The Stillness in Room 14

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"I have always prided myself on being a rational person, someone who trusts in the tangible and the explicable. Even after my father’s strange tales of the old lighthouse, I remained a skeptic. But last Tuesday, I crossed a line I never knew existed, and I have not been the same since. It was my […]"

I have always prided myself on being a rational person, someone who trusts in the tangible and the explicable. Even after my father’s strange tales of the old lighthouse, I remained a skeptic. But last Tuesday, I crossed a line I never knew existed, and I have not been the same since.

It was my final semester at Merrow University, and I had taken a part-time job as a night porter at the Grand Meridian Hotel, a sprawling Victorian relic that had seen better decades. My shift began at 11 p.m., and the hotel, mostly empty save for a few long-term residents, felt like a museum of forgotten lives. I spent most nights patrolling the corridors, checking the fire exits, and reading in the small office behind the lobby.

That night, a storm had rolled in from the sea, rattling the windows and sending drafts through the old building. I was dozing off in the office armchair when a small, insistent thumping sound came from above. It was rhythmic, like a heartbeat, and it seemed to be coming from room 14, on the third floor. The room had been vacant for years, its key hanging on the board in the lobby, covered in dust.

I should have ignored it. But curiosity, that cat that killed the cat, got the better of me. I took the master key, an old brass thing with a worn stem, and climbed the creaking stairs. The corridor was dim, with only a few flickering sconces casting uncertain light. The thumping grew louder as I approached room 14. It was not a frantic knock; it was a steady, slow beat, as if something inside was alive.

I pressed my ear to the door. The wood was cold, and the thumping seemed to vibrate through it directly into my skull. I heard something else, too: a low, guttural sound, like a growl underwater. I should have walked away. Instead, I turned the key, and the lock clicked open with a sound that seemed too loud in the silence.

The door swung inward, and the room was pitch black. The smell hit me first: a mix of brine and rot, like the bottom of a boat that had been dragged up from the deep. I fumbled for the light switch, and when the overhead bulb flickered on, I saw something that erased every rational thought I had ever had.

The bed was covered in black, slick seaweed-like strands that were slowly, almost imperceptibly, writhing. In the center of the bed, there was a body shaped like a man, but its skin was bloated and gray, and its arms were too long, stretching toward the walls. Its face was turned away from me, but I could see gills open and close on the side of its neck. It was breathing. And the thumping sound was coming from its chest.

The body did not move. It just lay there, breathing, thumping. I stood frozen, my hand still on the light switch, my heart hammering. I wanted to run, but my legs were numb. The creature then rolled its head slowly toward me, and I saw its eyes: they were thin, vertical slits, like a snake’s, and they were filled with a deep, oily blackness. It looked at me, and I felt a cold hand close around my mind, trying to pull me toward it.

I managed to stumble backward into the hall, slamming the door shut. I didn’t wait to lock it. I ran down the stairs, my footsteps echoing like gunshots. The storm seemed to mock me with a peal of thunder. I burst into the lobby, gasping, and collapsed in the armchair.

The thumping continued above for the rest of the night. I didn’t move from that chair. My mind raced, trying to find an explanation, but none came. I called the manager, Mr. Aldridge, but he only chuckled and said, ‘Room 14 is just old pipes, lad. Go home in the morning, get some rest.’

I didn’t go home to sleep. I waited in the lobby, watching the door, until the pale dawn broke. When the sun rose, I mustered the courage to walk up to the third floor again. The door to room 14 was slightly ajar. I pushed it open, expecting to see the horrors of the night, but the room was empty. The bed was stripped, the mattress clean. There was no seaweed, no creature, no smell. The room was just a normal, musty hotel room.

I told the manager about what I had seen, but he dismissed me with a wave of his hand. ‘You had a nightmare, son. The storm plays tricks on the mind.’ But I knew what I saw. And I knew that something in that room had been waiting for a visitor, and it had chosen me.

Now, every night, I lie in my small apartment, staring at my ceiling, listening for that rhythmic thumping. I have not slept properly since that Tuesday. I keep a knife beneath my pillow, but I doubt it would help. Because I can still see those slit-like eyes, and I can still feel that cold presence, somewhere in the dark, waiting. And I know, with a certainty that chills me to the bone, that the stillness in that room was never really still. It was just waiting for me to look away.

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