The Third Breath

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"I settled into the worn armchair by the window, the comforting glow of my laptop the only light in the drafty cabin. The fire had dwindled to embers, casting long shadows that danced with the flickering flames. My dog, a loyal border collie named Rusty, lay curled on the rug beside me, his rhythmic snoring […]"

I settled into the worn armchair by the window, the comforting glow of my laptop the only light in the drafty cabin. The fire had dwindled to embers, casting long shadows that danced with the flickering flames. My dog, a loyal border collie named Rusty, lay curled on the rug beside me, his rhythmic snoring a familiar lullaby. I was browsing through online listings, hoping to sell an old typewriter I’d found at an estate sale, when I noticed a subtle change in Rusty’s breathing. It was deeper, more pronounced, as if he were panting after a long run, though he hadn’t moved an inch. I shrugged it off, attributing it to a dream, and returned to my screen.

A few minutes passed, and the sound grew more insistent. I paused, my fingers hovering over the keyboard. Rusty was still fast asleep, but the breathing was louder now, closer. It seemed to come from the foot of my bed, which was a few feet behind me. I laughed nervously, thinking I was just tired, but the sound didn’t stop. It was a steady, calm rhythm, as if someone were standing there, watching me. I turned my head slowly, but the room was too dark to see anything beyond a few feet. The only light came from my laptop, casting a pale halo on the desk.

Suddenly, a cold dread crept up my spine. I realized there were three distinct breathing sounds in the room: Rusty’s, mine, and a third. The third was at the foot of the bed, a normal, unhurried cadence, like a person waiting patiently. My heart began to pound, but I forced myself to stay calm. I whispered, ‘Rusty, wake up,’ but he didn’t stir. I pinched my arm, slapped my cheek, and punched my thigh, but the pain confirmed I was awake.

I held my breath, counting silently. I heard two distinct breaths: Rusty’s and the other. Mine was held. I let out a shaky exhale and breathed in again, this time counting more carefully. Two breaths, unmistakably. Rusty’s soft snore, and the steady inhale-exhale from the foot of the bed. I tried to convince myself it was a draft, or the old cabin settling, but the rhythm was too human.

Panic clawed at my throat. I wanted to scream, but my voice caught. I fumbled for the flashlight on my nightstand, my hands trembling. I clicked it on and swept the beam across the room. The light revealed nothing but the dusty floorboards, the faded quilt, and Rusty still asleep. But as the beam passed the foot of the bed, I saw a faint distortion in the air, like heat shimmer, but cold. It was barely visible, a slight bend of light, as if something was there, breathing, occupying space.

I froze, the flashlight trembling in my hand. The breathing continued, unhurried, as if it had all the time in the world. I tried to speak, but my voice was a hoarse whisper. ‘Who’s there?’

No answer. Just the breathing.

I backed away, slowly, keeping the light trained on the spot. Rusty finally stirred, lifting his head, his ears perked. He let out a low growl, but it was confused, as if he sensed something but couldn’t see it. The breathing stopped for a moment, then resumed, closer now, right at the edge of the bed.

I backed into the wall, my heart racing. The flashlight beam wavered, casting wild shadows. I saw a faint outline forming in the darkness, a shape that was almost human, but not quite. It was as if the air itself was condensing into a figure, translucent, featureless. It took a step forward, and the floorboards creaked softly.

I turned and ran for the door, Rusty at my heels. I burst into the cold night, not stopping until I reached my truck. I drove to the nearest town, twenty miles away, and checked into a motel. I spent the night with the lights on, Rusty whining at my feet.

I never returned to the cabin. The next day, I hired someone to pack my things and sell the property. But even now, months later, I still hear that third breath sometimes, in the quiet moments before sleep, at the foot of my bed, waiting patiently for me to come back.

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