The Stick and the Stare

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"We arrived at Uncle Theo’s place in the middle of a heatwave, the gravel crunching under our tires like bones. The house was modern, all pale wood and glass, but it sat on land that felt older than time. My friends—Jules, Marcus, and Lena—unloaded their bags while I helped Theo, my grandfather’s friend, bring in […]"

We arrived at Uncle Theo’s place in the middle of a heatwave, the gravel crunching under our tires like bones. The house was modern, all pale wood and glass, but it sat on land that felt older than time. My friends—Jules, Marcus, and Lena—unloaded their bags while I helped Theo, my grandfather’s friend, bring in groceries. He was a wiry man with skin like cracked leather and eyes that seemed to measure you. That first evening, we sat on the porch, watching the sugar cane sway in the breeze. Theo pointed to a distant hill. ‘Cannonball tree’s over there. They used to hang deserters from its branches.’ I laughed, but no one else did.

The next day, Theo put us to work. He had a farm, but not the kind with cows and chickens—he grew a strange, sweet-smelling crop we’d never seen before, with broad leaves that whispered when the wind passed. We weeded and watered, and at noon we ate under a makeshift awning. Theo got quiet, then started talking about the old wars. ‘My people, the Ngati Hine, they fought the British here. Right where we’re sitting.’ He scooped a handful of soil. ‘The ground drank so much blood, it turned bitter. We don’t plant certain things in that patch.’ Lena asked if he’d seen anything. Theo’s jaw tightened. ‘The war’s not over. It just waits.’

That night, we heard a noise outside—a rhythmic tapping, like a stick on the wooden porch. I looked out the window and saw a small shape in the field, moving between the rows. It was a child, maybe six, with wild hair that looked almost silver in the moonlight. It held a stick and whacked at the crops, sending leaves flying. Theo stormed out, shouting, but the child didn’t run. It just stared at him, its eyes too dark, too still. His three dogs—huge, ugly mastiffs—barked and lunged, but the child didn’t flinch. They were chained to posts, and the child stood just beyond their reach, as if it knew the limits. Theo threw a rock, and the child finally walked away, but it never turned its back, just stepped sideways into the cane.

We went to bed uneasy. I couldn’t sleep, so I crept to the kitchen for water. I saw Theo at the window, holding a lantern. ‘It’s out there again,’ he said, his voice flat. I looked. The child was closer, right at the edge of the porch, near the biggest dog. The dog was silent now, watching the child like it was prey. The child raised its stick and pointed it at the dog, and the dog whined and slunk back into its kennel. Theo’s hands shook. ‘It’s not a child,’ he said. ‘It’s a taniwha. The ground here remembers.’

On the third night, we decided to catch it. Jules and Marcus took flashlights and went into the field. Lena and I stayed with Theo, who sat in a chair, gripping a rifle he’d brought from his bedroom. The tapping came from all sides, like a circle of sticks drumming the soil. Then a voice—a child’s laugh, high and broken, like wind through a hollow bone. The tapping stopped. We heard Marcus scream. We ran out. Marcus was on his knees, his face pale, pointing at a gnarly old tree at the edge of the field. Under it was a mound of dirt, and sticking out of the dirt was a small hand, grey and withered, clutching a stick. Theo swore and started digging. He found the body of a child, preserved like a mummy, dressed in rough European clothes. ‘A deserter’s child,’ Theo whispered. ‘They hung the father, but the child ran. They shot it right here, and buried it shallow.’ The stick in its hand was carved with strange symbols.

We tried to leave that night, but the car wouldn’t start. The engine turned over, then died. The battery was fine, the fuel gauge on half. Theo just stood by the door, shaking his head. ‘It won’t let us go. It wants us to see.’ We waited in the living room, huddled together, listening to the tap-tap-tap against the window. The child was outside, staring in at us, its mouth open in a silent scream. Then it raised its stick and tapped the glass three times. The lights flickered and went out. In the dark, we heard the chains clank, and the dogs began to howl—not a bark, but a high, fearful wail. Then the tapping came from inside the house, moving room to room, like the child was walking through the walls.

Morning came, but the light was wrong—pale and watery, as if the sun couldn’t fully reach the land. We found the dogs dead, strangled by their own chains. Theo was gone. His rifle lay on the porch, unfired. We searched and found him under the cannonball tree, kneeling where we’d dug up the child. He was motionless, staring at nothing, and when we got closer we saw a single red mark on his neck, like a tiny bite. He was breathing, but his eyes were empty. Lena noticed the stick was missing. Then we heard a laugh from the direction of the house. The child was standing on the porch, holding Theo’s rifle, pointing it at us with its impossible eyes. It raised the stick—it had taken the rifle, but the stick was still in its other hand—and tapped the ground. The earth began to tremble.

We ran, leaving Theo behind. We reached the main road and flagged down a truck. The driver said he’d never heard of a farm this way, and the map showed a vast empty stretch. But we saw the house in the distance, growing smaller, and a tiny figure at the gate, still watching. I have not told anyone the full truth. But sometimes, at night, I hear a tapping on my window. And when I look out, I see a small shape standing in the shadows, stick in hand, and behind it, rows of sugar cane swaying as if in a breeze, though the air is still.

We moved, all of us, different cities. But three months later, Jules called me, hysterical. He said he saw the same child in his apartment complex yard, tapping a stick on a tree. He said the child smiled at him and raised the stick like a salute. Then the line went dead. I haven’t heard from Jules since. Marcus has gone off the grid. Lena won’t answer my calls. I am writing this as evidence, in case something happens to me. The tape on my recorder, when I played it back, caught a faint sound—a child’s voice, speaking in a language I didn’t know, but I felt it in my bones: a death rattle, a promise. The land remembers. And it wants us to pay.

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