The Wallflower’s Promenade

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"Marta and I had just settled into bed, the familiar hum of the old farmhouse’s heater a lullaby. We lay back to back, a comfortable silence between us, the kind that comes after years of marriage. My eyes were on the wall opposite, the one that separated our bedroom from the vast, moonlit fields beyond. […]"

Marta and I had just settled into bed, the familiar hum of the old farmhouse’s heater a lullaby. We lay back to back, a comfortable silence between us, the kind that comes after years of marriage. My eyes were on the wall opposite, the one that separated our bedroom from the vast, moonlit fields beyond. She faced the other way, toward the door to the hallway that led to the rest of the house.

It started as a subtle pressure, a shift in the air pressure, like the moment before a storm. Then, without a sound, a figure emerged from the wall itself, not through a door or a window, but directly through the plaster and lath. He was a man, nondescript, about five foot eleven, wearing a grey plaid shirt and grey work pants, as if he’d stepped out of a 1950s catalogue. He moved with a slow, deliberate gait, his footsteps soundless on the worn wooden floor.

I was frozen, my breath caught in my throat. My heart hammered against my ribs as he walked past the foot of our bed. I could only turn my head, my neck muscles screaming, to follow his progress. He didn’t glance at me, his eyes fixed ahead, as if on a path only he could see.

As he reached the midpoint of the bed, I knew Marta would see him. Her peripheral vision caught the movement, and I saw her head turn slightly. Then she turned fully, and I saw her eyes go wide. In that split second, we made eye contact over her shoulder, and I saw the same question, the same terror, mirrored in her gaze: ‘Are you seeing this too?’

We both watched, paralyzed, as he took five more steps toward the far corner of the room. Then, without warning, he stopped. He turned around, and for the first time, I saw his face. It was gaunt, the skin stretched tight over his skull, but his eyes were not empty. They were a pale, milky blue, and they were fixed on us.

He didn’t speak. He just stood there, motionless, and a faint, sour smell, like old soil and damp wool, began to fill the room. The temperature dropped, and I could see my breath misting in the air. Marta’s hand found mine under the covers, and her grip was so tight it hurt, but I welcomed the pain as an anchor to reality.

Then, he spoke. His voice was not a sound from his mouth, but a whisper that seemed to come from inside our own heads. ‘I’ve been here before,’ it said. ‘I walked this path every night for forty years, from the fields to this room, to check on my sleeping children. You are in my room.’

I tried to speak, to ask who he was, what he wanted, but my voice was a croak. Marta managed to whisper, ‘We’re sorry, we didn’t know.’ He seemed to soften, his shoulders dropping slightly. ‘No one remembers the dead,’ he said, and I felt a chill that had nothing to do with the cold.

He took a step toward us, and I felt a surge of terror. But he stopped, and his gaze drifted to the wall we had first seen him emerge from. ‘They came for me in the field,’ he said. ‘I was bringing in the harvest, and they came. I walked this path once more, to see my children, but they were gone. The house was empty. And I’ve been walking ever since.’

His form began to flicker, and I saw that the wall behind him was becoming transparent, revealing a dark, starless void. ‘You have children now,’ he said. ‘I see their photos on the wall. I will leave you, but I will always be here, in the land between. Don’t let them forget the ones who walked before.’

He turned, and as he walked back toward the void, his form slowly faded, like a ghost in the morning light. The room warmed, and the smell vanished. Marta and I lay there, shaking, holding each other, not daring to move. We looked at the wall where he’d emerged, and for a split second, I thought I saw a faint outline of a man, a grey shape in the plaster.

We never spoke of it, but we never sold the farm. We told the children that the old house had a guardian, a gentle spirit who watched over the land. And late at night, when the heater hummed and the fields were quiet, I’d sometimes feel a cool breeze pass by the bed, a rustle of fabric, and I’d know he was still walking his path, unable to leave, and I’d whisper to the dark, ‘We remember.’

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