The Doorknob’s Turn

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"Our cottage sat at the edge of a marsh, its wooden bones aching with every gust that rolled off the reeds. When Father began the new house a hundred yards away, he said the old one had served its purpose, and it was time to let it rot. But we had to keep living in […]"

Our cottage sat at the edge of a marsh, its wooden bones aching with every gust that rolled off the reeds. When Father began the new house a hundred yards away, he said the old one had served its purpose, and it was time to let it rot. But we had to keep living in the old one until the new one was weather-tight, so we stayed, breathing in the damp and the dust.

I was nine when we moved into the old cottage, and I was given the smallest bedroom at the end of the hall. The biggest room, the one with the bay window that looked out onto the marsh, had belonged to the last tenant, a reclusive man named Elroy Wrenn. He had died there, alone, and the estate had sold the place cheap to my father. I never went into that room, not even to peek. There was a feeling about it, like the air was thicker near the threshold, and the doorknob always felt cold to the touch even in August.

My bed was against the wall opposite the door. Every night, I would lay there, listening to the frogs and the night birds, and every night, at some ungodly hour, I would see the door handle move. It wasn’t a quick turn, but a slow, deliberate press, as if someone were testing it from the other side. Then the door would creak open a few inches, and there would be nothing there—just the dark hallway, black and empty. I would stare at that opening, my heart pounding, until I couldn’t keep my eyes open anymore. I never told Father; he would have said I was imagining things.

Father died when I was twelve. A sudden heart attack in the fields, and just like that, he was gone. The new house sat unfinished, a skeleton of timber and tar paper. Mother was lost for a while, then she met Roland, a contractor from the next town. He took over the building, and within a month, we moved into the new house, half-finished but livable. Roland built a porch onto the back, and for the windows, he used the old ones from the cottage, salvaged before it was torn down. I remember watching him haul the glass through the reeds, the panes reflecting the grey sky.

That first winter in the new house, sleep became a stranger. I would lie awake past midnight, listening to the house settle, and I would hear things that didn’t belong. The sofa in the living room—an old thing we’d brought from the cottage—would creak as if someone were sitting on it. I’d creep out of my room and stand in the hallway, peering into the dark, and the cushion would be empty, but the indentation of a body would still be there, slowly fading. Then came the sounds: footsteps in the attic, laughter muffled as if behind a closed door, a baby’s cry from somewhere deep in the walls, and the dragging—a heavy, rhythmic scrape across the floorboards above my ceiling, like something being hauled against its will.

One night, around four in the morning, I was getting ready for bed. I’d fallen asleep on the couch and had just woken up. I shuffled to the bathroom to do my business, the cold tiles biting my bare feet. I stood at the sink, running the water, and I saw my own reflection in the mirror—pale, tired, with dark circles under my eyes. Then I looked down at the sink, and the water was turning brown. I blinked, and it was clear again, but a weird, cloying smell filled the room, like cut grass and old coins.

I turned off the tap and that’s when I heard it: the front door opened. Not a knock, but a slow, deliberate turn of the knob, just like in the old cottage. I froze, listening. Footsteps crossed the living room, heavy and purposeful, and then stopped. I waited, my breath shallow, and then the footsteps started again, coming down the hall toward the bathroom. I reached for the lock, but my hand was shaking, and the door didn’t have one. I pressed my back against the wall, the cold seeping through my pajamas.

The footsteps stopped right outside the door. I could hear breathing, ragged and wet. Then the doorknob began to turn, slowly, deliberately, just like it had in the old cottage. But this time, when the door creaked open, I didn’t see an empty hallway. There, in the dim light, stood a figure—a man, tall and thin, wearing clothes that seemed too big for him. His face was a blur, as if out of focus, and his hand was still on the knob. He tilted his head, and I heard a sound that was half laugh, half sob.

He stepped into the room, and the scent of grass and coppers intensified. I tried to scream, but my voice was gone. He walked toward me, past me, and into the bathroom mirror. In the glass, I saw his reflection, but it wasn’t him—it was Father, with the same grey face he had in his coffin. He stared at me, then reached out a hand and touched the mirror, and the surface rippled like water.

I ran. I ran out of the bathroom, through the hall, out the front door, and into the marsh. The reeds were sharp, the mud cold, but I didn’t stop until I reached the old cottage site. It was gone, just a patch of bare earth. I fell to my knees, sobbing. When I looked back at the new house, I saw a light in my bedroom window, and the silhouette of a figure looking out. It raised a hand and waved.

Now the house is finished. I live there still, because I have nowhere else to go. But I keep every door in the place locked, and I’ve removed all the doorknobs. The windows are sealed shut, and I’ve boarded up the ones from the old cottage. Yet every night, at four in the morning, I feel the air stir, and I hear the faint jingle of a key turning in a lock, and the sound of a door opening where there should be none. I don’t sleep anymore. I just sit in the center of the room, watching the door, waiting for it to turn.

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