The Cinder Visitor

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Story Premise 3 min read (488 words)

"My grandmother, Elara, always said that the veil between worlds grows thin when the fire burns low. She claimed she saw her own mother, Agnes, step out of the glowing embers of our campfire one autumn night, wreathed in smoke and wearing the same threadbare shawl she’d died in. Agnes didn’t speak, just stood there, […]"

My grandmother, Elara, always said that the veil between worlds grows thin when the fire burns low. She claimed she saw her own mother, Agnes, step out of the glowing embers of our campfire one autumn night, wreathed in smoke and wearing the same threadbare shawl she’d died in. Agnes didn’t speak, just stood there, her form flickering like a heat mirage, her eyes fixed on Elara. Two months later, the call came: Agnes had passed in her sleep, peacefully, as if she’d simply waited for that last farewell.

Years later, Elara was working the late shift at the grain silo on the edge of town, a lonely job that suited her. She stepped out into the cool night air to check the pressure gauge on the silo’s exterior, and there he was, perched on the warehouse roof across the yard. A man in a dusty work jacket and a cap pulled low, just like her husband, Thomas. He waved at her, a slow, deliberate motion, his arm moving like a pendulum. Elara, startled, didn’t wave back. She went back inside to grab a clipboard, and when she returned, he was still there, now smoking a cigarette, the orange tip glowing in the dark. He raised his hand again, that same rhythmic wave. A cold dread settled in her chest. She knew, with a certainty that turned her blood to ice, that it was Thomas. Then he simply turned and walked off the edge of the roof, dissolving into the night air. Two months to the day, Thomas’s tractor rolled over on a steep embankment, and he was gone.

Now, I’m telling you this because my daughter, Lena, called me this morning, her voice trembling. She said she was watching television in her living room, some old sitcom, and she saw me standing next to the TV set. Not my reflection, not a picture, but me, solid and real, just watching her. She blinked, and I was gone. She said I looked the way I do now, with my hair in a bun and that faded flannel shirt I always wear. She thought something had happened to me, so she called. I’m here, in my own house, a hundred miles away from her. But as I held the phone, I felt a strange warmth on my arm. I looked down, and there was a faint, smoky smudge on my skin, like I’d brushed against a chimney. And in the corner of my eye, I thought I saw a figure in the kitchen doorway, just for a split second, before it vanished into the steam of my morning coffee. I don’t know what it means. But I’ve started to look over my shoulder more often, and I’ve taken to leaving the porch light on, even during the day. Because I know, now, that the ones we love never really leave. They just wait for the right moment to wave.

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