The Weight Above

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Story Premise 5 min read (887 words)

"I was on a video call with my best friend, Maya, when her younger sister, Lily, wandered into frame. Her face was pale, and she spoke in a hushed, urgent tone about a sound she’d been hearing all week: heavy stomping on the roof of their apartment, rhythmic and growing louder, faster, until it would […]"

I was on a video call with my best friend, Maya, when her younger sister, Lily, wandered into frame. Her face was pale, and she spoke in a hushed, urgent tone about a sound she’d been hearing all week: heavy stomping on the roof of their apartment, rhythmic and growing louder, faster, until it would suddenly stop. Then she started talking about the ‘residents’ they shared the space with, spirits that whispered through the vents and cast long shadows in the hallway. Maya laughed it off, but Lily’s eyes were dead serious. I felt a cold prickle at the back of my neck.

After we hung up, I tried to shake it off. I live in a two-story house on the edge of a small town, with my mother and younger sister, Emma. My father left years ago. The only thing above my room is the attic, and above that, the roof. But as I sat there in the quiet, I heard it: a faint thumping from above, like someone knocking on the ceiling, but it had a walking pattern to it. Step, step, pause. Step, step, pause. I froze, my heart beginning to race. I told myself it was just the house settling, or maybe a raccoon on the roof.

I got up and walked outside, peering up at the dark silhouette of the house against the moonless sky. The thumping continued, but I couldn’t see anything. I went back inside and checked the other bedrooms. Emma was fast asleep, her breathing soft and even. My mother’s room was dark, and she was snoring gently. The sound was nowhere else—only in my room, growing louder, faster, more insistent. I stood in the hallway, my hands trembling, listening to the frantic rhythm above.

Then it stopped abruptly. I exhaled, relief washing over me, but it was short-lived. A heavy, leaden thud echoed from the ceiling, followed by a low, guttural groan. It sounded like something had fallen and was in pain. I shivered, tears welling in my eyes. I backed against the wall, my breath shallow. The silence that followed was thick, oppressive.

I tried to calm myself, telling myself it was my imagination, that I was just spooked by Lily’s story. But then I heard it again—the groan, deeper this time, as if whatever had fallen was now stirring. I felt a primal fear grip me. I had to know what was up there. I grabbed a flashlight from the kitchen drawer and crept to the attic door, my hand shaking as I turned the knob. The door swung open, revealing a narrow staircase leading up into darkness.

I climbed slowly, each step creaking under my weight. The air grew colder, mustier. At the top, I swept the flashlight beam across the attic, revealing old boxes, furniture draped in white sheets, and dust motes dancing in the light. And then I saw it: in the corner, crouched under the eaves, a figure—dark, indistinct, but unmistakably humanoid. It was too large, its limbs too long, and it was breathing, a ragged, wet sound. It turned its head toward me, and I saw two faintly glowing eyes.

I stumbled backward, tripping over a box, and fell hard onto the floor. The flashlight rolled away, casting wild shadows. The figure rose, its joints cracking like twigs, and it began to move toward me. I scrambled to my feet and fled down the stairs, slamming the attic door behind me. I ran to my room, locked the door, and huddled in a corner, clutching my knees.

The thumping resumed, now with a new weight to it, as if the thing was pacing the attic. Then I heard the attic door creak open. Heavy footsteps descended the stairs, each one making the house shake. They stopped at my bedroom door. I held my breath, listening as a cold draft seeped under the door. A low, guttural voice, barely a whisper but terrifyingly clear, said, ‘You heard me. Now I will be heard.’

I screamed, but no sound came out. The footsteps continued, moving away, down the hall. I heard Emma’s door creak open. Panic surged through me. I forced myself to my feet, unlocked my door, and ran to her room. She was still sleeping, but above her bed, the ceiling bulged downward, as if something heavy was pressing from the attic. The groan echoed through the room, and I saw a dark shape seep through the cracks, taking form at the foot of her bed.

I grabbed Emma, shaking her awake. Her eyes flew open, and she looked at me with terror. The shape solidified into a tall, gaunt figure with hollow eyes and a mouth stretched into a silent scream. It reached out a long, bony hand toward her. I threw myself in front of her, shielding her with my body. The hand passed through me like ice, and I felt a cold numbness spread through my chest. The world went dark.

I woke up on the floor of Emma’s room, the first light of dawn creeping through the curtains. Emma was kneeling beside me, crying. The figure was gone. The house was silent. But I knew it wasn’t over. The weight above was still there, waiting, patient. And now, it knew we were listening.

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