The Ceiling Smile

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"The old farmhouse had a way of holding onto things—dust in the corners, the creak of the stairs, and the memory of a boy named Eli who had died in the barn fire before I was born. My parents rarely spoke of him, only that he was a dear friend who had loved us before […]"

The old farmhouse had a way of holding onto things—dust in the corners, the creak of the stairs, and the memory of a boy named Eli who had died in the barn fire before I was born. My parents rarely spoke of him, only that he was a dear friend who had loved us before we existed. I didn’t think much of it until I was five, my sister Mira just four, when the ceiling in my room began to breathe.

It started with a flicker, like a bulb about to die, but there was no bulb. I sat up in bed and watched the pattern of the old wallpaper shimmer, and then a dark shape, round like a ball, dropped from the plaster above the dartboard. It didn’t land; it vanished into the floorboards, and a moment later, a face pressed against the ceiling above my head, upside down, its features stretched into a grin that was too wide. I knew it was Eli, because my parents had told me about him, and I was not afraid. I smiled back, and the face faded like morning mist.

Two nights passed. Nothing. On the third, Mira woke at four, her small voice trembling in the dark, ‘Eli spoke to me.’ My parents froze. They had never told her that name, never shown her a picture. Their faces were pale as they hushed her back to sleep, but I saw the worry in their eyes. The following week, I was in the living room playing my console when the screen went black. Static hissed, and then a face emerged from the noise—Eli’s face, older now, with hollow eyes and a mouth that moved without sound. The speakers crackled: ‘I’ll watch over you. Don’t forget that.’ Then the screen returned to normal, as if nothing had happened.

My parents tried to explain it away, said it was a prank, a bad dream. But I noticed they started keeping the curtains drawn, and they nailed a horseshoe above the front door. Mira began talking to the air in her room, having conversations with someone I couldn’t see. She’d laugh and wave at the corner ceiling, and sometimes she’d whisper things I couldn’t hear.

One evening, I followed her to the barn. The fire had left it charred, and we were forbidden to play there. But Mira walked straight to the blackened beam where the fire had started. She pointed to a spot in the air, ‘He says he’s sorry. He didn’t mean to start the fire.’ My blood went cold. Our parents had never told us how Eli died, just that it was an accident. I grabbed her hand and pulled her out, but she kept looking back.

That night, I dreamt of the face on the ceiling, but this time it was crying black tears. It spoke in a voice like cracking wood, ‘I just wanted to watch over you both. But now you’re afraid, and fear feeds me.’ I woke up shivering, the smell of smoke in my nostrils. The dartboard was gone, replaced by a black stain on the wall that looked like a face.

My parents grew distant, spending long hours in hushed conversations. They stopped attending church, and our grandmother came to stay, hanging herbs and burning sage. But the house grew colder, and in the mirrors, we saw reflections that didn’t move with us. Mira stopped talking to the ceiling, but she started drawing pictures of a man with no eyes.

One night, the power went out. Candles flickered on their own, and a wind blew through closed windows. I heard Mira scream from her room. I ran to her, and she was pointing at the ceiling, where the face now pressed down, black and grinning, its eyes like burned holes. ‘He wants to take us,’ she sobbed. The face tilted, and a voice, not from any speaker, filled the room, ‘I’ll watch over you, forever.’ The candle went out, and when my parents came with flashlights, the ceiling was bare. But Mira was gone from her bed, the sheets making a shape like a person lying flat, and on the pillow, a small burnt spot shaped like a smile.

We searched the barn, the fields, the old well. Nothing. My mother didn’t speak for weeks. My father tore down the ceiling in both rooms, but found only old plaster and rusted nails. I still dream of that face, but now it wears Mira’s features, and it whispers, ‘Don’t forget me.’ I know now that Eli never left. He wanted a companion, and he took my sister to keep him company. Sometimes, late at night, I look up at the ceiling, and I see a thin crack forming, and I wonder who will be next. I keep the dartboard now, not for darts, but to remind me of what I left behind. And I never smile at the dark.

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