The Borrower’s Name

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"Marta had always been a collector of small annoyances. Her glasses, her favorite pen, the remote control for the television – they’d vanish for hours, sometimes days, only to reappear in the most obvious of places, tucked between couch cushions or resting on the kitchen counter where she’d already looked a dozen times. It was […]"

Marta had always been a collector of small annoyances. Her glasses, her favorite pen, the remote control for the television – they’d vanish for hours, sometimes days, only to reappear in the most obvious of places, tucked between couch cushions or resting on the kitchen counter where she’d already looked a dozen times. It was a minor, persistent irritation, like a stone in her shoe that she could never quite shake out. She’d laugh it off, blaming her own absent-mindedness, even when logic screamed otherwise.

Then came the day of the wedding. Her grandmother’s pearl earrings, a family heirloom, were missing. She had placed them in her jewelry box the night before, a final check before the ceremony. But when she opened the box, the velvet-lined compartment where they should have nestled was empty. Panic clawed at her. She tore through her apartment, rifling through drawers, overturning cushions, checking coat pockets, and even the bathroom cabinet. Nothing. Her heart hammered. She was supposed to be at the venue in an hour.

In a moment of exhausted frustration, she slammed her hand on the bathroom counter and yelled at the empty air, ‘All right, Barnaby, enough! Give them back!’ It was a name she didn’t consciously choose, a relic from an old black-and-white film she’d once watched about wartime paratroopers dropping dummy soldiers named Barnaby to mislead the enemy. She had no idea why that name surfaced.

As the echo of her voice faded, a faint, almost inaudible giggle tickled the edge of her hearing, from the direction of the hallway. She froze, a chill skittering up her spine. Slowly, she walked to the hallway and saw the earrings, perfectly arranged on the small table by the door, as if they’d been waiting for her. The table, she was certain, had been bare minutes before.

From that day on, her life became a strange game. The vanishing acts continued, but she discovered a pattern. When she addressed the intruder by name – ‘Barnaby, please put the car keys back’ – the items would return within the hour, placed in plain sight, often with a new twist. Her umbrella would appear hanging from the coat rack, her favorite novel on the nightstand, her phone on the charger. It was almost helpful, except for the creepy realization that something was listening.

She began to experiment. She tested the name. ‘Barnaby, if you can hear me, show me a sign.’ A single red rose appeared on her kitchen table, a small thorn pricked her finger when she touched it. She named another, ‘Is it Gerald?’ The lightbulb in the bathroom flickered. ‘Theodore?’ The TV turned on to a static channel. But ‘Barnaby’ always produced a response – a soft thud, a flicker, a mysterious placement.

One evening, she set a trap. She scattered flour across the kitchen floor, expecting to find footprints in the morning. But when she woke, the flour was untouched, and her wedding ring was missing. She almost laughed, but then she saw it – a single looping line drawn through the flour, like a signature. It was too perfect, too deliberate. She took a photo, her hands trembling.

She decided to confront Barnaby directly. She stood in the center of her living room, the flour still on the floor, and spoke aloud, ‘I know you’re here, Barnaby. I know you’re watching. What do you want?’ For a long moment, silence. Then, the TV, which was off, flickered on to a black-and-white scene of a war film, featuring the dummy paratroopers being dropped. A narrator’s voice, crackling with age, said, ‘They were all named Barnaby, of course. A fine name for a decoy.’

The screen went dark. Marta felt a cold draft, as if a window had opened. She turned, and there, on the far wall, was a fresh shadow – not her own, but small, indistinct, like a child’s silhouette. It remained for a breath, then vanished.

Now, she lives with Barnaby. He still moves her things, but she no longer searches frantically. She simply calls his name, and he obliges. The fear has dulled into a strange cohabitation. But sometimes, when she is about to fall asleep, she hears a soft, rhythmic sound, like someone breathing in the room next to hers. And she wonders if the name she gave him was not a name at all, but a leash – and whether he ever truly obeyed, or was simply toying with her all along.

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