The Crop Watcher

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"It was a lazy Sunday in the heart of the Karoo, and my mother, her new husband, and I were taking a scenic drive through the arid farmland that stretched for miles under a pale, merciless sun. The road was a ribbon of dust that coiled between vast expanses of scrub and recently ploughed fields, […]"

It was a lazy Sunday in the heart of the Karoo, and my mother, her new husband, and I were taking a scenic drive through the arid farmland that stretched for miles under a pale, merciless sun. The road was a ribbon of dust that coiled between vast expanses of scrub and recently ploughed fields, the earth dark and raw like a wound. My stepfather, a quiet man with a penchant for old blues, hummed along to a scratchy cassette, while my mother pointed out a distant herd of springbok. I was fourteen, bored, and staring out the window at the monotony of the landscape, wishing for something, anything, to break the spell.

Then I saw it. In the middle of a vast, freshly tilled field, there was a dark gash in the earth, like a mouth open in a silent scream. My eyes, drawn by some instinct, fixed on that hole. As we approached, I could make out a figure inside it, small and hunched, moving with a frantic energy. It seemed to be digging, throwing clumps of dark soil that hung in the air like black smoke. I leaned closer to the window, my breath fogging the glass, and as the car drew level with the hole, the figure froze.

In a single, fluid motion, it launched itself out of the pit, landing on the ploughed ground with a spray of sand. It was no larger than a child, but its proportions were wrong. Its arms were long and thick, nearly as long as its legs, and it moved with a twisted, scuttling gait that used its forearms as much as its feet. Its skin was the color of wet ash, slick and dark, and its face, when it turned to look at us, was a mask of pure fury. Eyes, too large and too white, glared at the car, and its mouth opened in a silent snarl revealing rows of needle-sharp teeth. It took three deliberate steps toward us, its movement jerky and insectoid, and I swear I felt a wave of cold dread wash through the car. My mother gasped, my stepfather cursed and pressed the accelerator, and the creature stood there, unmoving, as we sped away.

I twisted in my seat, watching it shrink in the distance until it was just a dark speck against the red earth. My heart hammered against my ribs, and a cold sweat broke out on my palms. My mother asked if I had seen it, her voice trembling, but my stepfather refused to speak, his knuckles white on the steering wheel. Neither of them talked about it again that day, and I sat in the back, silent and shaking, replaying the image over and over in my mind. It had not looked human, not really. It had looked like a thing from a nightmare, a creature that had no business in the world of sunlight and Sunday drives.

That night, I couldn’t sleep. I lay in my bed, staring at the ceiling, listening to the wind moan across the veld. My window faced the open farmland that stretched behind our house, and every shadow seemed to move. I got up and peered out, scanning the darkness for any sign of movement, but there was nothing. Just the pale moon casting long shadows over the dead grass. I tried to convince myself that it had been a trick of the light, a stray dog, or a child playing some cruel game. But the memory was too vivid, too sharp. The way it had moved, the malevolent intelligence in those eyes, the sheer wrongness of its form—it was not something my young mind could rationalize.

A week later, I heard the dogs. Our two farm dogs, which had never been agitated before, were barking frantically from their kennels in the yard. I went to the window and saw them straining at their chains, hackles raised, eyes fixed on the field behind the house. The moon was bright, and I could see a dark shape crouched at the edge of the property, half-hidden by a scattering of thorn bushes. It was not large, but it was still, unnaturally still. The dogs’ barking intensified, but the shape did not move. I watched for what felt like hours, until my eyes grew heavy, and I finally retreated to bed, pulling the covers over my head.

The next morning, the dogs were gone. Their chains lay on the ground, snapped clean, as if something with immense strength had broken them. There was no blood, no sign of a struggle, just those broken chains and a silence that hung over the yard like a shroud. My mother cried, and my stepfather spent the day patrolling the fence line with a rifle, but he found nothing. I knew, deep in my gut, that it had come for them. That thing from the field had come for our dogs, and it had taken them without a trace. I didn’t sleep that night either, and I didn’t need to look out the window to know that it was there, watching the house, waiting.

Years have passed since that Sunday, but the memory has never faded. I have moved away, tried to bury that afternoon in the dust of the Karoo, but it resurfaces in my nightmares, in my waking thoughts at unexpected moments. My mother and stepfather are both gone now, and the farm has been sold. Yet sometimes, when I close my eyes, I see that creature standing in the field, its furious gaze locked on me. And I wonder if it is still there, in that ploughed earth, waiting for me to come back. The locals might call it a Tokkelossie, a thing of folklore and fear, but I know better. It is real, and it is patient. And I have never been able to shake the feeling that it is not done with me.

I have not been back to that place, and I never will. But wherever I go, I look over my shoulder, I avoid dark holes, and I am wary of any patch of freshly turned soil. The world is full of things we do not understand, and some of them are not meant to be seen. I saw one of them that Sunday, and it saw me. And it has not forgotten.

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