The Call from the Tidal Marsh

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Story Premise 4 min read (729 words)

"The fever had kept my daughter, Lily, restless for three nights. I lay on the bottom bunk of her bed, my hand on her forehead, feeling the heat radiating from her skin. The window was cracked open, letting in the cold night air from the salt marsh that surrounded our house. At 3 AM, the […]"

The fever had kept my daughter, Lily, restless for three nights. I lay on the bottom bunk of her bed, my hand on her forehead, feeling the heat radiating from her skin. The window was cracked open, letting in the cold night air from the salt marsh that surrounded our house. At 3 AM, the house was silent except for Lily’s labored breathing and the distant hush of the marsh.

I had just settled into the thin mattress, my eyes half-closed, when I heard my name from outside. ‘Marion…’ It floated in through the window, soft but clear, as if spoken right next to my ear. My heart jolted. I sat up, listening. The marsh was a place of strange sounds—night birds, frogs, the wind through the reeds—but this was a human voice. A woman’s voice, I thought, though it had a hollow quality, like it was echoed from a long way off.

I didn’t answer. Who would be calling me from the marsh at this hour? The voice came again, a little louder, a little more insistent. ‘Marion…’ My skin prickled. I glanced at Lily, but she was asleep, her breathing steady. The voice called a third time, and a fourth, each one drawing closer, as if the speaker were moving through the reeds toward the house. The tone was not threatening, but it was wrong. It was as if the voice was made of the marsh itself, wet and slithering.

I tried to shake it off, telling myself it was some animal, or my imagination. But then I remembered the story my grandmother used to tell me about the marsh. She was from the old country, and she warned me never to go near the marsh at night, because sometimes the marsh would call you by name. If you answered, you would feel a pull, and if you followed the pull, you would never come back. I used to laugh at her superstitions, but now, lying in the dark, I felt a sudden chill. I reached for my phone to see if there was any message, anything that could explain it. The screen was blank.

I lay back down, desperate to ignore it, but the voice kept on. It began to sound like my mother, who had died ten years ago. ‘Marion, come here. I need to show you something.’ That sent a shiver down my spine. My mother had always had a way of making me feel guilty, even from the grave. But this wasn’t her. It was something else, something wearing her voice.

I forced myself to stay still. I whispered to Lily, checking if she was still asleep. She stirred but didn’t wake. The voice outside grew more impatient. ‘Marion, why won’t you answer? I’ve been waiting for you.’ The words were coming faster now, like a stream of water. I could feel a pressure in my chest, a strange urge to get up and go outside. I fought it, gripping the edge of the bunk.

Then I heard a sound from the reeds. A splash, like something heavy falling into the water. Then silence. The voice stopped. I lay there, shaking, listening to the night. The marsh had gone quiet too, as if everything was holding its breath. I waited for what felt like an hour, but the voice didn’t return.

When dawn finally came, I told myself it was just my exhaustion playing tricks on me. Lily’s fever had broken, and she woke up hungry, her cheeks flushed. I kept the windows closed that day, and I didn’t go near the marsh. But that evening, when the sun set, I saw something from the kitchen window. A figure stood at the edge of the reeds, too far to make out clearly. It was tall and thin, and it was looking at the house. I felt a cold knot in my stomach.

I called out to my husband, but by the time he came to the window, the figure was gone. He said it was just a tree. I didn’t sleep that night. And now, writing this, I know that it was never a tree. It was the marsh calling me. And it knows my name. I’m just praying that it won’t call again. Because if it does, I’m not sure I’ll have the strength to ignore it.

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