The Datura Bloom

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"At thirteen, I knew the old mill house was a mistake. My parents, ever the optimists, saw a fixer-upper with charm; I saw peeling wallpaper and a basement that smelled of wet earth and rust. That summer, they had booked a rare night out, leaving me to babysit my little brother, Theo, who was seven […]"

At thirteen, I knew the old mill house was a mistake. My parents, ever the optimists, saw a fixer-upper with charm; I saw peeling wallpaper and a basement that smelled of wet earth and rust. That summer, they had booked a rare night out, leaving me to babysit my little brother, Theo, who was seven and prone to nightmares. We lived on the edge of the Dunmore Woods, where the trees grew so thick they seemed to swallow the light, and the only neighbor was a half-mile down a gravel road.

The evening started quiet. I made grilled cheese for dinner, Theo laughed at a cartoon, and I tried to read a book, but my eyes kept drifting to the windows. The woods beyond the yard felt like a dark ocean. At ten o’clock, a scream cut through the house, high and sharp, like a fox caught in a trap. I bolted upstairs, heart hammering. Theo’s room was silent. He was fast asleep, his chest rising and falling in a gentle rhythm, face peaceful. I lingered, waiting, but he didn’t stir.

Then another scream, from downstairs. It wasn’t Theo. It wasn’t even human. It was a sound that seemed to come from the walls themselves, a twisted, wailing cry that made my blood freeze. I ran to the phone and called my parents, sobbing. They laughed it off, told me it was just the wind or the old house settling, and to go back to sleep. Sleep? I couldn’t. I dragged Theo out of bed and into my room, locking the door behind us. I pulled the covers over our heads, listening to the silence that followed.

Ten minutes later, a door slammed downstairs. Not a gentle, wind-caught slam, but a violent, angry one, like a fist hitting wood. I told myself it was the old house, but my heart said otherwise. I made a decision: I had to check. I grabbed the heaviest thing I could find—a brass candlestick from the mantel—and crept down the stairs, my bare feet cold on the worn steps.

The hallway was dark, the only light spilling from the kitchen. I could see the back door was ajar, a sliver of night showing. I must have left it unlocked; my parents always warned me to check. I pushed it closed, and as the latch clicked, I heard a sound behind me, a low, wet breathing. I spun around, and there, at the end of the hall, stood a figure—tall and thin, with skin like stretched parchment, and eyes that were the color of a bruise. It tilted its head, and I could hear a whisper, but it wasn’t coming from its mouth; it was coming from inside my skull, a language that felt like broken glass.

I screamed, dropped the candlestick, and ran. I took the stairs two at a time, slammed my door, and piled furniture against it. Theo was awake, crying. I held him, rocking, telling him it was okay, but I didn’t believe it. I heard footsteps below, slow and deliberate, moving through the rooms. The whispers grew louder, a chorus of them, and the air grew cold. I looked out the window and saw a shape moving in the woods, matching the thing in the house. It was everywhere, and it was closing in.

Then, silence. The footsteps stopped. The whispers faded. I held my breath. After what felt like an eternity, I heard a new sound: a soft, rhythmic tapping on the window pane. I turned slowly. The figure was pressed against the glass, its face inches from mine, its mouth stretched into a smile that didn’t reach its eyes. It tapped again, and then it said, in a voice that was almost human, “Let me in, little mother.”

I screamed, and in that moment, the figure vanished. The house was still. I waited, afraid to move, but nothing happened. When dawn broke, I finally unlocked the door and crept out. The house was empty, no sign of the intruder. But in the kitchen, on the table, lay a single, beautiful, white flower—a Datura bloom, known for its poisonous beauty. I had never seen one before, and I never saw the figure again, but from that night on, Theo would sometimes wake up screaming, claiming that a man with bruises for eyes was standing over his bed, calling him by my name. And sometimes, late at night, when the wind blows through Dunmore Woods, I swear I can hear that same high-pitched scream, and I know it’s waiting for me to let it in again.

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