The Concrete Bloom

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"I met Marcus in the fourth grade, when he moved into the house across the cul-de-sac with the overgrown azaleas. We were the odd pair: me, the quiet kid who read encyclopedias for fun, and Marcus, the daredevil who could climb any tree and once jumped off the roof of the shed ‘just to see.’ […]"

I met Marcus in the fourth grade, when he moved into the house across the cul-de-sac with the overgrown azaleas. We were the odd pair: me, the quiet kid who read encyclopedias for fun, and Marcus, the daredevil who could climb any tree and once jumped off the roof of the shed ‘just to see.’ We were inseparable. He had a wild imagination, but his most persistent prophecy was about his own death. He told me once, when we were fifteen, sitting on the curb eating gas station slushies, that he’d die in a car crash on March 12th, his nineteenth birthday. I thought it was a joke, the kind of macabre game we played to feel grown-up. But he said it with such certainty, his eyes fixed on the distant highway, that a cold knot formed in my stomach.

March 12th, 2007. I was in college, three hours away, when my phone buzzed with a text from his brother, Alex: ‘Marcus is gone. Car accident. It was his birthday.’ The world tilted. I drove back that night, the highway an endless ribbon of black, the smell of rain and exhaust filling the car. I couldn’t shake the feeling that Marcus’s voice was in the wind, whispering something I couldn’t quite hear.

A week after the funeral, I was at a discount grocery store, pushing a cart with a new acquaintance, a guy named Diego from my chemistry class. We were in the frozen foods aisle, debating the merits of off-brand pizza rolls, when my phone started ringing. The screen lit up with Marcus’s name. I froze, the chill from the freezer biting my skin. Diego looked at me, confused. ‘You gonna get that?’ I shook my head, and the call went to voicemail. A moment later, a notification popped up: ‘New voicemail.’ My thumb trembled over the play button, but I couldn’t bring myself to press it. I handed the phone to Diego. He raised an eyebrow but took it, and pressed play. We both leaned in, my heart pounding against my ribs like a trapped bird.

The message was a low, guttural growl, almost subhuman. The words were slurred, mangled, but I could just make out the familiar insult we’d used as a greeting for a decade: ‘love you, *moron*.’ It was said with such a grinding intensity that it felt less like a memory and more like a threat. Diego’s face went pale. ‘Who is this?’ he whispered. I couldn’t answer. Marcus was dead. But the voicemail was there, saved on my phone, and no matter how many times I deleted it, it kept reappearing in my history, a stubborn ghost of data.

Years passed. I finished school, got a job, moved to a small town in the middle of the state, far from the memories. Alex and I kept in touch, drifting apart slowly until we didn’t. Then, in 2011, I received an invitation to Alex’s wedding. I went, of course. The wedding was beautiful, but the reception was held at a peculiar venue: an old, abandoned cement factory that had been converted into an event space. The towering silos and rusted machinery gave the place an industrial, post-apocalyptic feel. Alex, who had always been the more grounded of the two brothers, seemed nervous, tapping his glass, glancing at the empty dance floor. He told me he had a special tribute planned for Marcus, something he’d discovered in Marcus’s old locker.

After the toasts, Alex pulled me aside to a quiet corner near a massive, corroded furnace. He held up a small, rusty key. ‘Found this in a box of Marcus’s stuff. It’s for a unit at the old storage facility on Hilltop Road. Dad said he never told anyone about it.’ We drove there later that night, the silence between us heavy. The storage facility was a decaying building, its corridor lit by flickering fluorescents. Unit 13 was at the end of the hall, the door covered in dust. Alex’s key turned with a heavy click, and we stepped inside.

The room was mostly empty, save for a single, ancient desktop computer on a metal desk, humming softly. The screen was black, but when Alex touched the mouse, it flickered to life. There was a single file on the desktop, named ‘For Sarah.’ That was my name. Alex looked at me, his face unreadable. ‘I never knew you two were that close,’ he said, his voice trailing off. I didn’t know what to say. Marcus and I had been friends, sure, but something like a dedicated file felt… intimate.

Alex double-clicked the file. It was a video. Marcus appeared on the screen, his face younger, more gaunt, his eyes hollow. He was sitting in what looked like a recording studio, a high-end microphone in front of him. The video was timestamped a week before his death. ‘Sarah,’ Marcus’s voice came through the speakers, but it was different—it sounded like it was being broadcast from a deep well, layered with static and a low, rumbling undertone. ‘If you’re watching this, I’m dead. I know I said it would be a car crash, and it will be. But that’s not the real end.’ He paused, and his eyes seemed to look directly through the screen. ‘There’s something I have to show you. A place. It’s where I used to go to think. You know the old quarry on Route 9? Not the public one, but the abandoned one down the dirt road. There’s a spot… where the concrete pipes are stacked. I left something there. Something that will explain everything. And Sarah… don’t bring anyone. Please.’

The video ended abruptly, and the screen went black. Alex and I stared at each other. The air in the room grew thick, musty. ‘What the hell is this?’ Alex whispered. I shook my head. ‘I don’t know. But I have to go.’

We drove to the quarry in the dead of night, my heart pounding. The road was rough, winding through trees whose branches seemed to claw at the car. We parked by a chain-link fence, the gate slightly ajar. Inside, the quarry was a maze of huge, weathered concrete pipes, stacked like monstrous vertebrae. The moon was full, casting long shadows that seemed to move on their own. I felt a pull, an inexplicable gravity toward a particular cluster of pipes near the cliff edge. My boots crunched on the gravel, each step echoing too loudly in the silence.

I found a small, worn notebook stuffed between two segments of a pipe. Its cover was stained with something dark, and the pages were brittle. I opened it, and the first page was covered in Marcus’s cramped, frantic handwriting. It was a diary of sorts, written in the weeks before his death. He described being followed, hearing ‘low growls’ at night, seeing ‘figures that are not figures’ at the edge of his vision. He wrote about a ‘voice’ that promised him glory if he could ‘release it.’ As I read, the temperature around us seemed to drop. Alex was looking over my shoulder, his face pale under the moonlight.

And then, from behind the pipes, came a sound. It was not a groan or a cry, but a low, rhythmic scratching, like nails on stone. We both froze. The sound grew louder, closer, until it seemed to echo from all around us. A shadow detached itself from deeper darkness, taking a form that was humanoid but off, limbs too long, joints bending wrong. It moved with a halting shuffle, and when it spoke, its voice was the same guttural growl from the voicemail.

‘Sarah,’ it said, the word slithering through the air. ‘You came. Just like he wanted.’

I didn’t wait to hear more. I screamed, grabbing Alex’s arm, and we bolted for the car. The thing chased us, its footsteps unnaturally heavy, but we made it into the car and slammed the doors. The engine roared to life, and we sped away, gravel spraying. I didn’t look back until we hit the main road, and when I did, the quarry was swallowed by darkness, still and silent.

I kept the notebook, hidden in my closet, but I never opened it again. That night, though, I had a dream. I was in a field, and the ground was covered in concrete flowers, each petal a sharp shard. In the center was a single, blood-red bloom, and from it, Marcus’s voice whispered, ‘You’ve seen the seed. Now it will grow.’ I woke up screaming, my sheets soaked with sweat.

Since then, strange things have happened around me. My phone battery drains inexplicably, and the voicemail from Marcus has become constant, looping even when I’m not on a call. Sometimes, I see the shadow of that thing in the periphery of my vision, just for a moment, gone when I turn. I don’t know what Marcus uncovered, but I know he wanted me to see it. And now that I have, I can feel it looking back. Whatever it was that Marcus tapped into, it’s not done with me yet. It waits among the concrete blooms, patient as stone, and it knows my name.

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