The Cage on the Counter

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"I should write this down before the details blur. My memory has been playing tricks on me lately—names slipping, faces fading—but this, this is burned into my mind, perhaps because it was so mundane and yet so wrong. Last week, I stayed at our youngest daughter, Mara’s house in the hill town of Ashford, nestled […]"

I should write this down before the details blur. My memory has been playing tricks on me lately—names slipping, faces fading—but this, this is burned into my mind, perhaps because it was so mundane and yet so wrong.

Last week, I stayed at our youngest daughter, Mara’s house in the hill town of Ashford, nestled among the green valleys of the Pacific Northwest. We had spent Mother’s Day with our eldest, Elise, who lives in the coastal city of Port Bannon. (A delightful day, full of laughter and far too much dessert.) I drove back with Mara and her little girl, Penny. My husband, Frank, had taken the train home to our cottage in Pinecrest.

Now, whenever I visit Mara, I sleep in Penny’s room. It’s a cozy space, but Penny has a guinea pig named Biscuit. Guinea pigs are diurnal, but they’re also restless at night, shuffling and squeaking in their cage. Being a light sleeper, this would have kept me up. So, as always, Mara kindly moved Biscuit’s cage out to the kitchen counter, two rooms away from the bedroom.

I settled into bed with a book, the soft glow of the lamp casting shadows that danced as I turned pages. I read for a while, then switched off the light. The house fell silent, save for the distant hum of the refrigerator and the occasional creak of old timber settling. I drifted into a light sleep.

I woke with a start. The room was pitch black, and I felt a pressure on my chest, as if something heavy sat there. I tried to move, but my limbs were heavy, as if filled with sand. Panic rose, but I forced myself to breathe, telling myself it was just a night terror, a common occurrence for me lately. I focused on the ceiling, waiting for the feeling to pass.

But then I heard it—a faint scratching, like claws on wood, coming from the kitchen. It was rhythmic, almost deliberate, and it seemed to grow louder. I strained to listen, my heart pounding. The scratching stopped, replaced by a low, guttural whisper, too soft to make out words, but human-like in its cadence. I tried to call out for Mara, but my voice was a mere croak.

The pressure on my chest intensified, and I felt a cold breath on my cheek. A voice, dry as autumn leaves, spoke directly into my ear: ‘You should not have moved the cage.’

I screamed, or tried to, but all that escaped was a strangled gasp. The pressure lifted, and I bolted upright, drenched in sweat. The room was still dark, but I could see the faint outline of the window. I fumbled for the lamp and switched it on. The room was empty. I was alone.

I lay back, shaking, convincing myself it was a nightmare. But then I heard a clatter from the kitchen, followed by a soft thud. My heart seized. I forced myself out of bed, my legs trembling, and crept down the hallway. The kitchen was dimly lit by the stove light, and there, on the counter, was Biscuit’s cage. But the cage door was open, and Biscuit was gone.

I approached cautiously. The cage was empty, and a trail of bedding led toward a small gap under the baseboard. I knelt down, peering into the darkness. I heard a nibbling sound, and then a tiny, high-pitched voice, so faint I thought I imagined it: ‘We are many. We are hungry.’

I scrambled back, my mind racing. I called out for Mara, my voice cracking. The lights flickered, and from the gap, something small and dark scurried toward me. I stepped back, and it stopped, looking up at me with eyes that glowed like embers. It was not Biscuit. It was something else, with too many legs and a segmented body that undulated.

I turned and ran to Mara’s room, yelling her name. The door burst open, and Mara stood there, groggy and alarmed. ‘What’s wrong?’ she asked.

I tried to explain, but the words came out as nonsensical babble. She led me back to the kitchen, but when we arrived, the cage was securely shut, Biscuit inside, happily munching on hay. The gap in the baseboard was sealed with caulk. ‘You must have had a nightmare,’ she said, her voice soothing. ‘I heard you shout, but by the time I got here, everything was fine.’

She walked me back to the bedroom and tucked me in, like she used to do when she was a child. I lay there, staring at the ceiling, trying to convince myself it was all a dream. But then, from the kitchen, I heard a faint, deliberate scratch. And then another, and another, until the sound filled the house, a cacophony of claws on wood, as if an army of tiny creatures was scuttling just beyond the walls.

I didn’t sleep that night. I stayed awake, my back pressed against the headboard, my eyes fixed on the door. In the morning, I told Frank over the phone that I was coming home early. When I left, Mara hugged me and said, ‘Take care of yourself, Mom. You’ve been looking so tired lately.’

As I drove away, I glanced in the rearview mirror and saw Penny’s face in the window, her expression unreadable. And in her hands, she held something small and dark, writhing. I nearly swerved off the road.

I haven’t returned to Ashford since. My memory is still failing, but I’m glad I wrote this down before it fades completely. Because what I saw, what I heard, was real. And whatever it was, it’s still there, waiting beneath the floorboards, behind the walls, in every shadowed corner of that house. And now, whenever I close my eyes, I hear that scratching, faint but persistent, as if it’s following me, waiting for me to let my guard down.

They say it’s dementia, a cruel trick of the aging mind. But I know better. I know what I saw. And I know that the cage on the counter was not the only thing that was moved that night.

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