The Woman in the Glass

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"I remember the night it happened, not because of what I saw, but because of what I didn’t see. It was a Tuesday, the kind of evening that felt ordinary, almost dull. My wife, Elena, and I had just finished a dinner of pasta and salad, and we realized we were out of water. The […]"

I remember the night it happened, not because of what I saw, but because of what I didn’t see. It was a Tuesday, the kind of evening that felt ordinary, almost dull. My wife, Elena, and I had just finished a dinner of pasta and salad, and we realized we were out of water. The apartment complex had a water refill station just around the corner, so I volunteered to go. I also needed gas, so I drove to the 24-hour station across the street, a modest place called ‘Falcon Fuel’ that had been there since the 1970s.

I pulled up to the pump, killed the engine, and walked into the small convenience store attached to the station. The fluorescent lights hummed overhead, casting a sickly yellow pallor on the shelves of snacks and drinks. I grabbed two bottles of green tea from the cooler, paid for the gas and the drinks, and turned to leave. As I approached the exit, I saw a reflection in the glass door—a woman’s face. She was standing just outside, but something was wrong. Her features were distorted, angry, and her eyes were locked on me with an intensity that made my skin crawl. For a split second, I thought it was Elena, but Elena was at home, waiting for me. I shrugged it off, assuming it was just another customer, and pushed the door open.

Outside, I looked to my right, expecting to see the woman, but the sidewalk was empty. The parking lot was almost deserted, save for a single car idling in the corner, its headlights cutting through the dusk. I stood there for a moment, feeling a strange unease settle over me. I told myself it was just a trick of the light, a reflection of something behind me, but the image was too clear, too vivid. I got back in my car, started the engine, and drove off, trying to shake the feeling.

The gas station was behind me, and the road curved ahead, lined with tall eucalyptus trees that swayed in the evening breeze. I checked my rearview mirror and saw nothing unusual, just the glow of the station fading in the distance. But then I saw her again—the same woman, standing on the side of the road, about a hundred yards ahead. She was still, staring at me as I approached. I slowed down, thinking she might be in distress, but as I got closer, her expression twisted into a snarl, and she pointed at me with a long, pale finger. I felt a chill run down my spine, and I pressed the accelerator, not looking back.

I made it home in record time, my heart pounding. Elena was on the couch, watching TV, and she looked up with a smile. ‘You were quick,’ she said. I tried to smile back, but I couldn’t stop thinking about the woman. I told Elena what I had seen, expecting her to laugh it off, but her face went pale. ‘What did you say she looked like?’ she asked. ‘She looked like you, but mean,’ I replied. Elena was quiet for a long moment, then she whispered, ‘I had a dream last night. A woman came to me and told me I was going to die tonight.’

We didn’t sleep that night. We sat in the living room, the lights on, doors locked, and every window covered. I kept peeking through the blinds, but the street was empty. At around 2 a.m., a car pulled up in front of our apartment, and the headlights went out. My heart sank as I saw a figure get out and approach our door. It moved with an unnatural grace, its steps silent on the pavement. I grabbed a kitchen knife and stood by the door, my hand trembling. The knock came—three slow, deliberate raps. ‘Who is it?’ I called out. No answer. The knocking grew louder, more insistent, until the door rattled on its hinges.

Then, the voice came. It was Elena’s voice, but wrong—deeper, distorted. ‘Let me in, love,’ it said. Elena, who was behind me, tightened her grip on my arm. ‘That’s not me,’ she said, her voice barely a whisper. I looked through the peephole and saw the woman from the gas station, her face inches from the door, her eyes glowing with a malevolent light. She smiled, revealing rows of needle-sharp teeth, and whispered, ‘I’ve come to take her place.’

The next morning, the sun rose, and the knocking had stopped. I braced myself to open the door, but when I did, there was nothing there. No footprints, no tire marks, nothing. I thought it was over, but when I turned around, Elena was standing in the hallway, her face pale, her eyes wide. ‘She’s inside me,’ she said, her voice quivering. ‘I can feel her.’

I didn’t know what to do. I tried to reason, to convince myself it was just a nightmare, but every time I looked at Elena, I saw a flicker of something dark behind her eyes. We tried to go to the police, but they dismissed us, thinking we were just paranoid. We tried to leave town, but every road led us back to that gas station, as if some unseen force was guiding us. And every night, the knocking would return, sometimes on the window, sometimes on the ceiling, always in that same rhythm—three slow raps.

One night, I decided to fight back. I stayed up, armed with a crucifix and a bottle of holy water I had grabbed from a church. When the knocking started, I opened the door and shouted, ‘Show yourself!’ There was a silence, and then I felt a cold breath on the back of my neck. I turned around, and Elena was standing there, but her face was contorted into that same savage expression I had seen in the glass. ‘It’s too late,’ she said, but it wasn’t her voice. ‘She’s already taken your wife.’

I don’t remember what happened next. I woke up in a hospital bed, with no memory of the past three days. The doctors said I had a breakdown, that I had attacked my wife and she was in a coma. But I know what I saw. I know that the thing that looked like Elena was not my wife. I’ve been searching for her ever since, going to that gas station every night, hoping to see that face in the glass again. But now, when I look at my own reflection, I see something else. I see her. And I know she’s still waiting, patient, to complete her transformation.

I’ve started writing this down, mostly as a warning. If you ever see a face in a window that looks like someone you love, but it’s wrong—wrong in a way you can’t quite place—don’t ignore it. Don’t turn away. Because sometimes, the reflection is not what’s outside, but what’s inside. And once it sees you, it will never let go.

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