The Unseen Guest

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"It was a sweltering Saturday afternoon when I decided to finally tackle the mountain of laundry and dust that had taken over my tiny apartment. The place was a mess, and I’d been putting it off for weeks. My sister, Maya, had promised to come by for lunch, and I’d left the sliding glass door […]"

It was a sweltering Saturday afternoon when I decided to finally tackle the mountain of laundry and dust that had taken over my tiny apartment. The place was a mess, and I’d been putting it off for weeks. My sister, Maya, had promised to come by for lunch, and I’d left the sliding glass door to the balcony open to let in some air, since the air conditioning was on the fritz again. The balcony door was a flimsy thing, but it was the only way to air out the stuffy flat.

Maya arrived around 2:30, carrying a bag of takeout from our favorite Thai place. We settled on the sofa, facing away from the kitchen and the door leading to the balcony. I was in the middle of telling her about my boss’s ridiculous new policy when I noticed her gaze drift over my shoulder, toward the balcony door. Her eyes narrowed, and her face went pale. I kept talking, but she wasn’t listening anymore. She was staring at something behind me, her expression a mix of confusion and fear.

“Maya? What is it?” I asked, but she just shook her head, not taking her eyes off the doorway. “Why is the balcony door open?” she whispered, her voice trembling. I waved it off, explaining that I’d opened it for some air. She looked at me with a strange intensity, as if trying to decide whether to speak. But she said nothing.

I got up to grab drinks from the kitchen, and as I passed the doorway, I felt a cold draft. I dismissed it as the wind, but something felt off. When I returned, Maya was staring at the floor, her hands shaking. She finally turned to me and said, “When I was a kid, I used to see a man in the house. An old man with hollow eyes. He would stand in doorways and watch me. My grandmother said he was a spirit who followed our family. I haven’t seen him in years until today.”

I laughed nervously, thinking she was joking. But Maya wasn’t laughing. She described him in detail: a tall, gaunt figure in a gray suit, with skin pulled tight over his bones, and eyes that seemed to suck the light out of the air. She said he was standing just inside the balcony door, his head tilted, as if listening to our conversation. I felt a chill run down my spine, but I forced myself to smile. “It’s just the shadows playing tricks on you,” I said.

We finished our lunch in uneasy silence. Maya left early, promising to call later. I spent the afternoon cleaning, trying to shake off the eerie feeling. By evening, I had forgotten about it, attributing it to Maya’s overactive imagination. I closed the balcony door, locked it, and double-checked it before going to bed.

That night, I woke to a loud knocking. It was coming from the balcony door. I groggily went to investigate, but the door was still locked. I peered through the glass, and my blood ran cold. Standing on the balcony was a man, exactly as Maya had described: gaunt, gray-suited, hollow-eyed. He raised a bony hand and waved at me, a slow, deliberate motion. Then he smiled, revealing blackened teeth.

I stumbled back, heart pounding. I grabbed my phone to call Maya, but the line was dead. I looked at the door again, and the man was gone. I didn’t sleep that night, and the next morning, I called the landlord to ask about the previous tenant. The landlord hesitated, then told me that the previous occupant of my apartment had been an old man who died of starvation. He had been found, weeks later, curled up on the balcony, his eyes still open. The landlord said they’d had trouble renting it out because of the stories of his ghost.

I moved out the next week, but the image of that man’s mocking wave haunts me. Maya says he follows our family, but now I know he’s not just a family spirit. He’s a hungering parasite, and he’s chosen a new home: me. And sometimes, late at night, I still hear the knocking at my door, whether I live in an apartment or a house, whether the door is open or locked. He knows I can’t escape him. So I’ve started leaving the sliding door unlocked, hoping that if he comes, he’ll just take what he wants and leave. But I know, deep down, he wants more than just a doorway. He wants me to let him in.

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