The Unraveling Cord

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"The summer I turned nine, my parents sent me to stay with my grandmother in the small desert town of Pinal, Arizona. The town sat at the edge of the Sonoran Desert, where the heat shimmered off the asphalt and the only sound was the dry rustle of creosote bushes. My grandmother’s house was a […]"

The summer I turned nine, my parents sent me to stay with my grandmother in the small desert town of Pinal, Arizona. The town sat at the edge of the Sonoran Desert, where the heat shimmered off the asphalt and the only sound was the dry rustle of creosote bushes. My grandmother’s house was a low adobe structure, cool and dark inside, with thick walls that kept out the brutal sun. I loved the smell of it—dried chilies, old wood, and a faint hint of cinnamon.

That first night, I lay in bed, listening to the hum of the swamp cooler and the occasional yip of a coyote. I couldn’t sleep. Around midnight, I got up to use the bathroom. The hallway leading to it was dim, lit only by a small nightlight shaped like a cactus. As I walked, I noticed a cord lying across the floor. It was a white, braided cord, like the kind you’d use for a lamp or an old telephone. I stepped over it, but it seemed out of place. I’d never seen it before.

I did my business, and as I washed my hands, I looked at my reflection in the mirror. The bathroom light flickered. I glanced to my left, into the hallway, and there, just passing the doorway, was a woman. She wore a long, white dress, the fabric flowing as if in a breeze I couldn’t feel. She was glowing softly, a pale blue light that made the shadows deepen. I saw her face only in profile, and it was gaunt, with hollow eyes. She disappeared around the corner toward the living room.

My heart pounded. I stood frozen, dropping my toothbrush. I peered out and saw nothing. The hallway was empty. I crept to the living room, my bare feet cold on the tile, but there was no sign of her. I decided then that it was a dream, a trick of the heat and the moon.

But the next morning, I found the cord again. It was coiled neatly on the kitchen table, as if someone had left it for me. My grandmother, stirring a pot of oatmeal, didn’t seem to notice it. I picked it up. It was warm, almost alive, and it hummed faintly, like a distant mosquito. I felt a sudden urge to wrap it around my wrist. I did, and it fit perfectly. I wore it the rest of the day, feeling its gentle pulse.

That night, I saw her again. I was in the hallway, heading to the bathroom, and she was standing at the far end, illuminated by the nightlight. This time, she faced me fully. Her skin was the color of old parchment, stretched tight over sharp bones. Her eyes were pools of black, and her mouth moved as if she were speaking, but no sound came out. In her hands, she held a cord—similar to mine, but frayed, unraveling at the ends. She began to unravel it, pulling threads loose, and as she did, I felt a tug at my wrist. My cord was tightening, digging into my skin.

I screamed, and my grandmother rushed in. By the time she arrived, the woman was gone. My grandmother grew pale, but she said only that I had a vivid imagination. She made me take off the cord, but I hid it in my pocket.

Over the next week, the cord never left me. I tied it around my ankle, my waist, even my neck, but always it found its way back to my wrist. And each night, I saw the woman, unraveling her cord, and I felt mine growing shorter. My skin began to feel loose, as if it were slipping off my bones. My grandmother noticed and took me to a local healer, a Yaqui woman named Rosa.

Rosa was ancient, with deep lines in her face and eyes that seemed to see through you. She took one look at my cord and gasped. ‘That is a soul cord,’ she said. ‘It connects you to life. But it has been frayed. A spirit is pulling at it, trying to break it so she can steal your remaining years.’ She told me the woman was a ‘chupadora de almas,’ a soul-eater, who had died in this house decades ago, desperate to regain the life she lost to a plague.

Rosa performed a ceremony that night. She burned sage and chanted, and as the smoke filled the room, I saw the woman again, more clearly than ever. She was furious, her mouth open in a silent scream, and she yanked on the cord. I felt a sharp pain, and the cord snapped. I fell to the floor, gasping for air. But Rosa was quick. She grabbed the broken ends and tied them together, knotting them tightly. ‘Now she cannot take you,’ she said.

The next morning, the cord was gone. My skin felt whole again, and the house seemed brighter. But Rosa warned me: ‘She will find other ways. The unraveling is a pattern, and it will repeat until she is stopped.’ She gave me a small talisman, a piece of obsidian, and told me to keep it with me always.

I left Pinal a few days later, and for years, I thought it was over. But now, at seventeen, I sometimes see the woman in my peripheral vision, always in a white gown, always holding a frayed cord. And I feel my own self slowly coming apart—my emotions, my memories, my sense of who I am. I know she’s still pulling, unraveling me thread by thread, waiting for the final break. And I fear that one day, I’ll find that cord coiled on my nightstand, hums softly, remade and waiting.

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