The Bag of Vespers

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"My cousin Dana and I were the designated movers that Saturday, hauling boxes into the old Hollis place on Cedar Lane. It was a two-story Victorian that had sat empty for years, and my uncle had gotten it for a steal. The previous owners, a family of four, had vanished without a trace, leaving everything […]"

My cousin Dana and I were the designated movers that Saturday, hauling boxes into the old Hollis place on Cedar Lane. It was a two-story Victorian that had sat empty for years, and my uncle had gotten it for a steal. The previous owners, a family of four, had vanished without a trace, leaving everything behind—clothes in closets, dishes in cabinets, even a half-finished crossword puzzle on the kitchen table. The neighbor who found them gone said they were deeply religious, the kind who had a shrine in the backyard. But what struck me odd were the thirteen black trash bags stacked in the center of the master bedroom, each one filled with Bibles, rosaries, and crucifixes. My uncle shrugged it off, saying they must have been purging their faith, but I couldn’t shake the feeling that something was deeply wrong.

Later that afternoon, my two cousins—Liam and Sophie, both eight—wanted to play hide and seek with the twins, Maya and Ben, who were only three. The adults were busy unpacking downstairs, so Dana and I agreed to watch them. Liam ran off to the living room, Sophie dashed into the kitchen, and the twins waddled toward the stairs. I followed them up, intending to hide in one of the bedrooms. The hallway was dim, with peeling wallpaper that depicted a pattern of twisted vines and thorns. I chose the room at the end, the one where the bags had been, thinking it would be the last place anyone would look. The door was slightly ajar, and as I pushed it open, a musty smell hit me, like old paper and dust. The bags were still there, tied neatly, but now they seemed to bulge slightly, as if something inside was breathing.

I slipped inside and ducked behind the door, pressing myself against the wall. The twins giggled downstairs, and I heard Dana’s voice calling, ‘Ready or not!’ My heart pounded, but not from the game. That’s when I noticed the bags were moving. Not much, just a subtle shift, like something was crawling inside. I told myself it was my imagination, that the house was playing tricks. But then I heard a faint whispering, a barely audible murmur that seemed to come from the bags themselves. I couldn’t make out the words, but it sounded like a prayer. A cold dread washed over me, and I knew I had to get out of that room. I stepped toward the door, but it slammed shut with a force that shook the walls. The whispers grew louder, more frantic, and the bags began to rustle violently.

I tried the doorknob, but it wouldn’t budge. I called out, ‘Dana! Help!’ but my voice was muffled, as if swallowed by the room. The bags started to writhe, and from the openings, dark tendrils of shadow began to seep out, reaching toward me. I stumbled back, tripping over a loose floorboard, and fell. The tendrils wrapped around my ankles, cold as ice, and I felt a presence pressing down on my chest, making it hard to breathe. The whispers coalesced into a single voice, a woman’s voice, chanting: ‘The Lord is my shepherd, I shall not want…’ But the words were twisted, guttural, as if spoken by something that hated God.

Just as I thought I would black out, the door burst open. Liam was standing there, his face pale, holding a small wooden cross that must have fallen from one of the bags. He shouted, ‘It’s just a game, remember?’ and hurled the cross at the bags. The tendrils recoiled, the whispers turned into a shriek, and the bags collapsed into themselves, deflating like punctured balloons. The pressure lifted, and I gasped for air. Liam helped me up, his hands trembling. ‘I heard you scream,’ he said. ‘I found this in the hallway. I thought it might help.’ We ran down the stairs, leaving the room behind, but I couldn’t shake the feeling that something had followed us. That night, after the family had settled in, I lay awake in the guest room, listening to the house settle. Around 3 AM, I heard a soft thud from upstairs, as if someone had dropped a heavy book. Then the whispering began again, faint but unmistakable, coming from the vents. It was the same prayer, but now it sounded like a plea.

The next morning, I told my uncle what had happened. He dismissed it as nerves, saying the house was creaky and old. But he agreed to have the bags removed. They took them to a nearby church, and the pastor said he’d dispose of them properly. For a few weeks, the house was quiet. But last month, I received a letter from my uncle. He said a neighbor had found another bag in the backyard, filled with what looked like charred prayer cards. And when the twins started learning their bedtime prayers, they would sometimes add a phrase they couldn’t have known, a phrase I heard that day in the room: ‘And lead us not unto the silence.’ The bag of vespers, as I came to call it, had found a new home. I haven’t visited since, and I never will.

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