The Cinder Man

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"My grandmother used to tell me about the summer she spent in the village of Ashwick, a place where the chimneys always seemed to smoke even on the clearest days. The house was called Ember Hollow, a squat, stone cottage that had survived two great fires, its walls stained black and its beams charred like […]"

My grandmother used to tell me about the summer she spent in the village of Ashwick, a place where the chimneys always seemed to smoke even on the clearest days. The house was called Ember Hollow, a squat, stone cottage that had survived two great fires, its walls stained black and its beams charred like burnt toast. She was only twelve then, and she had been sent there to convalesce after a long illness, away from the noise and grime of the city.

The cottage was old and crooked, with floors that sloped and doors that never quite fit. The previous owner, a recluse named Mr. Greaves, had died in the second fire, and the village folk said he had been a miser who hoarded coal and timber, and that his greed had cost him his life. But my grandmother knew nothing of that. All she knew was that the house felt watchful, and that at night, she would hear the soft click of the latch on her bedroom door, and the whisper of the window sash sliding open.

At first, she thought it was the wind, but the door would swing wide with no breeze to push it, and the window would stand open with a cold draught that smelled of ash and wet soot. She would get up to close them, and as she did, she felt a presence behind her, a gentle pressure, as if someone was nudging her toward the door, urging her to step outside into the dark.

She told her aunt, who laughed and said, ‘It’s just the old house settling. Mr. Greaves was always fiddling with the windows, that’s what the villagers say.’ But my grandmother knew better. And so did the priest who came to bless the house. He stood in the hallway, sprinkling holy water and chanting in Latin, but all the while, the door rattled on its hinges, and the window in the kitchen banged open and shut, open and shut, until the priest fled, declaring the house ‘unholy but not demonic.’

It was then that her aunt decided to call in a psychic, a thin, pale woman with eyes the color of river stones. She walked through the house, touching the walls, and when she reached the corner of the sitting room, she stopped. ‘There’s something here,’ she said. ‘Something that wants you to leave.’ She knelt down and pressed her hand against a loose floorboard. ‘There was a fire,’ she said. ‘A small one. In this very room. And a man died, not from the flames, but from the smoke. He was trying to get out, but the door was jammed. He clawed at it, but it wouldn’t budge.’

My grandmother’s aunt looked at her, and the psychic nodded. ‘He’s been trying to warn you ever since. He doesn’t want you to die the same way. He’s not evil, just stubborn. He wants you to get out, to open the doors, to leave them open.’

That night, after the psychic had gone, my grandmother stayed awake. She lay in her bed, and she listened to the sounds of the house. The wind moaned in the chimney, and she heard the soft creak of the floorboards in the hallway. And then, her door swung open, just a crack, and she saw a figure standing there, not a ghost, but a shape made of shadow and smoke. It didn’t move toward her, but it pointed toward the front door. And she understood. She got up, walked downstairs, and stood at the threshold. The night air was cool and sweet, and she thought she could smell roses, though no roses grew in the yard. She stepped outside, and the door closed behind her, softly, as if in relief.

She never told anyone, but she always believed that the spirit of Mr. Greaves had saved her. And from that night on, the house rested. The doors stayed shut, the windows stayed closed, and my grandmother slept peacefully. But she never forgot the cinder man, the one who beckoned her to safety from the ashes of his own despair.

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