The Amber Visitor

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Story Premise 7 min read (1,394 words)

"I never believed in the stories the old-timers told about Maple Hollow. They spoke of lights in the woods, of things that didn’t belong. I figured they were just trying to scare the city folks who moved in. I was one of those city folks, and I knew better. But now, I’m not so sure. […]"

I never believed in the stories the old-timers told about Maple Hollow. They spoke of lights in the woods, of things that didn’t belong. I figured they were just trying to scare the city folks who moved in. I was one of those city folks, and I knew better. But now, I’m not so sure.

It was a Tuesday, like any other. The rain was hammering my roof, a steady drum that had become the soundtrack of my life since I moved to this corner of Vermont. I was curled up on the couch, scrolling through my phone, enjoying the rhythmic patter. Around 7 PM, a strange warmth crept up the back of my neck, like someone had opened an oven door behind me. I turned, irritated, expecting to see a space heater I’d forgotten to unplug. Instead, I saw a light in the backyard.

It was a soft, amber glow, hovering just above the ground near the old oak tree. It pulsed gently, like a slow heartbeat. My first thought was a neighbor with a flashlight, but this light was ethereal, casting no shadows, and it seemed to throb with a life of its own. Curiosity overriding my common sense, I set down my phone and walked to the kitchen window for a better look. The light seemed to notice my movement. It drifted closer, stopping at the edge of the lawn, just beyond the reach of the porch light.

I felt a strange pull, a warmth that went beyond the physical. It was inviting, almost comforting. I unlatched the back door and stepped onto the porch. The rain had softened to a drizzle, and the air was thick with the smell of wet earth and pine. The amber light hovered a few feet away, and I could see it wasn’t a solid orb but a swirling mass of tiny particles, like fireflies with a purpose. As I watched, it began to change shape, elongating and thinning until it formed a narrow, vertical slit.

Suddenly, the light vanished, and in its place stood a figure. It was humanoid but not human. Its body was made of the same amber light, flickering and translucent. It had no face, just a smooth oval where features should be, but I felt it looking at me. A voice, not spoken but felt, echoed in my mind: ‘You see me.’

I stumbled back, my heart racing. This couldn’t be real. I blinked, and the figure was gone. The yard was dark again, except for the porch light’s glow. I told myself it was my imagination, a trick of the rain and my tired eyes. I went back inside and locked the door, but I couldn’t shake the feeling that something had changed.

The next night, at the same time, the light returned. This time, I didn’t approach. I watched from the window as it pulsed and writhed, and I realized it was trying to form words. Shapes flickered within the amber glow—letters, maybe. I squinted, trying to decipher them. ‘Come,’ they seemed to say. ‘Come and see.’

I ignored it. I drew the curtains and tried to sleep, but the light seeped through the fabric, casting strange patterns on my walls. It grew brighter, more insistent, until I felt the warmth again, pressing against my skin like a gentle hand. I pulled the curtains aside and saw the light right at the window, inches from my face. Inside the swirling particles, I saw images—a flash of a forest, a cabin, a road I didn’t recognize. Then the light faded, and the figure reappeared, this time closer, its hand pressed against the glass. A voice whispered in my mind: ‘You cannot hide.’

I panicked. I grabbed my keys and ran to my car, intent on driving to the police station. But as I sped down the rain- slicked road, the amber light appeared in my backseat. It pulsed with a rhythm that matched my heartbeat, and I felt the warmth envelop me. The steering wheel became warm, and I lost control. The car spun, and everything went black.

When I woke, I was in a hospital bed, a nurse leaning over me. ‘You’re lucky to be alive,’ she said. ‘You were in a bad crash. Another minute and you’d have bled out.’ I tried to speak, but my throat was dry. She gave me water and explained that a passerby had found me at the bottom of a ravine, hours after the accident. My car was destroyed.

But that wasn’t the strangest part. As I recovered, I noticed small amber motes floating in the air around me, visible only when I looked directly at them. They were like dust motes, but they pulsed with the same light. The nurses ignored them, as if they didn’t exist. When I asked about the light, they just smiled and changed the subject.

After I was discharged, I returned home, but the house felt different. The warmth was still there, lingering in corners, and the light appeared every night, sometimes as a distant glow in the woods, sometimes pressing against my windows. I tried to move, but my lease was up, and I had nowhere to go. I tried to tell my friends, but they laughed, saying I’d had a close call and was seeing things.

One night, I decided to face it. I stood on my porch, the amber light hovering before me, its form shifting and swirling. I asked, ‘What do you want?’ The light pulsed, and the figure materialized. It extended a hand, and in its palm was an image—a small cabin deep in the woods, a place I’d never seen. ‘Come,’ it said. ‘Find your family.’

I felt a shiver down my spine. I was adopted, and I knew nothing about my birth parents. I’d tried to search, but hit dead ends. This light seemed to know. It was offering answers. I didn’t know if I could trust it, but I was desperate. I agreed.

The light led me to a part of the forest I’d never explored. It was a moonless night, but the amber glow illuminated a narrow path. After an hour of walking, I saw it—a small cabin, its windows glowing with the same amber light. As I approached, the door opened, and a figure stepped out. It was a woman, her features obscured by shadows, but I could see she was crying. ‘You came,’ she said. ‘I’ve been waiting.’

She explained that she was my birth mother, and that the light was a guardian spirit of our family, one that had protected us for generations. She told me that I had inherited the gift of seeing it, and that I had a responsibility to carry on the tradition. But then she paused, and her voice turned dark. ‘There is a price,’ she said. ‘The light keeps the darkness at bay, but it demands a toll. Every generation, one member must give up something precious to keep the light strong.’ I asked what she meant, but before she could answer, the light flared, engulfing us, and I felt myself falling into darkness.

I woke up in my own bed, the morning sun streaming through the windows. The amber light was gone. I checked my reflection, and I looked the same, but I felt different—hollow, as if a part of me had been taken. I tried to find the cabin again, but the path was gone, swallowed by the forest.

Now, I live with the memory of that encounter, and the nagging feeling that the light hasn’t truly left me. Sometimes, in my peripheral vision, I catch a flicker of amber. And at night, I hear a faint whispering, not words, but a presence. I don’t know what was taken from me, but I know one thing: the light is patient, and it will be back. And next time, it might not let me go.

I’ve stopped telling the story, because no one believes me. But I know what I saw, and I know what I feel. The amber visitor is real, and it’s part of my family now. Whether that’s a blessing or a curse, I can’t say. But I know one thing—I’ll never be truly alone again.

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