The Hanged Woman of the Tall Pine

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"The old house on Cedar Lane had always felt like a living thing, its wooden bones creaking in the wind, its windows like unblinking eyes. I was only six when we moved there, my mother and I, after my father left. She took the room at the end of the hall, and I slept in […]"

The old house on Cedar Lane had always felt like a living thing, its wooden bones creaking in the wind, its windows like unblinking eyes. I was only six when we moved there, my mother and I, after my father left. She took the room at the end of the hall, and I slept in the one next to hers, but on nights when the shadows grew long and the floorboards groaned, I would crawl into her bed, seeking warmth and safety. That night, I was buried under the quilt, my face pressed into the pillow, when I woke with a start. It wasn’t a sound that woke me, but a feeling—a deep, primal unease that made my skin prickle. I lay still, my heart thudding, and I knew with certainty that I was not alone. Something was in the room with us. I could feel its gaze like a physical weight on my back.

I wanted to pull the quilt over my head and hide, but the feeling was so strong that I knew I had to look. I slowly, inch by inch, lowered the edge of the blanket and peered out. The room was dark, lit only by the faint glow of the streetlight filtering through the curtains. My mother lay on the other side of the bed, her breathing deep and regular, but she was not what drew my attention. At the foot of the bed, facing the wall, stood a woman. She was tall and gaunt, her white dress hanging limp, her hair a dark curtain that hid her face. She wasn’t looking at me; she was staring at a spot on the wall just above my mother’s head, and she was stretching upward, her arms reaching toward the ceiling as if trying to grasp something. Her fingers were long and thin, and they twitched slightly. I felt a cold dread wash over me, and I yanked the blanket back over my face.

For what felt like hours, I lay there, trembling, my breath shallow. I could hear nothing, but I felt the air grow colder, and I knew she was moving. Slowly, I forced myself to peek out again. This time, the woman was closer. She had turned slightly, and I could glimpse her profile. Her skin was pale as bone, and her eyes were dark hollows. She was still reaching, but now her hands were gripping something just above the bed—something that shimmered in the dim light, like a thread or a strand of silk. I watched, frozen, as she pulled on it, and I heard my mother gasp in her sleep. The woman tugged again, and my mother’s breath grew ragged, as if she were struggling. In a panic, I screamed, a shrill sound that tore from my throat. The woman’s head snapped in my direction, and her mouth opened in a silent wide O. Then the room was filled with a screaming sound, not from the woman, but from the air itself, and I felt the world tip.

I woke up on the floor, wrapped in the quilt, my mother kneeling beside me, shaking me. She looked terrified, her face white. She said I had been screaming in my sleep, thrashing so violently that I had fallen out of bed. I tried to tell her about the woman, but she hushed me, saying it was just a nightmare. She held me until dawn, but I could feel her trembling too. When morning came, I saw the tall pine tree outside our window, its branches swaying in the breeze. And I noticed something that made my blood run cold: a thick, gnarled rope hanging from one of the highest branches, swinging gently, as if someone had just let go of it. I pointed at it, but my mother wouldn’t look. She claimed it had always been there, but I knew better.

The next night, I refused to sleep in her bed. I stayed in my own room, with the door locked and the lights on. But when I finally fell asleep, I dreamed of the woman again. This time, she was hanging from the pine tree, her neck twisted, her body swaying. In the dream, she looked at me with hollow eyes and whispered, ‘I only want to help.’ I woke with a scream, and I have not slept without a light since.

Years later, when I was old enough to understand, I asked my mother about the house on Cedar Lane. She grew silent, then said that the previous owner, a lonely woman, had hanged herself in the backyard. They had cut her down, but they could never find the rope. It had vanished. But as she spoke, I knew where it was: it was the rope on the tree, and the woman was still trying to reach it, to tie it again. And maybe, I thought, she had been trying to take my mother with her. I never slept in that house again, and we moved shortly after. But sometimes, on quiet nights, I see her still—her pale face turned to the wall, her fingers reaching upward, seeking the noose that had been taken from her.

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