The Unstrung Gift

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"The last time I saw Elias March, he was hunched over a cup of cold coffee in his cluttered workshop, his fingers stained with varnish and rosin. He’d been a luthier, not just a guitar teacher, and he treated every instrument like a living thing. When he passed, the reading of his will was a […]"

The last time I saw Elias March, he was hunched over a cup of cold coffee in his cluttered workshop, his fingers stained with varnish and rosin. He’d been a luthier, not just a guitar teacher, and he treated every instrument like a living thing. When he passed, the reading of his will was a quiet affair. My mother, my sister, our old family friend, and I each received something. I got his favorite acoustic, a warm-toned dreadnought with a crack in the soundboard that he’d patched himself. It had been wrapped in a fraying case and tucked into the back of my closet, a space I rarely visited.

That night, I had a long, hot shower, letting the steam ease the tension in my shoulders. When I stepped back into my bedroom, the air smelled faintly of lemon oil and cedar. The guitar case was open on the floor, its lid propped against my dresser. And there, leaning against the dresser, was the guitar itself, as if waiting for someone to play it. My heart stuttered. I’d never left it out. In fact, I’d barely touched it since Elias’s funeral.

My first instinct was irritation. My mother had a habit of ‘tidying’ my things without asking, but she’d never moved my instruments. Still, I marched into the living room, ready to give her a piece of my mind. She was reading a book by the lamp, her glasses perched on her nose. I asked her straight: ‘Mom, did you move my guitar?’ She looked up, and the blankness in her eyes made the words die in my throat. It was the same look she’d had when the doctor told us Elias was gone. She shook her head slowly. ‘No, honey. I haven’t even been near your room.’

I went back to my room, a knot tightening in my stomach. The guitar was still there, the wood gleaming under the lamp. I touched the strings, and they hummed with a frequency I didn’t recognize. That’s when I noticed the headstock. The tuning pegs were loosened, the strings slack. And on the fretboard, where Elias used to keep a small sticker of a cat, there was now a pearl inlay of a crescent moon. He’d always talked about adding that, but never got around to it. I ran my fingers over it, and the wood felt warmer than it should have.

The next night, I went to bed early, exhausted from unpacking more of Elias’s things. I drifted off, dreaming of a workshop filled with the smell of sawdust and the sound of distant, gentle laughter. I woke to a soft strumming. It was barely audible, like a whisper from another room. The guitar was still leaning against the dresser, but now it was propped upright, as if someone had just set it down. My breath caught. The strings were tightened, perfectly in tune. I didn’t sleep after that.

The pattern continued. Every night, the guitar would be moved, always slightly different. One night it was on my bed, the next on the floor beside my nightstand. I started to feel a presence, not threatening, but insistent. It was like Elias’s ghost was trying to tell me something. I tried to play it, hoping to connect, to understand. But every time I held it, a deep melancholy washed over me, and I’d set it back down.

Then one evening, as the autumn light filtered through my blinds, I found a crumpled letter tucked into the soundhole. It was in Elias’s cramped handwriting, dated a week before his death. It read: ‘If you’re reading this, then I suppose I’ve moved on. You always were my best student, not for your technique, but for your heart. There’s something I need you to know. This guitar has a secret. It was built by my mentor, a man who claimed he could capture a fragment of the player’s soul in the wood. I never believed it until I played it for the first time. Now, I’m passing it to you, not as a gift, but as a guardian. If you hear it playing on its own, don’t be afraid. It’s just the music of those who came before, keeping you company. But beware, for there are others who seek such instruments, and they will stop at nothing to possess it. Guard it well, my friend.’

My blood ran cold. I reread the letter three times, my hands shaking. That night, I didn’t touch the guitar. I sat on my bed, watching it. Hours passed. Just as I was about to drift off, a melody began to play, soft and sad, like a lullaby. It was Elias’s favorite piece, a haunting Spanish piece he used to play for me. Tears welled in my eyes. I felt his presence, not as a ghost, but as a warmth in my chest. I understood now. He wasn’t haunting me; he was trusting me.

But the letter warned of others. The next week, a man showed up at our door, claiming to be an old colleague of Elias’s, interested in buying back some of his tools. My mother let him in, and he wandered the house with hungry eyes. When he saw the guitar, he stopped. His face went pale, and his hands clenched. ‘Where did you get that?’ he asked, his voice tight. I told him it was a gift. He smiled, but it didn’t reach his eyes. ‘Elias never told me he had such a fine instrument. I’d love to see it closer.’ I refused, and he left, but not before glancing back at the guitar with a possessive glare.

That night, I heard scratching at my window. I pulled back the curtain and saw a black shape, like a swarm of insects, darting away. The guitar was vibrating on its stand, the strings humming a dissonant chord. I knew the man was not just a collector; he was a hunter. I had to protect it, but from what, I didn’t know. The letter gave no further instructions.

Over the next days, strange things happened. I’d find my closet door open, the case missing, as if the guitar had moved on its own. Once, I came home to find the guitar on the kitchen table, surrounded by a circle of salt, which I certainly hadn’t placed. My mother said it was there when she got back from the store. I started to see shadows at the edge of my vision, always vanishing when I turned.

Desperate, I called a friend of Elias’s, an elderly musicologist who lived in the countryside. When I told her about the guitar, there was a long silence. Then she said, ‘You have one of the Echoes. There are only a handful left. They were created to preserve the essence of great musicians. But some are cursed, bent on claiming the souls they hold. The one you have… it was made by a man named Silas, who went mad after his wife died. He poured his grief into the wood, and now it hungers. Elias was trying to purify it, but he ran out of time. You must bring it to me. I know how to break the curse.’

I packed the guitar, wrapped in a soft cloth, and drove through the night to her cottage. The road wound through dark forests, and the radio flickered with static. The guitar in the backseat seemed to breathe, the temperature dropping whenever I passed a particularly gnarled tree. I arrived at dawn, exhausted. The musicologist, a woman named Ethel, took the guitar and examined it with a magnifying glass. She sighed. ‘It’s older than I thought. The curse is deep. But there might be a way.’

She led me to a basement filled with antique instruments, each with a story written on a card. She placed the guitar on a pedestal under a skylight. ‘Tonight, at the moon’s peak, we can try to release the trapped spirit. But you must be here. It was Elias’s wish that you become its new guardian, but that means you must face what it holds.’

That night, we stood in the cellar, candles flickering. Ethel began to chant in a language I didn’t recognize. The guitar began to glow, a faint blue light seeping from the soundhole. The air thickened. I felt a cold hand on my shoulder, and I turned to see a translucent figure, gaunt and sorrowful, standing behind me. It was Silas, the mad luthier. He opened his mouth, and a thousand voices poured out, pleading and screaming. But through the cacophony, I heard Elias’s voice, calm and reassuring. ‘Remember the music, not the fear.’

I reached out and placed my hand on the guitar. The wood warmed under my touch, and the voices began to harmonize. I strummed a chord, and the sound was so pure it felt like a tear in reality. The figure of Silas dissolved into a cloud of light, which swirled into the soundhole and vanished. The guitar grew silent, and the glow faded. When I looked up, Ethel was smiling, tears in her eyes. ‘It’s done. The spirit is free. The guitar is now truly yours.’

I drove home with the guitar in the passenger seat, humming a soft melody. The sky was clear, and the stars seemed to shine brightly for me. I knew now that Elias’s gift was not just an instrument; it was a responsibility, a legacy. And I would protect it, as he had. As I walked into my room, I placed the guitar carefully on its stand, and for the first time in weeks, I slept deeply, dreamless. But in the quiet hours before dawn, I thought I heard a gentle arpeggio, the notes of a lullaby I remembered from Elias’s lessons, and I smiled in my sleep, knowing that some gifts carry the souls of those who loved us.

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