The Wind That Tasted of Copper

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"I was twelve the summer my family rented a crumbling farmhouse on the edge of the Saltmarsh, a place where the grass grew in gray blades and the sky always looked bruised. My cousin Lena and I had come to stay with our grandfather, a man who spoke little and spent most of his time […]"

I was twelve the summer my family rented a crumbling farmhouse on the edge of the Saltmarsh, a place where the grass grew in gray blades and the sky always looked bruised. My cousin Lena and I had come to stay with our grandfather, a man who spoke little and spent most of his time staring at the horizon as if expecting a ship that never came.

It was a Tuesday, close to noon, when my grandfather sent us to the root cellar to fetch jars of pickled beets. He said the handle stuck, so we’d need to pull hard. The cellar door was set into a mound of earth behind the house, its wood warped and green with moss. Lena pulled, and the door swung open with a groan, releasing a smell of damp soil and something else—something sharp, like old pennies.

We descended the steps, our feet crunching on scattered gravel. The light from the open door only reached so far, and the far end of the cellar was a wall of blackness. I remember the jars lined up on shelves like glass soldiers, their contents dark and mysterious. Lena grabbed a jar of beets and turned to go, but I lingered, drawn by a faint sound—a low, rhythmic rumble, like a voice humming just under the floor.

I took a step closer to the dark, and that’s when the air thickened. The temperature dropped so suddenly that I could see my breath, a small white cloud that seemed to hang in front of me. The humming stopped, and in the silence, I heard a wet, choking gasp, as if someone was trying to speak but had too much water in their throat. Then, from the blackness, a figure emerged—not walking, but drifting, its feet a foot above the packed earth.

It was a man, or something that had once been a man, dressed in a rain-soaked oilskin coat that dripped a thin, dark liquid. His face was hidden under a wide-brimmed hat, but I could see his hands, pale and wrinkled like prunes, reaching toward me. I wanted to scream, but my throat was closed. My legs turned to stone, and I could only stare as he floated closer, his head tilting as if he were listening to something I couldn’t hear.

Lena had reached the top of the steps and was shouting my name, but her voice sounded far away, like it was coming from the end of a long tunnel. The figure stopped a foot from my face, and I could smell the salt and decay on him, and that sharp copper scent that seemed to coat my tongue. He didn’t speak—I’m not sure he could—but he raised one dripping hand and pointed past me, toward the cellar wall. I turned my head, still frozen, and saw a small gap in the stones, where a rusted metal box sat half-hidden.

The figure lowered his hand and drifted back into the darkness, and as he went, the cold lifted, and the smell faded. I found my legs and scrambled up the stairs, nearly knocking Lena over. She grabbed my arm, her face pale. “What was that?” she whispered. I couldn’t answer.

But I looked back at the cellar door, and I knew I’d come again. That night, I told my grandfather what I had seen, expecting him to laugh or tell me it was a dream. Instead, his face went gray, and he set down his fork. “You saw him,” he said softly. “He’s been here for years, ever since they dug the new well. He doesn’t want to hurt anyone. He just wants someone to find the box.”

I asked what was in the box, but he shook his head and said, “Don’t go back. Some things are best left buried.”

But of course, I did. Four days later, I took a flashlight and crept to the cellar alone. The door was unlocked, as if it had been waiting. I went down, praying I wouldn’t see the figure, but I did. He was there, standing against the back wall, his head bowed. He didn’t move as I reached into the gap and pulled out the box. It was heavy, and the metal was cold, but when I opened it, I found only a folded piece of paper, yellowed and brittle. On it, in sharp, angled handwriting, were the words: “He’s not in the marsh. He’s in the water.”

I don’t know what that means. I still don’t. But when I looked up, the figure was gone, and the cellar was warm again. My grandfather refused to talk about it, and Lena told me to stop making up stories. But I still have that box, and sometimes, at night, I hear a faint humming, and the air smells like copper. I’ve never gone back to the farmhouse, but I know one day, the figure will come back for me, and this time, I’ll have to listen.

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