Ruth just stared at the trees, her arms crossed.

That first night, I couldn’t sleep. The wind made a sound like something rubbing against the roof, a dry, insistent rasping. I heard my parents whispering in the front bunk, their voices a low murmur I couldn’t quite make out. At some point, I must have drifted off, because the next thing I knew, I was awake in the dead of night, a cold dread pooling in my stomach. The air inside the camper was freezing, and the silence was complete, even the wind had stopped.

Then I heard it: a sound like something being dragged across the gravel outside. A slow, heavy scrape, pause, then another. My heart hammered against my ribs. I wanted to call out to my parents, but my throat was tight, my voice a frozen lump. The scraping stopped just outside our door. Then, a sound that will haunt me forever: a long, slow creak, like the camper’s metal skin was being tested, pushed inward. And then, a voice, low and guttural, from outside: ‘Let me in.’

I must have screamed, because the next thing I remember is my father’s arms around me, his face pale in the flashlight beam. He and my mother had heard it too. They spent the rest of the night with us in the back bunk, the doors locked, the windows checked a hundred times. But in the morning, there were no footprints, no scratches, nothing. My father chalked it up to a bear, or a prankster. My mother said nothing, but I saw her eyes darting toward the treeline.

The second night, we decided to stay. My father, a stubborn man, said we wouldn’t be scared off by some animal. We built a fire, the flames a feeble attempt at normalcy. Ruth, for once, was quiet, her eyes wide as she stared into the darkness beyond the firelight. As the fire died down, the scraping sound returned, this time from the other side of the clearing, near the trees. Then a cracking sound, like branches being snapped. And then, a voice, different from the first, higher, more childish: ‘Why won’t you play with us?’

This time, we didn’t wait for morning. We packed up in the dark, throwing things into the car with trembling hands. My father’s face was grim as he cranked the engine, and we sped away, the gravel spitting behind us. I looked back once, and in the flickering light of the dying fire, I saw a shape standing at the edge of the clearing, tall and impossibly thin, its head tilted at an unnatural angle. And I knew, with a certainty that has never left me, that it was not human.

We never spoke of Blackthorn Hollow again. My parents sold the Airstream a month later, at a loss. Ruth went to college and became a psychologist, and I know she’s tried to rationalize it all away. But I can’t. I remember that voice, that scraping sound, that shape in the dark. And I know that whatever we disturbed there, in that hollow between the pines, it wasn’t finished with us. It’s just waiting, patient as the roots of those ancient trees, for us to come back.

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