It was a little past eleven on a humid Tuesday night when I found myself sprawled on the living room couch, a pile of sweat-damp blankets wrapped around my feverish body. My father, exhausted from another double shift, had crashed on the floor beside me, his snoring a rhythmic counterpoint to the cheerful chaos of the baking show flickering on the TV. I was drifting in and out of a restless sleep, my mind a fog of half-formed dreams, when my gaze snagged on the hallway door that led to my bedroom. The door was ajar, a sliver of darkness visible beyond. I stared, willing my tired eyes to focus, and for a moment, I could have sworn I saw a shape—a darker patch against the gloom—just inside the frame. It was there and then gone, like a flicker of static. I blinked, rubbed my eyes, and told myself it was the fever playing tricks on me.
About half an hour later, the pressure in my bladder became too insistent to ignore. I untangled myself from the blankets, careful not to wake my father, and padded down the dim hallway toward the bathroom. The apartment was an old converted warehouse, with high ceilings and exposed pipes that clicked and groaned at all hours. As I walked, I felt it—a presence behind me, a subtle shift in the air, a soft footfall that mirrored my own. I spun around, expecting to see my father standing there, maybe having woken up for a glass of water. But the hallway was empty, the living room light casting long shadows that didn’t quite match the furniture. My father was still a lump on the floor, his breathing unchanged. My heart started to pound.
I hurried into the bathroom and flicked on the light, the fluorescent tube buzzing to life with a sickly hum. The room was small, dominated by a claw-foot tub with a sliding glass door enclosure—a relic from the building’s industrial past. I did my business as quickly as I could, trying to ignore the sensation of being watched. As I washed my hands, I heard it again: a raspy, labored breathing, like someone standing just behind me, trying to catch their breath. The sound was so close I could almost feel the warmth of it on my neck. I whirled around, soap suds flying. The bathroom was empty. The shower curtain—the glass door—was fogged, but I could see my own reflection, pale and terrified.
I fled the bathroom, slamming the door behind me, and ran back to the living room, my heart hammering. I shook my father awake, but he only grumbled and turned over. I spent the rest of the night on the couch, the TV still on, the light from the screen casting dancing shapes on the ceiling. I didn’t sleep.
This wasn’t the first time. When we first moved into this apartment, about a year ago, I started to feel a presence in the bathroom, especially in the shower. We had those sliding glass doors, and every time I stepped under the spray, I would feel eyes on me. I’d turn off the water and peer through the frosted glass, half-expecting to see a figure looming on the other side. But there was never anything there. I chalked it up to the strangeness of the building, the odd acoustics, the way the pipes moaned.
But tonight, that breathing—it was too real. And as I lay on the couch, staring at the doorway, I noticed something I hadn’t seen before. The door to my bedroom was now fully open, and in the darkness beyond, there was a faint, glassy shimmer, like light reflecting off a wet surface. It was almost as if a canopy of glass had descended over the room, trapping something inside. The thought made me shudder.
The next morning, I told my father I wanted to move. He laughed, said I was being dramatic, that it was just an old building settling. But I knew what I felt. And as I gathered my things, I caught a glimpse of the bathroom door at the end of the hall. It was ajar, and for a split second, I saw a shadowy figure standing just inside, breathing heavily, as if it had been waiting all night. Then it was gone, leaving only the empty hallway and the lingering sense that something was watching, waiting for me to come back.